You are the lucky recipient of a Power Raid Review.
I'm reviewing your poem "Mother's Love.
Please remember that you are the best judge of what is right for your poem! Whatever I say, whether positive or negative, is just my opinion!
TITLE: Appropriate to the content
IMAGERY: Minimal use of imagery to describe a mother's love; this is a strong line "I was the tree giving you food, shelter, love and care" is very descriptive.
RHYMING & REPETITION:No rhyming or repetition.
RHYTHM, STRUCTURE & FORM: Freeform poem
SUGGESTIONS FOR IMPROVEMENT: This poem suffers heavily from the use of text message abbreviations. For example, "U" should be properly spelled "you"; "ur" is not acceptable in writing "your". Grammar, syntax and expression of thought struggle in many places
OVERALL IMPRESSION:The sentiments expressed in this poem are intense and deserve a better presentation. There is a mother's love, the struggles, conflicts and emotional pain of raising a child, the longing for a better life for the son and a desire not to be forgotten by him. The content is rich; I would be glad to revise the rating on this poem if some of the syntax and spelling problem areas were corrected.
Thank you for letting me review this poem. I enjoyed reading it; keep writing!
"WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"
Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.~~Robert Frost
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