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Review of Monster  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was a great job. I can not help with spelling and things like that.

This story is a window on how just one event even just one word can turn the kindness and the dreams of a sweet child into something.........

I have read some of your other work and I am a fan

Geoff
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Review of The Ocean  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the Sea and I can tell by this line that you can understand why.

"The ocean sings the blues,
its many tales untold,
with a voice fading
into the wrinkles of sand."

If you have the time check out my stories.

SHIP WRECK AT HOLE IN THE WALL & TALL TALE

I think you will like them.

Geoff
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Review of The Hitchhiker  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Man, oh man, oh man. WOW, GREAT, PACE You put the whole package together. 10 STARS

One thing take out the prompt "Sometimes the right person wins" because I knew the ending and I wished I didn't.

I WILL read all your stuff. This was a very, very cool job.

Thanks for the read,

Geoff
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Review of Aahana-Prologue  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very good job, I enjoyed this. You have a dream like style.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review of Rat Wars  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Dave, I am a transplant from the ranch to the city.
I have a many of mile on horse back. I my youth I made my living climbing on horses backs when they still had the wild in their eyes. I trained race horses for years.

I have a RAT story that I know you will like. Its in my port "CRITIQUE". Dave I know the work is never done on a ranch but take time to read this, you will get a real kick out of it. No brag,just fact.

Geoff
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Review of The Funeral  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy Boy, what can I say. I am a fan. This was a great job and the ending was quick enough to cause a shock.

I remember when Grandma died and I saw Pop cry for the first time, you put my thoughts into words.

I have been reading your work and your batting a thousand my man.

Thanks for the reads

Geoff
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Review of The End Of Brucie  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yea, sure you did. Don't feel to bad the little punk had it coming.

Cool read my man.

Geoff
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Review of Sailor's Heart  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good job Mate, I be a sailor myself, well really an Army guy that likes to sail. The waiting is always hard for the ones we leave behind.

Take a look at the story "TALL TALE" in my port, I think you will like it. Also you might want to take a look at "CHRISTMAS JULY 1969" it won the Honor the Vets contest.

Thanks for the read, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
EE, You covered all the bases with style.
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Billy, thanks for the goof my man.

Is this your joke?

"I told this girl I wanted her first-born child, but it was such an ugly baby, the girl wouldn’t even breast feed it. She said she only liked it as a friend."

You did a good job here , but you know that.

Did you hear the one about the joke writer that wasn't funny.

He blamed it on writer's block.

Geoff
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Review of Peach-Furry Bliss  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Great start,looking forward to reading more.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great job, look forward to reading more.

Geoff
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Review of Holiday Nitemare  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Duke, Powerful, as a father this story broke my heart. A split second of luck is all that keeps most of us from the ultimate nightmare.

You did a great job leading me down a painful path. I was hoping for a happy ending but I had a bad feeling through out that wasn't going to happen

Thanks

Geoff

Geoff
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Review of A SOLDIER'S DREAM  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Mom, Great job you did with these words. Freedom is God's greatest gift. For those who give their lives the reward
is for always to find comfort in God's warm embrace.

Thanks

Geoff
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Review of TWILIGHT HAUNTING  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Dark stuff,Mom. I think a story in there. Its made my imagination run wild.

Thanks for the chilly thrill.

Geoff
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Review of Kindness Rules!  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to the new world. We have good old days to remember what kind of world will those kids grow up in.

We all have to do what ever we can to turn this around. The first step in fixing a problem is to know we have one. I am going to do my best.

Good luck

Geoff
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Review of The Lost Child  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
My friend I am from the school of very hard knocks and I am crying. These words weep from your mind's eye that has lived with pain. I am so glad that this has a happy ending other wise I would have been sick about this all day. The little time you had with your child can never be replaced. You can take pride in that even with the shell your little girl knew she was deeply loved. You did a great job with her DAD.

Look forward to reading more of your work; if I can take it. A writer who can bear his soul like this is very talented.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like this very much. I felt like this little girls father watching her every move, while keeping out of site.

If you are not really a five year old you did a great job of writing what was going on in her mind.

Thanks again for the wonderful read. I lokk forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
FA, you did not have to say anything. I thought you made your point with style.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (5.0)
God's greatest given to his chrildren is our hearts.

Thank you for this story of hope.

Geoff
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Review of Women of today.  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Good luck to her. When women are free to offer their dreams and become an equal, the burtality of their country's customs takes a back seat. History has shown us that men left to rule alone makes for a very unpleasent life.

We can only hope that all woman of the world will some day have their say.

Thanks for the read. I am looking forward to reading more of your stuff.

Geoff
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Review of The Sea  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Dark, great job. You captured a woman's love and pain.

I felt like I was standing on the cliff with her. I still have the chill in my bones. I am a sailor and and enjoy all stories that have to do with the sea.

Take a look at my Port I have a short story (less than 1000 words) called Tall Tale I think you will like.

Thanks again for the read. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Geoff
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Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: E | (4.5)
You are going to be alright Kid.
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Review of His Mother's Eyes  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, the eyes have it buddy.

When I grow up I want to be a writer just like you.

Very, very cool my man.

Geoff
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Review of The Uninvited Hat  
Review by GEOFFREY ROBSON
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Billy there are so many great lines in this story I don't even know how to review it.

I don't find many lines that I wish were mine; but.

"He rubbed at his truly enormous nose that fell out of his face like a rotting pear,"

Oh man, that one should be carved in stone somewhere.

Geoff
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