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Review by AL
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Noticed several grammatical errors,but who cares.I´m not the one to judge these things,there are probably many more qualified.All I want to say is,I got the picture.
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Review of Suggestion Box  
Review by AL
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It´s nice to have a place to go where you can contribute to this (for me)vast site.
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Review of The Answers  
Review by AL
Rated: E | (5.0)
What an absolutly beautiful poem!To me it feels like you have painted a veil of serenity straight across it.The peace it conveys it tranqilizing,lovely and hopefull.One is transported to another realm where knowlege reigns,and fear has no place.I will now jump to your portfolio to see what else is hidden there.
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Review by AL
Rated: E | (4.5)
Extremely intelligent.Your country of choice and every other person in every other country,is likely to have the same quandery.Everyone is probably like Pavlovs dogs,either acting from reward or punishment.The problem as I see it is not that any one society is immature, but that the world is,and that maturity comes from understanding and questioning,which you in your writing are trying to do.You see the world and your environment clearly and express this with granduer.You care,and this seeps through your words.My only tip is:don´t worry so much,all things have a tendency to set themselves right,though it might not look that way.
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Review of Marja's Baby  
Review by AL
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Absolutly exellent.
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Review of Monster  
Review by AL
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I find your story very interesting and with a great flow of words,you even made me believe that the whole thing was an actual description of your life.You seem to have captured very well the psychology of why many people do "evil" things,though they see themselves as merely victims of others´evil towards them.It also triggers the readers sense of compassion towards the assailent.The twist at the end was a perfect surprise,and I´m looking forward to reading more of your work,you have talent.
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Review by AL
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I don´t understand any of this,it seems overly complicated and doesn´t tell you where to go to ask a specific question.I´m using this space in hope that somehow,someone will tell me where to go.I hope I haven´t affended anyone.Thank you.
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Review by AL
Rated: E | (4.5)
This page gave me a sense of encouragement about the way I(as a newcomer)have rated.I want to be totally honest and want the same in return,though I don´t think spelling matters as much as content.By the way,I really love this place,and that´s my honest opinion.
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