|Kat, even the most irresistible girl in the world can let a jerk sneak into a heart looking to releave the pain of loneliness.
Kat, look out the window you sit by. Look again there it is another dream, good luck.
Looking forward to enjoying more of your words.
Sorry I can't help with editing. I can't spell, and don't know the difference between a dangling participle and a question mark. All I am is a dreamer with a way with words that I personally enjoy.