Greetings from the White Walkers and the "Game of Thrones" ! I'm Stephanie, and I'm here to provide you some feedback.
I am not an expert on werewolf stories but I was intrigued by this one.
You seem to have developed your characters well. There seems to be a family tree and a line of succession that needed to develop over time. It seems as if you put a lot of energy and time into this story so far.
I'm not sure how much, if any editing you have done but I have some spots throughout your story that need addressed.
The punctuation is what needs some help. I know when typing sometimes we just hurry up and get it out before it leaves us. So this will, I hope, be helpful in your editing process.
-November needs to be capitalized at the beginning.
-At first I wasn't sure what a coven was but I figured it out as the story went on.
-There are some apostrophes that are missing.
-"Are you ok?"- Chloe speaking to Julia, it should read okay, and you don't need to repeat her name as you have already established who was talking.
This story has a good plot and room to add and engage the reader. There really isn't much wrong with it, my suggestions are just for when you edit.
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