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Review of Thomas' Pain  
Review by Robin
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this was very silly story, and i see turkeys pecking at food by our place in WI and they pleck at our black bird feeder for food. i took out a hen turkey the year before last year and it was bittersweet on the life of the bird and such things. give me a jingle ok.


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Review of The Fun House  
Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
you did a fine job in being very clear about the place, time whatever else that goes into a good story. what get you in writing a story about a haunted fun house? can you give my stories a once over and tell what you like and what you don't. hope to hear from you.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
very neat way of showing god. kept going with your writing. can your check out and give your honest take on my portfolio? you seem to use the cat in the hat author way of writing. What do you think of the world and it leaders? what do you do when not writing?
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
nice taalk about the chickens. we raise chickens ourselves and seen the roaster not eat the food but allow the hens to eat first. but the roasters was not pick and hold nice bird he was "i going to kick your butt with my feet bird." so he meet MR. hatchet and MR. stovepot.
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Review by Robin
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
well done on the back on fourth. i enjoy the flower and female lines and it intresting that in the flower that the male and female parts are not far away from each other but the flower female part get pollen from bees or birds or any other ways of getting the pollen from a different flower male part. hmm what that leave humans with. think on it.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is a very nice poem about why the canines howl at the moon. make more of these form of poems. i like the idea of the angels wailing of the sin of our first parents and want it did to us. it geting hard to think of new stories or more ideas for started stories. please comment on that.
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Review of The Sound  
Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You wonder if someone is trying to rip the guy off. There are twisted people who will rip off people for money. but this is a well done piece of work in story and make more story ideas like it. a sister and two of my cousins have lived and or living in apartment.
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Review of Going Home  
Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this is a good story about death and how we miss these who have died. my grandmother on my mother side had pass away on april 20 2011 and i am still getting over the loss. i don't know what god want to do with me in my life either single, married or monk or in that idea of things.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
thank you for your imput. i live in WI near fond du lac and we had a flood there in 2009 my recollecting maybe off. this bring to mind the statement that was used during world war two "praise the lord and pass the ammo" that used during the attack on pearl harbor by our guys.
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Review of A ThinkingHeart  
Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
very funny story. you have good sence of humor. What is the funny thing you have see, heard, or done that you can think of? i have found spaceballs to be funny, bill crosby, and forget where i put things to funny and i just twenty-five years old. that is funny.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
nice way of telling the story. you do very good research on the places or planes, my grandfather serve in the navy during this confict and his brother worked at moving troops on a landing craft in d day. it takes a lot of guts to fight a war, but how do you handle it is inportant too.
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Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
i am a goof ball on writing and other sites that connet in that way. i have stories that are in the 18+ range plus a poll and would you glaze over what i have to see of you like or dislike what i have. do you have a pet(s)? are you a fan of any type of sports?
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Review of Our Guest Book  
Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
what is the way to get people to notice your writing style or works? is it going after people to put story lines into stories or wait for they to come to you to add something to a story of yours? how is it going with you at the time because it hard to find people to write on stories i have. peace out.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
i like your topic, I know that in japan one of the things that the warriors did was flower arranging to help them focus and calm down so that when come they didn't go nuts in battle. have you start a portfolio for your ideas and stories? please email me when when you get a chance.
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Review of 9/11  
Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
you are a good writer and i will check out your chapter annini drive when i get a chance to. 9/11 has afftect me the same way. will you give a statement of my portfolio stories and should i change stories chapter or whatnot. i wait for a reply. this is Robin signing out.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
cool way of dealing with bullies. people need to know how to handle bullies in a way that the bully in not made to feel lower than the bullied person but that the person stand up for they selves and holds they ground to sump the bully way of picking on them.
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
very good job in the linking of the poem verses. i have some stories in my portfolio that have vampires in them, please when you get a chance add some idea to any of my stories you like. if you were a vampire who you go after someone who is common or high up the totem pole.
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Review of the house  
Review by Robin
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
you must love the outdoors to write this story please kept going . i am having big problems on my portfolio in the idea of story adds please add of you feel up to it. what do you do for a living because i work as a cleaner in a bp station in fond du lac.
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Review of Dolphin  
Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
i like dolphins to in the way they swim near ships at the front leaping out of the water. some dolphins are kill by sharks some by whales some by human hands but hopefully enough dolphins live to kept the dolphin for dieing out. what do you think of my portfolio? check it out when you have a chance.
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Review by Robin
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
what are reasons for ditching the elders? the elders can have great wisdom store in they brains from their trip in life and need to pass it along to the next group coming on the scene. i are not sure why people are not adding to my stories. please when you get a chance check out my portfolio.
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Review by Robin
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
great story about how a guy can use his money to help out in this world of ours. where did you come up with the idea for the story it should be made into a book and maybe better then that idea. my stories are all eighteen+ ideas turning around someone being attacked by something or the dead or alive girls games. peace out.
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Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this is a great story. it should be expended in other story. i have aliens in some of my stories but they not so peacefull. how did you come up with your story idea? can you check out my portfolio when you have a moment? what do you do in your off time from writing dot com?
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Review by Robin
Rated: E | (5.0)
i have problem with my computer with some of the items you talk about but how you reduces e mails from shopping sites that are connected to shopping in shadows of home than buy a item with a credit card that cost you to buy two other items to get one. please check my portfolio out when you get a chance.
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Review by Robin
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
you looking for twisted fun look in my portfolio for kicks. i understood the part about buying porn but what i look at is game babes or anime girls. people don't realize before cars people walk to places or ride a horse. how do you stand going through the checkout line at the supermarket?
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Review of The Big Field  
Review by Robin
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
what a great story to show you how friends care for each other by stand up to a bully. i had people bug me in school by putting my schoolbag in the girl bathroom and other things that are dumb but i was helped by a other student that call my mom and help me out by being a friend to me. give me a buzz on my portfolio when you get a chance OK.
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