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Review by TomSketchit
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice stuff. While it's nothing ground breaking, the main author's work is well written and actually tries to have story to go along with the fetish material, which definitely helps it stand out on this site. I hope to see more from them, and may try to help add ideas of my own here if the inspiration ever strikes me to do so.
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Review by TomSketchit
Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
The early chapters spend too much time suggesting other characters than the one the reader selected. Stop giving different options and just write a story.
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Review by TomSketchit
Rated: XGC | (3.0)
A good idea for a fetish interactive, but the chapters that are here so far focus way too much on being lists of options instead of telling a story. You need to keep the big lists to the front of a story, then get to the point and actually write something instead of just having there be 100 chapters worth of "Should the story have this minor detail or this minor detail?"
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