Vitamin bleach's (vitaminbleach) Reviews

Review Requests: OFF
1 Public Reviews Given
1 Total Reviews Given
Public Reviews
1
1

Review of The long skinny well bucket  

Review by vitaminbleachMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really liked this short story! What i liked about it the most was how descriptive the writing style you use is. one of the things that you could do to inprove your writing in the future is to include a clear meaning for you writing. and to make clear that this was a short story in the title or description.