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Review of Buzz  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This is hysterical.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Thought provoking, concise and to the point.
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Review of Shake  
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Rated: 18+ | (1.0)
A bit dry but interesting in its potential.
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Rated: 18+ | (2.5)
It put a grin on my face.
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Review of time.  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wild read! Worth your time...No pun intended.
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Review of Twisted Love  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Twisted, warped and beautiful. Brevity is the soul of wit and this nails it.
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Review of My Imagination  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is excellent.
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Review of The Morning After  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
First impression sounds like me several decades ago. Second impression is this might be better told from the second person point of view. The way I'd write it, me, not necessarily you would be fleshing it out with gritty details...'another dirty bus stop along this stupid never ending river of dried asphalt...And everywhere I go I see that son of bitch following me...He always lives in the mirror...' Something like that. However, that's how I'd do it. Keep working on it, it sounds like you have a great story to get off your chest.
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Thought provoking. Could be the spiritual basis for a short story if not straight out novella.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Wild story...Needs polished but worth the read.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Interesting work, a tad ungainly but interesting.
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Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
This is really fabulous...Creative. Should've gone on longer.
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Review of Space Hoboes  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: E | (4.0)
Outrageous entertainment. The author uses British based vernacular that may be to rough for an American audience though. This is really good.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thought provoking, mostly if you're an old geezer like me. If you're not, read it anyhow and think.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Excellent. Excellently written, excellently presented, authentic as it gets.
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Review of Dagger  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Wild concept. To bad it's so short!
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Review of God's Mistake  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Thought provokingly dark. Rich textures touch the human condition that only the lonely truly grasp.
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Review of Deepest Blue  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: E | (5.0)
Worth reading. Worth saying.
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Review of Dark Tears  
Review by von Wahrenberger
Rated: E | (2.0)
You have talent. However here's advice I got years ago and has served me well. Brevity is the soul of wit. Some of your lines are sheer pure brilliance and those get tripped by a stormy hearty in other lines. It just needs some spit and polish to shine.
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