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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This poem makes me think of many symbolic ideas about this worm. At first, I took it literally, but then I thought of other things the worm could be. I liked the rhyming you used. If this is a specific type of poem, please reply and tell me. Good job!


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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this cute poem! The rhyming sounds very nice and I like where you go with it. In some places, I have found where the poem switches scenes, so it isn’t quite as smooth as an untouched lake. However, this was a very fun read for me, and thanks for sharing it. Good job!


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a beautiful poem. It describes the sorrow of the day in such a poetic way it makes my heart cry out for what happened. This poem has helped me feel more sympathetic to those who lost family and friends and I thank you for spinning all these words together this way.


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Review of First Contact  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Wow. This poem makes me appreciate how beautiful and uncharted space is. I like your use of vocabulary and the rhymes you used in the Burns Stanza theme. I think it’s intriguing how the poem flows from adjectives in the beginning that thins out at the end. Good work!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem really warms my heart. I love how you used many adjectives in this poem and that really makes a difference for me. Also, the way you bolded certain words made it really enjoyable and made me to think about it. Thanks for writing and sharing this!


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Review of Take a Stand  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Woah. This song has blown me away! I love how you start it off with the rhyming verses and start singing! This has really touched my heart and I thank you for writing and sharing this. The rhyming sounds nice and fluent. P.S. I love the band For King and Country.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow I’ve never seen a poem like this. I also have never thought from a bench’s point of view, so this poem made me think more about many inanimate objects and what their stories could be. It appears you followed a specific type of poem; if so, please tell me. Thank you for taking your time to write and share this!


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Review of After The Storm  
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
This poem is amazing! I love to write haikus myself and I can really appreciate this beautiful haiku. This haiku feels symbolic to me because yes, it is Winter, but it could also mean the Winters in our own lives. I thank you for taking your time to write and share this beautiful haiku. Keep up the good work!


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Review of "White Wolf"  
Rated: E | (5.0)
love this story! It touches my heart. I also love how you befriended him. The kindness you show makes me glad there are people like you out in this world. The poem is wonderful and amazing I just can’t describe it with a handful of words. Your rhyming is beautiful and the story in the poem is so tear-prompting. Thank you so much for this!


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Review of Breaking Yoke  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this poem! It puts a spin on the nursery rhyme and I also think your rhyming is great. The vocabulary you used is quite wonderful. The title is perfect and I like how in the beginning the lines are shorter but they get longer towards the end. I really enjoyed reading this! -Toucan
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