I really like your approach to winning a war and the point that war is a short time gain. I love having peace with all that I am in contact with but sometimes it just does not seem possible all the time to have that peace.I am in agreement with you that prayer is the most effective weapon that we have. This arcticle is very informative and has the potential to be very effective if put to use in an individuals life. Great job!!
Awesome writing!! While the story flowed with romance and attraction the transition into the consequences are written well. I felt the bitter sweet moment of loving a daughter but knowing that things were going to be different. A topic that many can relate too. Thanks for sharing!!
I would not be able to see any faults in this poem because I so identify with it. Very well written conveying the message that they are in desperate need of a job change.Not many words but they are powerful in allowing the reader into the mind and life of the author. Great read!!
I can really relate to this piece of writing. Your writing is very descriptive and inspiring. I can feel what the main character was feeling. Good Work!!
I like your work, it actually makes me look forward to taking a walk in the park when the weather gets warmer, and just chilling out with no worrries and no hangups. Good Job
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