This was a very good romantic work you have written. The love and warmth through your use of hands gave it a nice touch to your honest feelings. My suggestion is always refer back to this piece whenever you hit an obstacle in the future. Good writing.
Well this is a nice peom about how you feel about home especially when you have someone to share it with. That is what makes a difference between a house and a home. Good writing.
I thought your poem was very humorous with good analogy. Baking, cooking and tasting does seem complex when you put it like that. It was ingenious and I enjoyed your work. It is highly appropriate because it is a Holiday Season and lots of theres a lot of cooking going around. good wrriting
This interactive story is kind of unique and I could relate to it. I love food, too. I thought Chandler would gain. I will check out the rest of the story to get the answer. Good fun writing.
Your poem was short but it said quite a lot. It sounded like your daughter was in God's hand and her life was in danger. And your faith in him was keeping both of you alive. The strength of your love was very visible in your words.
This was a very good satire. The FBI after Santa Claus is an original. Usage of terror organization and North Korea gave it a good touch to the story. We need some humor in this world right now. Good writing.
I was not quite sure what your message was in this poem. Are you disappointed for something you've failed to do or because you did it in a wrong manner?
Pretty good peom about life and death. It is like having two people inside you when you think about it. The imagery in your words were haunting but the ending was nice.
I am a baby boomer and I caught some of your message through the imagery created by your words. But some things I could not relate to because I was raised in a different environment. Good writing, though.
Very visually artful imagery of the sea. I understood the beginning but I didn't quite get who "her" was. Is she the ocean? I also liked your logo at the end. The overall flow of the poem was nice. Keep on writing.
I liked this lyric you've written. It sounds like a compalint to some but it made legitimate points as far as I'm concerned. Things are really unknown out there. Keep on writing.
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