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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello,there!!!
Ah! Such a beautiful thought this poem brings. Fall is my favorite time of the year and this instantly made me think of it. The sound of the leaves when you step on them is my favorite thing.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there!

I had a lot fun reading this story!! It flows well, and I like that you have it broken up into little parts. It makes the read much easier. You've did a great job on this story!!

Welcome to WDC!!
Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
I was instantly pulled in and was happy it was a long story!! It reads nicely and is a very cute little story!
I think this would make an excellent children’s book! You could have some good illustrations with it. Great job!!

Welcome to WDC!!
Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
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Review of Internal Path  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there!!!!
I like how this piece is short but it flows very well and is easy to read. You paint a good image along with it. I think everyone has that determination to reach the sky in the way you refer to it. Excellent job!

Welcome to WDC!!
Keep up the work and have an excellent day!
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Review of Guilt  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!!!
Great story you have here!! I was instantly drawn in and it read easy and smooth. You have a good beginning and a strong ending which are both very important!!! I don’t see any errors! Excellent job!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!!

Great story here!! The description caught my eye and I wasn't disappointed!!
Everything looks good and reads well. Good ending to it as well.

Welcome to WDC!
Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello there!!!

I love this piece very much! I wasn't expecting it to be this long but I'm happy it was. It reads so smoothly and paints a beautiful picture. I especially love the sixth stanza! The meaning of the poem has a lot of truth to it and it is said it such a good way.

Welcome to WDC!
Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
I really enjoyed this piece, and I love the picture you paint. And it also holds a very important message too. Great job on this one!!!

Keep up the great work and have a good day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello there!!!

As a strong lover of anything horror, I was instantly sucked into this poem on the first few lines. I love your descriptions of the characters and I think they're very accurate. Especially the one about Jason because he was always my fan favorite.
Thank you for this great read! I enjoyed it greatly.

Have a great day and keep up the great work!
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Review of The Escape  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there!!

I like this poem quite a lot, I've always loved the ocean and this is a very good description of it. I love the lines about it making you feel like Poseidon, very good choice there. I do think you need some punctuation and to space some of the lines out. That would help it flow much better.

Welcome to WDC!
Keep up the great work and have a good day!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello there!!

I was instantly sucked into this story, it has a good start and sometimes that's the most important part. The rest of the story was just as good, especially the ending.
I do think it would be better if the script was a little bigger, it just makes it a little difficult to read. But otherwise than that I see no errors, everything looks good!

Keep up the good work and have a good day!
Welcome to WDC!!
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Review of Haunted?  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!!!
I love this piece!! I like how you have a question mark with the title, it adds a nice touch! The poem flows well and has such a nice rhythm to it!! Excellent work here!!!

Welcome to WDC!!
Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
This was an interesting read!! Different from what I bought it would be but I really enjoyed it! It makes me wonder if animals enjoy these kinds of things as much as humans do! It was well written as well!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
Welcome to WDC!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
Well, this was an interesting ride, I was expecting something different but I like what I got!! Very unique idea here! But it was written well, and it made me laugh so good job!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
And welcome to WDC!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
I really enjoyed this piece! You had a good idea and you write it well. I imagine trying to buy food in a language you didn't know would be very difficult. I did notice at the end where it says 'thats' it should say ' that's'.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
And welcome to WDC!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!!
I absolutely love this piece!! I've always been fascinated with this era and you captured it very well!!! It reads easy and kept me hooked from start to finish! Your characters were strong and well depicted.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hello there!!

I really really liked this chapter, it kept me hooked the whole time and it reads very easy. You've got a good start here to an excellent novel or book of you keep it up! I didn't really see any errors, everything looked in order!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review of Check and Mate  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!!
This is a excellent story!! I was hooked from ge beginning and loved the ending. I love the idea of this extremely intricate chess game. I love chess myself. It reads very well and some parts actually rhyme as poems do. Your characters were well described.

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!!
This is a very happy poem and seems to sweet but the end made it a bit sad. Beautifully written and it reads well. It's a tragedy to lose a mother, and nothing can replace it. But this is a good tribute!❤️

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!!
Lovely piece, and all very true statements. We need more poetry like this!!! Beautifully worded, though I do see a few grammar errors here and there!
But great job overall!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello there!! A nice piece overall, it flows well and reads easy. I did see a few errors such as a little bit of capitalization and I think on the third stanza 'its' needs to be 'it's' and 'theirs' needs to be 'there's'.

Keep up the great work and have a good day!!
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Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!! A very long piece but well worth the read, a beautiful story with plenty of turns to keep you hooked. It was a magical read for sure!! I see no grammar errors, everything looked good. I greatly enjoyed this piece!!!!

Keep up the amazing work!!!!
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Review of Farm Life  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there!!!

I absolutely love this piece!!!
The rhyme is nice and flows very well. I can imagine a nice little farm in such few lines. I see no errors anywhere!!

Welcome to WDC!!!!
Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!

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Review of Twister  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello there!!

Lovely piece you have here!!!!! The descriptions are very vivid and I can almost picture the whole scene. You might want to add some punctuation in there but other than that I don't see any problems.

Welcome to WDC!
Keep up the great work and have a great day!!

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Review of The Yoda Lamp  
Review by Thewriterwitch
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello there!!

Such a fun and happy piece!!!! It flows nice and is very well written. I am a huge Star Wars fan so this title caught my eye. I just want to know if the character gets the lamp!!!

Keep up the great work and have a lovely day!!

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