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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your item because I seen that this is your one year anniversary.You are either a new member or you have been here with us a year or longer with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Thank you for being a part of our group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" and a member of Writing.Com. Most of all *ConfettiP*congratulation!*ConfettiP*.

I have seen "A Poem A Day Contest "  get alot of exposure here on Writing.Com. The Poem A Day has a nice format. The rules are easy to understand and I like the choice of WritingML you use beside each rule. Why does it have to be 40 lines? But if it was a very short poem than it wouldn't be much of a poem to comprehend.*rolleye* I like the idea behind the poem rules and how the format of the rules is set up.



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Review of Consequences  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi, I found your item because I seen that this is your one year anniversary.You are either a new member or you have been here with us a year or longer with "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Thank you for being a part of our group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" and a member of Writing.Com. Most of all *ConfettiP*congratulation!*ConfettiP*

I see your item has a ribbion. Looking at your item I seeing what in your item makes it get a ribbion *Smile*. I liked the comprehending aspect of being able to read something short and it has a clear message. I can tell that your last line "No one leaves me and makes it away alive" is the best line and probably why it is that it was awarded with a ribbion. Overall, liked that the last line was the supporting statement for the whole passage.



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Review by Tina M. Courtney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Seriously, that is so sad. The passage about the dog was good. Even made me think if I could take Smokey everywhere.
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Review of Angry Elk Attack  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
Rated: E | (4.5)
You provide information as if I was one that was there. Nah, I don't think I want to be me with a one on one with the bull. This is good information to add with the passages.
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Review of My Favorite Bison  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very cute. Where is the author current pic to go with your current static items? You have so many of them it would be so good if you had one to show you as the writer.*Wink*
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What my family and I had learned from watching PBS channel 13 public ,educational casting on air, is Pythons are heavy snakes and can kill a person not the force of their wight and squeeze, but by the constiction and causing blood flow to stop the heart. I like the name Big Momma and that you mentioned she was 300lbs. My question is that after they Anthony was helping getting Big Momma out of the swamp how is it possiable for any snake to bit possiably even with the teeths in the back of their mouths? I also really liked how you mention that snakes can be beautiful at the ending of your story. The part where you described Big Momma moving her skin would have brown rings that you could see through her shiny dark skin and it was like liquid glass flowing. That last part was a nice touch.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.

It was interesting to know after reviewing ""Gasp!"" that is supported your following passage here: "I promptly returned to the North Charleston Police Department, and managed to pull and push the empty old trap into the parking lot."*Wink*- The item "I have to make jokes on somebody "  was easy to understand did enjoy hearing how the fire-fighter helped you out of the cage.




Sincerely Tina,

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Review of "Gasp!"  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasant for me. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.

You explained well that your friend doesn't want you to bring an alligator. Does the audience not want you to bring an alligator in to town as you have with your animals? If so, why is it that they are this particular. Explain in depth details in the passage and it can add more as well emphasis's the passage better. Other than, this was an entertaining story and the purpose to be entertaining was seen.




Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Dog Gone  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Sometimes it is good just to speak from the dog prospective in order to relate to the audience. I felt like you did so in the first passage. Check for errors in second passage. all I could thik about where we headed and how I would die! I cried. Check this sentence also. "these people clean with burns the pads " Yes, the passage is effective to readers. I feel the message here will be shared. On a personal note: We have several cats wich my Dad would not consider not ever feeding them. And yes, cats and dogs are just like kids and humans.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, my name is Tina. I'm part of a reviewing group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  learning how to enhance my writing skills and also learn to give good reviews in the process. I found your creative story here on Writing.Com on random read and would like to comment on your item.
First off, I would like to thank you for letting me have the oppurtunity to read over your item.
Categories I look for in a story is the narrator, character, place and setting, emotional reaction, plots, and did characters mentioned in story move in the story.

Great subtitle. Can you go over this sentence-"We have dealt with plenty of someone’s rough training mistakes, and some mules may never be trusted." and tell us why complicated training with mules can be complicated? Providing a supporting sentence would make the item longer. Also it will give details to the story for reader to interpt.


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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, my name is Tina. I'm part of a reviewing group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  learning how to enhance my writing skills and also learn to give good reviews in the process. I found your creative story here on Writing.Com on random read and would like to comment on your item.
First off, I would like to thank you for letting me have the opportunity to read over your item.
Categories I look for in a story is the narrator, character, place and setting, emotional reaction, plots, and did characters mentioned in story move in the story.

The spacing in the sentences lightens the story and makes it much more fun to read. There is to much at the bottom however. You are very creative in mastering the describing character description's. Ex: was a bone rack full of worms
I have to admit not only are you one and few that can do this there is allot of writers who can not do this*Delight*Another great example:he started getting ring sour.(Personally, I found it interesting to find out what medicine hat is.) My stepfather is Indian and you explained this truly to what medicine hat for animal is meant. This sentence supports your passage and emphasis's it magnificently. "Top Hat had spots along his back,..." The narrator tone was also demonstrated and was also entertaining to read. Thought overall that the story was flawless.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. My name is Tina and I'm part of a reviewing grup called {item:1300305. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.

There is a difference between poetry and static item. Although I like the passage and can relate to it there was a difference between the two. I think that this item is good to share with those that also can relate to the same experience. I appreciate having the opportunity to read this and found it an item was pleasent to read.



Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. My name is Tina and I'm part of a reviewing grup called {item:1300305. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.


Your writing was seen as venom with honey-dripped words. In other words this item really was well wrote. The title was unique as well as the letter. This is one that you can have fun reading more than once (which is rare) with sophisticated word play. Enjoyed this much and Thank You.



Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

The last sentence of the poem was strong and set the main effect for the poem. The ryhthm and ryhms were there. Only suggestion is to add on to the poem for more flow. The style was well presented but could be emphasize by adding more lines. Other than this thought it was a really cute poem.
Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Flow Control  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. My name is Tina and I'm part of a reviewing grup called {item:1300305. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.


I really like your item. I was reading this and at the same time was inspired. As a reader it seems like poetry and yet this is an short essay. The meaning was very abundent and the it was easy to interpt. Have a wonderful day and thank you for your encouraging words.

Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Old Lies Die Hard  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

First, I like the color text words because it emphasis's the meaning of the words. Secondly, I like that it flowed with rhymes. Last, it was helpful to read something that I can relate. My question is does it relate to people who are sufferers of depression. If so, it may need to be mention at the top before the poem starts. By adding this at the top will allow more information about the poem.


Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Physics  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. My name is Tina and I'm part of a reviewing grup called {item:1300305. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.


You really have to be love Physics to do this. Thank you it was a brain refreshner. It's good when you play game and than feel smart afterwards *Delight* Enjoyed reading some new words I have never seen before and it was fun to play this game.

Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Name Challenge  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. My name is Tina and I'm part of a reviewing grup called {item:1300305. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.

Dear Emme, I really liked what you shared here in your item. After reading past the middle section of your note I was able to relate as a person and a female. Life is filled with time that you have, and order to to know its purpose, you must endure. I personally liked the meaning of the passage.
-The small caption of the text made it easy to read and was understandable along with the passage.
-The grammer was flawless and sawl no punctuation errors.
-It was easy to understand.
{b}Reviewer Note{/b}: My middle name is also M Marie.
Overall, it left a positive message*Smile*

Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhyms, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

Wow, I really like how have the quality flawless in this poem. The flow and rhyms was essential and played well when I was reading it. Liked the flow and the positivity. Enjoyed reading something that I could wake up to in the morning. *Coffee*

Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi, I found your item by strolling through our website. I want to thank you for the opportunity to read your static item and found the mood pleasent for me. My name is Tina and I'm part of a reviewing group called {item:1300305. Please understand that all comments are just my opinion and may be different from others who are reviewing your item. Thank you for sharing your item upon Writing.Com.

I did find the humor in the passage after reading past the middle section. You really were able to share exactly what you were saying word per word. The very last sentence was a bit mixed up and hard for me to interpt. Check and reread the last sentence to make sure everything is said exactly you want it to emphasized. Thank you for sharing.




Sincerely Tina, from "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Love Feel  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

I liked that you made up a poem about woman thoughts on relationship. Some of the words made good similies to describe emotions. I would have liked it if there was more details and that would have added up to the patterns. Other than that I got the comprehension and thought it to be well thought of comparison of how woman can describe a relationship towards man. To add quality consider adding rythm to the poetr therefor will up the tone a bit to make it flawless. Again, thank you for sharing something in which (I could personally relate too)
Keep up with the good writing here on Writing.Com.


Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Hi, my name is Tina. I'm part of a reviewing group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  learning how to enhance my writing skills and also learn to give good reviews in the process. I found your creative story here on Writing.Com on random read and would like to comment on your item.
First off, I would like to thank you for letting me have the oppurtunity to read over your item.
Catagories I look for in a story is the narrator, character, place and setting, emotional reaction, plots, and did characters mentioned in story move in the story.

The very first thing you want to consider is to add space between the lines to
make it easier for the reader to read. This story shows how you are intrigued to
be creative and write a story. There is some editing and revising that needs to
be done with the story. The first thing is to do is start out with an Outline. Decide what the characters are and the setting is. Once you decide the character than you can write the details of who he is as a man and the describtion of the setting. Suggestion: go back and check for some errors. Ex- It was a bright fresh Monday morning.,I and MyMy wife and I were still in bed deep asleep. The ambience filled with murmur of joggers outside and a coocoo singing somewhere inside the near forest.(What happened here because sentence is incomplete with a missing action from the character). The slightly disturbed silence got an abrupt disturbed disturbance by a cranky wacky voice saying, "Oh my god help me, there is an alien in our town". The last part of the sentence should be there The slightly disturbed silence got an abrupt disturbance by a crancky wacky voice saying, "Oh my God help me, there is an alien in our town!"

There is alot of passages that shows that you like to be a creative writer. Please keep writing and the creativity in this story was really nice.
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Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Hi, my name is Tina. I'm part of a reviewing group"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  learning how to enhance my writing skills and also learn to give good reviews in the process. I found your creative story here on Writing.Com on random read and would like to comment on your item.
First off, I would like to thank you for letting me have the oppurtunity to read over your item.
Categories I look for in a story is the narrator, character, place and setting, emotional reaction, plots, and did characters mentioned in story move in the item.

I felt like this was an information piece about investments. The article was about the great idea of saving money for investments because you will have a happy life if you choose this route.
While reading this information I had a hard time understanding the sentences. Suggestion is go back and revise.

Example:Recently when I think about investment the first thing struck my mind is my salary / income. Though investment starts at your first income but the planning and thinking shall start at the very age your mind search for girl / boy. Yes to feel the aroma you need lot of planning and research.

This should be wrote - Recently the first thing that comes to thought, is my wages, income, and overall investment.

Go back and make sure you proof-read to see if it makes sense to the readers.

Other than that I liked how you made investment an optmistic subject to read.
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Review of Accept Me for Me  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" .

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

I love that you make items that many can relate to. I personally like it and feel better after reading this poem. I should know some of this stuff but when it is shared with a reader than that is the art of writing. I also liked that you have many other emotional items in your port. The poetry consistancy and flow was very nice.

Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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Review of Choice  
Review by Tina M. Courtney
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, My name is Tina Marie and I am part of the Power Reviewer Group I want to say thank you for letting me review an item and hope you find my review encouraging and helpful. I am doing reviews on all members that is in "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Again, thank you for letting me review your item and found your item by names of members found in the group lists.

In looking in any style of poetry I look for these things, rhymes, poetry patterns, flow, rhythm, style, and finaly the readers take on the poetry.

The pattern and flow was there and sounded very nice in your poetry. Only suggestion is to make the text smaller so the poetry you work on would emphasize the work you put in the meaning of the poem. I also liked that you ask a very interesting question in your poetry and thought the style was nice. What would I be? I have to say using this present on going with how I am in character, I would say I'm much more the whale. Again, a very good poem and I liked it very much.


Sincerely Tina, part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" 
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