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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, M. L. Cooke

First off, I was excited to see this as I was a huge fan of the Warriors book series!
I really enjoyed your chapters and I thought it was very well done. I like your attention to detail as well as the names you have made. I can feel the spirit of the books in it. Excellent job on this! I will be excited to read more!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!
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Review of spineless  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, AJ Royall
I really liked this piece, the title caught my eye immediately. It had nice imagery, and a good flow to it. Everything looks good and neat!
Keep up the good writing work and I hope you have a lovely evening!

Welcome to WDC!!
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Review of Fly Free  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Angelina Wilson
I really liked the motivation behind this piece and I felt what you were trying to do.
I especially liked the last stanza. I do think you could add in some punctuation.
Excellent job!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!
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Review of Game Models  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Jeffhans

First off, I really like the idea you have and would love to see it as a real thing. It would be very cool to see. This was very well written and made for a very interesting read. Thank you for sharing a great idea with us!

Keep up the good work and I hope you have a good day!
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Review of Illustrations  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, George Adams !

I really enjoyed this story! It was well written, a good length, and I liked your main character. The idea behind the story was a good one and I would love to see more of her life.

Keep up the great work and have a good day!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review of Writing Prompt  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, Cinnamon Roll !!

I really liked this prompt and I can definitely imagine writing something off of it. I love seeing people give this things like this to help other writers along when they need it. Great idea!


Welcome to WDC!
Keep up the great work!
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Review of Goldfish  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*Jackolantern* Hello, there! *Jackolantern*
This is a very interesting piece. It shows a nice perspective of what it would be like if we had such short memory spans. I think it would be a neat experience. I espcially enjopyed the third stanza. Great job on this!

Keep up the lovely work and have a nice day!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review of The Dark Side  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Jackolantern* Hello, there! *Jackolantern*

I think this perfectly sums up what a little girl is like. I really enjoyed your descriptions and how you talked about how it would be tough but worth it. Great job on this piece!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!
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Review of The Letter  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Jackolantern* Hello, there!! *Jackolantern* \

Wow! This was a fantastic piece and I greatly enjoyed reading it! I like the story you tell and its nicely written. I especially enjoyed the sixth and seventh stanzas.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review of The Keys  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
*Jackolantern*Hello, there! *Jackolantern*
This is a really nice piece! I like your theme and the four main words you did. It reads nicely, however I would add in some punctuation to it. Great job overall thought!

*Jackolantern*Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!*Jackolantern*
This is thewriterwitch signing off!
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Review of Contrary Heart  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello, there!! Wow! I really enjoyed this piece! I love the way it flows and the reflections I get from it. I especially liked the second stanza, it spoke to me the most. Great job on this item!

*Jackolantern*Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!*Jackolantern*
This is thewriterwitch signing off!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, there!!! Wow. I loved this piece. It gave me a few chills! It is well written and reads well, I don't see any errors. Your descriptions were on point as well, your ending words were nice as well.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!!!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review of My Entry  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, there!! I really enjoyed this story! It was well written and nicely structured!!!I also thought your main character was fantastic and well written!! Good job on this item !!!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!!!
Welcome to WDC!!!
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Review of Dream  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, there!! Wow! This is an awesome piece. I like the flow and the set up if it. It makes it very easy to read. I like your story as well, and it's well written. Great job on this!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!!!
Welcome to WDC!!!!
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Review of shade of life  
Review by Thewriterwitch
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, there! I like this poem a lot but it needs a little work. I liked your descriptions as well. I see a lot of capitalization that is needed and some punctuation. I think if this poem was in a different form that it would read easier. Overall it was a good piece.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello, there!! I really enjoyed this story! It is well written and easy to follow. I liked your descriptions and characters as well. The ending was also well done. Also I like your handle! Great job!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!
Welcome to WDC!!
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Review of 001  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, there!! I really enjoyed this piece. It has a nice flow to it. I did see two "I" that needs to be capitalized. And you might could also add in some punctuation. Great job thought!

Keep up the lovely work and have a great day!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review of the wolf  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, there! I greatly enjoyed this piece. As a lover of wolves, I think your visuals are great. The flow is nice and I really liked the story you told. It was very well written.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
This is Kat signing off.
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Review of Musical Beat  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello, there!! Wow! I really liked this piece!!! It reads very nicely and is well written!! I really enjoyed the fifth stanza as well!!!!Great job on this piece!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, there!! I really liked this piece!! It's nicely written and I can enjoy it as I am a fan of most of your references. I especially liked the Pokemon reference.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello, there!! Wow! Absolutely great piece here!! It's very well written and speaks a lot of truth. It seems well though out as well. And that makes all the difference. Great job!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!!
Welcome to WDC!
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Review of Signs of Life  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hell, there!!! Really nice piece you have here. I enjoyed your descriptions as they proved quite accurate. I really liked the second stanza, for those are all things we truly need. Great job!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!!!
This is Kat signing off..
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello, there!! Wow. This was an intense piece to read. It rings extremely true though. That ending sentence got me though. Absolutely great job on this!!!!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!!!
Welcome to WDC!!!
This is Kat signing off...
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Review of Waiting  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hello, there!!! I really enjoyed reading your piece. It stood at to me from the start. You might could add some punctuation though. Great job on this!!!

Keep up the good work and have a lovely day!!!
Welcome to WDC!
This is Kat signing off...
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Review of Nautical Voyage  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello!!!!! Great piece here!! I really like your descriptions and the length of the poem. You could add in some punctuation though. I really enjoyed reading this!!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!!
This is Kat signing off..
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