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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This story is very good. All you should do, if anything else, is expand the language and make it a bit more unorthodox. I'm reading a book called "Bruiser" and it brings up some unexpected changes in the plot. And its dialogue makes you either love or hate some characters really. Otherwise it was good.
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