Hi this was a verry nice romantic poem especially during this Holiday Season... it seemed appropriate. I thouhgt you started off like a traditional poem and ended more on a contemporary note. I liked the uniqueness.
This was a nice but dark poem. I liked it for the strong powerful imagery and how it made me feel. Good scary writing about loneliness and suffering. Very good poetry.
Good poem about how sick you are about life. Sometimes I feel like that, too. The imagery created with your words were kind of sad and gloomy. I thought you captured it well. Wood writing and I liked your poem. Happy New Year!
This poem was really emotionally sad and the imagery is very scary. But it sounded realistic and honest. Sometimes the old school way of raising kids are hard to understand. Lots of times the parent(s) thinks they can toughen you up by appearing mean but they still love you in their own way. At least, that is how it is with my mom. She could be a b-----, sometimes.
This was a good interesting editorial on how American Natives were mistreated. I know their peace treaties were always broken by you know who?! Good writing and I liked it. It gave me more infos about the subject.
This madlib was also really good... maybe better. I think you should continue as long as you have people that like it. I liked it. Serials might be a turnoff to some but as long as it is good, who cares?
Keep on writing. You do not have to keep the same title.
I thought your poem was short but said a lot. It does capture the essence of what good poetry writing is about. I wished it was longer because I am sure you had more to say about the subject. Good writing.
Your free form poem was interesting and I thought it was good. If you made it into a more traditional poetic form, I think you will have more readers. Just my opinion. Good writing and I liked this poem
I understood what you said in your poem but I thought you should break it up into stanzas so it is easier and more understandable to other readers. The more poeple reads it, the better it is for your writing and portfolio. Just my opinion. I liked the poem.
I truly liked your poem because of it's compassion and sometthing obvious that most people fail to see or acknowledge. I commend you for being aware of it without being preachy. I always thought MAKE A WISH FOUNDATION was a good charrity. Good writing!
I thought your poem drew a bleak picture of your relationship with a people user. Unfortunately there are a lots of them around. Sometimes it is by chance or bad luck that you fall for a bad one. But if you do not try you would never know. As far as this one goes, cut the loss and don't look back.
Sorry to hear you are away from your family now. I hope you get to go home soon. I liked your poetry because of the domestic content. It added to the emotional aspect of your poem. Good writing.
Excellent satirical essay. I bet you got some negative R&R since the subject matter involves religion. I give credit for having the guts to do it. Afterall what you write belongs to you. Good and funny writing. I loved it.
I liked your poem for your honesty. I totally agree with you with the way it tastes. The first two sips are good but the after taste is like it is burnt. I have tasted good coffees in other foreign countries and Starbucks is overrated to the max. I think people get hooked on it just like speed.
Your haiku started off violent and destructive and it ended in a good note. I liked the way you made such a short poem go through so much and imagery was vivid and easy to understand. I liked it very much.
This poem sounded very angry and unforgiving, but it sounded honest. I liked it because it said a lot in just a few words. Sometimes I feel like this about someone I knew in the past. I just say to myself, cut the loss and don't look back.
This is a good poem about the feeling and anxiety of love. I thought it was very well written. FYI, loose should be spelled lose. And falling on your last line should be fallen. Other than that it was great and I liked it.
I thought your poem was very powerful and the imagery was very real. Sometimes bad things happen to good people. It happens more to good looking attractive people sometimes. If the guy in the poem is a real person then he must be accountable and should be reported. At least show him the poem.
Not a bad poem. It gives a honest imagery about your life and worries. Even in the 8th line was misspelled. And we're was missing an apostrophe on the 9th line. You should show this poem to your parents. When someone else's feelings are concerned, sometimes you have no control over it. Maybe they waited this long because you were still so young. Some couples wait until the youngest one turns 18 years old, so they are legally adults. Keep on writing.
Wow, this was written ten years ago? You do have talent and a way with words. No wonder you are getting published. Congratulations and I like this poem very much. I hope you do well with your published work. Good writing.
I liked your poem about being able to cope with past relationship. It is a good way to get rid of negative thoughts and move one. This is Christmas Season so being positive is important. However sad it may be, it was good writing.
This is a nice Haiku. I am impressed. It isn't easy to come up with a good poem with just few words. The Christmas theme makes it even better and appropriate during this holiday season. I liked it very much.
Good writing.
Your poem was very powerful and sounded a bit sad. But seems like there's someone that loves you for who you are. Don't underestimate that. Some people don't have anybody. As far as looks go, don't let it eat you up. You said yourself it's contagious. It goes both ways.
Merry Christmas!
Hidley Boxn
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