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Review of The magical Ex  
Review by Unexpect
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You write the best vore stories. I love it when the pred is a girl that's very close to the guy (best friend, family member, girlfriend etc) but as soon as he shrinks he's seen as food... they give in to their dark fantasies. I also like it when the girl is indecisive about letting him out and makes him feel like he'll be free, but in the end it's she that decides to digest him.

What makes your stories so awesome is they don't end like "he goes into the stomach and digests and dies right away". Slow digestion with teasing is awesome. The longer the digestion with more teasing, the better. especially when they keep telling the guy theyll let him out but it never happens
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Review by Unexpect
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Would have liked it much better if the digestion wasn't skimmed over. One moment he's large, and the next he's gone... It's very nice to see the progression of someone getting smaller and softer, being pushed into the intestine etc. that stuff is skipped too often
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