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Review by Duty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.5)
Great. I like the beat and the rhyme makes the poem familiar to me. Juxtaposing shepards and kings is always a good thing for Christmas. The poem has a really nice mix of imagary of old and new such as the christmas wrapping of presents and the Nativity star.
This is good work.
Tony Parker
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Review by Duty Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E ★★★★★ | (4.0)
I like the offbeat poetry. Killing yourself with candy, offing yourself with food.

I especially liked the line:
There’s a box of Nestle SnoCaps
Playing Mozart by itself.

I'm not sure I got your point if there was one so feel free to fill me in. The imagary is great.

Tony Parker
Duty
tonyparker@Writing.Com
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