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Review of A Dozen Roses  
Review by Oddman
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi,
Your thought is visible and the overall mood the poem came up well. Excellent continuity is essential for a poem, and you made it well. Only suggestions that I have for you is, make your writing still simpler without using some long words. Not everyone can get the meaning.
Keep doing your good work!


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Review by Oddman
Rated: E | (4.5)
Clap to you!
This gives a nostalgic feel. After reading this, no one would move away without a good feel. You made it through your writing. It fits apts to current situation.... Bring back the writer you had hidden within you and let your reviewer, inside you, takes some rest.
Have a happy writing for our happy reading!


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Review of Springtime  
Review by Oddman
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi,
These six lines seem fresh to me, Congrats for that!
A story fetched in ten words neatly. I would suggest you to check the punctuation and capitalization. For example, the words "Thriving" and "surviving" are placed as pair but with different capitalization. whatever, your work deserves claps. Keep writing!


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