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Review of DAIRY QUEEN  
Review by tjwsoccer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
wow. that is really all i can say. this was a very heartfelt writing. Some part of me wonders if that was a true story or if you just have that great of an imagination. either way, great job and keep on writing
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Review of Help Us Help YOU!  
Review by tjwsoccer
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Thank you for the article, it made perfect sense. At first, i was just trying to make myself know. Now, after reading that, i realize there are other people out there who could most likely benefit by finding Writing.com. Thanks and keep writing these info articles. They help people like me get to know writing.com a little more
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Review by tjwsoccer
Rated: E | (4.0)
I thought this was a pretty good story, but it was a little short to me. I understand it was about sticking it to a not-so-nice person, but that was a little off in my opinion. Pretty good shocker though, at the end. I wasn't expecting the reason for firing to be the lottery. Good job, but i think you could work on it a little more.
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Review of Trick or Tweet  
Review by tjwsoccer
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Sweet Jesus!! That story was both scary and yet this could be amazingly realistic. We have no idea what could happen as the consequences for having such advanced technology. Now i am wondering, was this a complete work of fiction or do you know something that everyone else doesn't? Anyway, that was a great story, one that i had to finish despite distractions. Keep writing stuff like this. This would surprise so many people with showing that maybe facebook and twitter are not the best things to have.
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Review of Apple  
Review by tjwsoccer
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This was a really cool representation of what i am assuming is Eve eating the apple. It is so full of emotion toward the piece. I thought you did a good job really catching eve's emotions in the poem. She seems to be sad at being tricked yet happy at the fact that she loves the apple. Good Job!
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