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Review of George Loses It  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice concept, while I was reading, I was replacing the winds, tree's, deers, so on, so on. I know it's you're story, but the impact of your story missed it's mark. Let's say for the fun of it, that you could have used wolves in you're story, how about a pack of wolves.
You have fallen down breaking your ankle with only a half loaded gun. You know the rest. You killed one last year while hunting. Now the game has turn too you. I can hear the pack wolves planing you're demised already, "can you hear them now?"
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Review of Crashing Waves  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I Can only say, it sounds like the Christian life. Man it can get even worse but a true Christian knows the sweet Lord will get them through it. Have you heard this, "been there done that." If one believes that God is all powerful than he knows what we are going through. That's why Christian trust in him. I hope this is not you're own struggles? if not? God's words are still true. Thank you for sharing. People share you're same ideas believe me.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice, some of best music I have ever heard was this type of theme good old country songs like John Denver songs, even if it was a story it's good. you're words also made me think of this old picture that hung in friends house long time ago it was a picture of this old red farm house with the great things surrounding it, a wagon, a barn plus much more. Thanks for your writing the words cause me to think of all these great things.
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Review of The Beast at Home  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Great twist, thought it was the cat bugging the person in the story I got heated up my self dealing with computers losing data, constant updates, buying ink for the printer, people can lose their mind dealing with machines. You were right on target it was short and sweet and to the point in the end. Thanks for you're writing.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great story the blunt true, our privacy is no longer secure in fact they know what we listen too, and what we write and later what we think all things will be monitored in fact it's happening now. The fact the most widely investment to make money in this world is data collecting on everything and on everybody. In fact look into what Obama will be doing in july with our money. Thank you for making people think. It's not over until it's over right? Chapter 2
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Review of The Candy Imps  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like you're story it was great really I love writers that can get into the minds of children it's a gift. When most people get old they think old but that's not the case here so it was a great read thanks, hope too read more of you're writings by the way go have a jaw breaker.
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Review of Cotton Candy  
Review by writeon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Writing so true the escape of reality. Addiction can easily turn into the worse of The worse, and the horse of death always follows in someway, physically, emotionally, than the end of reality. I like your writing because it's the modern day CURSE. In the sense that some people don't quit even though they can break free of drugs with help but the hardness part to break free is, "They just like it." THANK YOU FOR YOUR WRITING IT NEEDS TO BE SAID, KEEP THE WRITING GOING.
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Review by writeon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Wow, relationships, who knows the time of confirmation of unity. Like you're story. Some men are just like that, and some women also find men like that. Five years of waiting how interesting one way relationships. One person doing all the work. It's all in your writing. Thanks.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (4.0)
So nice, only the few can stand back, and take in the Grace of such a writing. make the subjects come alive when reading special chosen words too incite the beauty of it all. When it's been all said, and done. The greatest of all writings is when we claim the perfect diamond. Thank for writing it was beautiful.
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Review of Vagabond  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Short but true, the rest is in one's imagination if one notices the sub world of the homeless. You're story bring light to the subject at hand. I would hope your story goes beyond the human casual reading but more. I have always saied the writer brings too the surface sometimes their own psychosocial insight. Thank you making me think of my blessings.
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Review of Golf  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.5)
A woman couldn't have picked a nicer avenge then that. Nice twist saved it right to the end . Right where it should be. Using golf as the weapon is even better. 300 words even simple words got your point across. Nice. Will be reading more of your writings. Thanks for the treat.
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Review of Rain in the City  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Nice, to think the impact that rain has upon the environment that you introduce. Even bring people in. It was like a song with the repeated chorus. Of course I think it miss the possibility of the music nature that rain can have on the entireTheme.Thank nice reading.
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Review of New Beginnings  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Almost perfect writing to me, concerning chapter one of a pasting history too a new life. Like to see it has a novel, just as long as she don't meet up with a same kind of man she just left or maybe she well. Continued too write more or leave the story here, no matter it's good. Thanks.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Great writing, I could actually see, and feel what you wrote, as I was driving through on that lonesome road. Man, that's what good writing is. It takes you right there of course you have to read the story but it's not like you really have to read it. Nice work
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Review of Christmas Haiku  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
So few words, it's all right, let us fill in the spaces it has all the elements needed. When I was reading it , the movie began I saw the beginning the middle, and the ending the best part. So many times writers want too take you where they want to take you with their words. That's fine but the reader would be missing so much. But what you did was fine, "I did the rest." Thanks
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Review of daddy  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (5.0)
So sad, words and feelings way beyond understanding years of a hurt youth. Indeed a piece of psychological intensely in simple terms child abuse. I hope anyone who reads such writings and can identify with the story needs to seek help. Rated E I don't think so. Rating for strong convincing feelings 5 stars.
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Review of No Fear  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
You know I like Christian writings because others Christian understand when they read it but when non Christians read it it has less impact but keep those words flowing. Most of the time a spark won't cause a fire but the potential is always there, first writing welcome.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Scary writing, man is that what we are becoming ? I was once told the difference between being normal, and a genius, is the genius is insane but your not talking about that here I hope. No I thing your talking about normal people who start writing and in time they get better and don't care later about points. Your writing did cause me to review thanks for making me think.
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Review of Strangled  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Great story, in the sense your still alive. I have always enjoyed dangerous animals at a safe distance. I remember having a close friend who loved snakes just like you. He told me that most people do not show due respect for animals, "that's when they get hurt,"
Who can't tame millions years of instinct, by trying to tame them against their nature. Good luck. I enjoyed your story and I'm glad you're still around. Thanks for the reading.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
I Believe in words that gives off remarkable visions not more empty words but less words but the right words. unless you needs alot words to sell a book. Ha ha. You used some very good words that made me picture your thoughts I like that. I would have gotten bored with a lot of empty words.
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Review of ANOTHER TOMORROW  
Review by writeon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
Spoken like a true Christian. When we are at our emotional, and physical end that's when God is willing to take over. Your story speaks to those levels of action, mind, heart, faith not always in same order but you have it all. I will read more of your writing probably the same in nature of your writing emotional.
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Review of Lost  
Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Nice twist, almost got me. Had too read it twice. I like to read more of that type of endings. one can apply it to almost eveything poems, prose, short stories, etc, etc,

Maybe you could write one, concerning a life experience. I will read more of your writings hopefully in the near future. Thanks for sharing your work.

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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (2.5)
A true song for Christians hope, I couldn't help but think of the chords you would use for the song. You covered the conflict of all Christians, and I like that your song gave an answer which is trust in the Lord. I hope you open it to a public situation I think they will enjoy it. Thanks for sharing.
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Review by writeon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Wow, didn't the temple lay to ruin in AD 70 , there one thing that holds true, and that is the Bible has been a hundred percent right according to our faith . Of course by the standards of unbelievers they always question God's words , but thanks for you're story it makes people think they may not agree but it makes people think. So you're hit the mark. Thanks.
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Review of Witch!  
Review by writeon
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
There's I saying, "revenge served cold is best," well something like that. Anyways, I like what you wrote, short, and sweet too the point. I like it.
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