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Review of Somnifer Secerno  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi Zariya,

I really liked your poem but some parts you may have over explained yourself by the use of parenthesis. I know you're still young, not like me. I'm old enough to be your father. I'm a novice writer but I do have some wisdom that comes with age.

I assure you, my intentions are honorable and just want to help and be helped with writing skills and suggestions from a friend(s) through Writing.com like you in our case.

I love new ideas and new approach to things.

BTW, what does "Somnifer Secerno" mean exactly?

Thanks, I'm really into different languages but this one is either Italian or Latin, correct? I''m not too familiar with it. I have some knowledge in Spanish, though from L.A. days.

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi Countrymom,

This was a very nice poem. It's a sad story but at least you remember.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Not The End  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

I liked your poem because of it's imagery and the over all flow. I think breaking it apart into stanzas might be better for the readers.

Good writing.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Ebonywriter,

This was a very good poem. I liked the style and imagery.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Zariya,

I liked this poem really well. I thought the imagery and the flow of the poem was nice. Keep writing! Thanks.

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Zariaya,

I liked your poem but I have one question. Is the angel suicidal in your poem?

Hidley Boxn
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Review of The Soda Queen  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Baylee,

I loved your madlib. It was short and sweet. Very funny stuff.

Thanks,

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Doctor,

Very touching poem. I wish I could write like this.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Hidden  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Yuki,


I really liked your poem. It had a very good flow most of the time.
Thanks, keep on writing!

Have a great evening!

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Babybull,

I liked your poem but I felt you should of broken it apart a little so it's more pleasant to visually and for reading.

BTW, commitments is spelled with one "t" , I believe.

Good job.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Three Decades  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi RJ,

Overall I liked your poem a lot for the idea. I thought maybe by modifying it, it could of had a better flow. Just my opinion. I still enjoyed it very much so good job.

Hidley Boxn

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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Barbie,

I truly liked reading this essay. I like your style of writing and I learned some things from it. I'm still a beginner so your essay helps me more than you know. I could also relate to the subject matter. That's what drew me to it.

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Nouns  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Irisn,

Hi really liked your idea with all nouns. But I think you should explain what kind of a noun you want occasionally to make mor sense. I think it's funnier that way, most of the time.

Good creativity & it's fun!

Hidley Boxn
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Review of Me!  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Boogers,

It always gets me when answers are diagonal. Good Word Search.

BTW, Veronica Mars is my favorite. Kristen Bell, the next superstar.

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

I especially liked the series of Images you had.


Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hi,

I didn't do too well. Good quiz!


Hidley Boxn
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Review of Erganblah  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Grreat quiz,

I got 5 right!

Hidley Boxn
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Review of The Dream  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hi W.D. Wilcox,

This piece was very scary. Too scary for a Sunday. But it was well written. I'll read it again tomorrow.

Aloha,
Hidley boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello,

This so cool and very good idea. I learned a lot from this letter and I'll check out the other places of the world you know about by reading rest of your port..

I was a military brat living in Yokohama, Japan. For the first 18 years of my life.

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Edward Kenneth,

I truly thought your poem "Love Is A Whitetailed Deer" was humorous and kind of cute poem. I liked the way it flowed and how you were successful in projecting the nice imagery to the readers. I also read your other poems and like this style of poetry. I learned from reading your poems.

Thanks,

Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi,

This Madlibs pretty good. I enjoyed it!
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Review of Life and Death  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi Neona,

I'm just a novice writer. I loved your poem. I have a short poem with the same title as yours.

I could really relate to your poem.

Have a great Veterans Day Weekend!

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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Review of Trying  
Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi Dr. Taher,

Very unusual and interesting form of poetry. I think I'll try writing some. Thanks.

Aloha,
Hidley Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

These are such beautiful graphics.

Holiday Boxn
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Review by Hidley Boxn
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hi,

Good Game. I liked the subject matter and enjoyed it.

Hidley Boxn
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