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Review of FLIGHT TO FREEDOM  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
This writer laid out a beautiful path and I followed his footsteps to the ultimate American dream
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Review of The Journey  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I enjoyed this very much. I felt sorry for Sam she should have stuck to her first idea (why leave paradise). Most times peer pressure leads to a bad ending. I like stories about the very last step, it opens the mind to an endless journey.

I like your way with words and looking forward to reading more of your work

Geoff
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Review of Lucky At Cards  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great story great dialogue great pace I could smell the gunfire my man

Geoff
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Review of Just for Men  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Youth is not all that it's crack up too be. Great job I like your way with words

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great job a few words can say a lot
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Review of Vices  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I liked this. It took about three quarters of the way through the story before I understood the reality of the story. Before that my imagination was running wild, I like that in a read. The pace was great and the characters visually appeared in my minds eye. Good job looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Driven  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Another story very well done. The way to the top can be a dirty business. Your way with words is visually stimulating.

Geoff
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Review of Backwards  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great job. I was raised on a dairy farm. The description was so realistic I could smell the manure. The development of the characters can only come from the imagination of a witness. I like your way with words. I have a couple of short stories in my port that I know you will like. "Summer of 55". "Jake (The Boy )". "The Bench"

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Busted  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very good. The end is a great surprise.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You painted a picture with your words. I could feel the dampness of the forest as I to witnessed the unfolding story with the laughing bird.

Great job, looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Secure  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Like this. Maybe if you stop looking so hard, it will find you...

Geoff
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Review of The Eavesdropper  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Well done. Never, has a very good chance at profit, secrets kept or secrets exposed can both make for a good business plan.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Great job. Maddening pace. In the the fog of war some get lost within their own mind.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

I have a short story in my port stomping through the same subject "love Adam"

Geoff
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Review of Picture a curve.  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jack, wow, to love a woman is to understand a simple curve can make your imagination run wild. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of For Honor's Sake  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great job, I understood who these people were as they tried to work things out. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of American Reality  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Very good job. The truths within the time we live sadden me. But I don't despair. I see our future as a glass not half full and not half empty. The glass I see is over flowing with hope.

Looking forward to visiting your port and reading more of your work

Geoff
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Review of THE SINGING PIGS  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Absolutely wonderful

Looking forward to reading more of your work

Geoff
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Review of Love and Betrayal  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great job. I want to read more about these two. The first step in a story is the most important. Looking forward to reading more, I will be visiting your port.

Thanks for the read

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Everybody has an opinion. When people don't like my way with words a just figure they are not hip enough to dig me.

Take a look at "CRITIQUE" also "THE HANGMAN"

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Lisa, love your style. This story turned my tears into joy. I have been busy but am looking forward to stopping by your port and catch up.

Geoff
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Review of BOUNDING HOME  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
D R, I am still a big fan my man. Been busy I will stop by your port and catch up.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a story about hope. It just goes to show that dreams can come true. Great job with per fact pace. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.

Geoff
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Review of You're The Judge  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Kat, even the most irresistible girl in the world can let a jerk sneak into a heart looking to releave the pain of loneliness.

Kat, look out the window you sit by. Look again there it is another dream, good luck.

Looking forward to enjoying more of your words.

Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
As a sailor I think your words can ride out any storm. Good job looking forward to reading more of your work.

I have a very short story in my port that I think you will enjoy"TALL TALE"

Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.

Geoff
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Review of The Little Jockey  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice job. I had those same little boy dreams. The first half of my life was spent breaking, riding and training race horses. Not only can I talk to horses but also understand them. I have some sort stories in my port "Jake" that I think you will like. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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