This poem was very well written and it flowed nicely. The imagery created by your words were haunting and yet so true. I liked the style of poetry and enjoyed it. Good writing and keep on going.
This was a very nice article about individual spiritual beliefs. I liked the part you did not bring up god into the picture. I agree with most of the things you have said in the aticle. Good writing and keep on going.
This was a very good poem about untrustworthy people described like they were spiders. This was a very good and smart idea to use as a metaphor. I enjoyed it and good writing. The imagery you created showed how spiders and flies interacted with each other.
I thought this poem was very well written. I liked the humor you bring into the poem using animals . Good writing and keep on going. I enjoyed it. It could also be a lyric to a song,
I thought this was a good spiritual poem. I liked the the title very much. I suppose the last line is talking about God? I guess whoevrer reads it interprets it their own way.
This was a good poem about the imagery of nature. I liked it very much because the scenery kept changing in nice ways. Good writing and keep on going. Nice poetry.
This was a scary poem and had a dark imagery. I thought it was good writing and flowed pretty well. I might of broken it into stanzas but it works both ways. Keep on writing.
Tough poem about a parent trying to teach his child about life. I liked it for it being realistic. i am not a father but it must be a tough job. Good writing and keep it going.
This poem was an angry poem but sounded honest. i thought it was a good poem because of the way you stated your frustrations and gripes.
Good writing and keep on going.
I thought this was a nice short poem and it was still profound. I liked the part it goes through a cycle and it restarts again. Good writing and I liked this style of poetry. Happy New Year to you and your family!
I thought this poem was fresh and very nice for people in love. I liked how positive it sounded. People get cynical nowadays so your poetry is a nice change. Good writing and keep it going.
This poem though short had a lot of things to say. I liked it and it sounded realistic. People change or hide their emotions to cover things up and this poem captured some of it very well, I thought.
Nice essay on your philosophy about setting goals to achieve things in life. I agree with you and most people do when they hear the words. Good writing and I liked it very much.
This was an excellent poll for erotica writiers. I put one or two as my answer. I did not want to reveal too much. Good writing and keep it going. Wishing you and your family a Happy New Year! Happy 2007!
I feel appreciation for all the men and women of the armed forces. My father used to be in the 100th Infantry Battalion during World War II. I feel for soldiers who has to go to war nowadays. Glad to have a patirot like you, on the job. thanks.
This poem sounded sad for the little girl in it. I felt sorry for her because she was all alone, no fault of her own. I liked the imagery of the growth of the girl. Good writing and keep on writing poems.
I thought this was a very down to earth and realistic poem. It brought back bad memories that was vivid but so fantastic because the crime was so diabolical. I sure hope everything turns peaceful in 2007.
I think this peom had good messages and followed the current events but some of the typos took away from the effect. FYI, afraid is spelled wrong in your title. If you refined it, I think this poem would be much better. Good writing, I still liked it.
This was a good story about a dog you have encountered and it was nice that the animal brought new things in your life. Compassion is the key and in this story it worked out for the best. Good wrriting and I enjoyed it.
Hi, I thought your poem was very nice and interesting because you succcessfully conveyed the sadness and pain through your words. The imagery was kind of lonely because it sounded like someone needed help. Good writing.
I liked your poem very much. Especially the way you started off with some commentary on the medical society of our country. I liked the 3rd stanza also because of it took a humorous approach. Good writing and keep on going.
I was always intrigued about the Greek Mythology. Thank you for giving me a brief info through your interesting poetry. The story of Medusa always was interesting to me because the head works even afterr decapitation.
Your poem was interesting but I thought you should of broken it up and made it into stanzas. I thought it was well written and it had a nice flow. Keep on writin I liked your writing. Please have a Happy New Year!
This was a nice poem about the emotional feelings towards loved one. I think you brought the imagery vivid and kind of sad in the middle. I liked it overall and good writing. Maybe breaking it into stanzas might be good, too.
Happy New Year!
Hidley Boxn
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Good writing and keep it going. Wishing you and your family a Happy New Year! Happy 2007!