This is a quite an interesting day-in-the-life-of piece of writing. We are all surrounding by noise and outside influences that it's hard to find the quiet time truly needed to write, and hear ourselves think.
I liked the scenes you depicted. They really hit home and you described them well.
There were a few things noticed.
As I drool of a coffee for me, I get up to make one for myself - you see?
The "drool of", sounds a little off to me.
Words deny, thoughts are gone, how do you spell, when all is wong wrong?
Also, the flow and rhythm were off in a few places, which can be fixed (if you so choose to fix them,
) by adhering to a more even syllable count.
Overall, I think a lot of people can relate to this and the examples you gave.
Thank you for sharing your work.
~ Vikki ~