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Review by Voxxylady
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I think I would have said complainers instead of whiners, but then, I understand the irritation of people taking what they can get for free and expecting even more. There's too much of that mentality around; these are usually the same people who want to be supported by the government but don't think they should have to pay taxes. Hmm... why not? So the rest of us have to pay for our own services and theirs, too?

I'm rather amazed at how much writing.com offers for free. I was a free member for quite some time but am glad to be now supporting a site that matters to me because I am serious about my writing and I appreciate a site that is serious about it, also.

If you (whiners/complainers) want to fuss, try Ebay/Paypal where it often costs more to sell an item than the price you get out of it! LOL!

By the way, you left out that you not only, in addition to all of your work on the site, reward reviewers for FREE, but also send out gift points in order to encourage them!

Thanks *Smile*
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Review by Voxxylady
Rated: ASR | (3.0)
Many Europeans are beginning to catch wind of the concern that the President of the United States may have had something to do with orchestrating the 9-11 attacks.

How do you feel?


How do I feel? I feel revolted that Moore and his crew are daring to suggest such a thing and making the world think it could be true. They need to read more history, as has the U.S. navy Captain who wrote the following:

AMERICA NEEDS TO WAKE UP!

That's what we think we heard on the 11th of September 2001 (when more than 3,000 Americans were killed) and maybe it was, but I think it should have been "Get Out of Bed!" In fact, I think the alarm clock has been buzzing since 1979 and we have continued to hit the snooze button and roll over for a few more minutes of peaceful sleep since then.

It was a cool fall day in November 1979 in a country going through a religious and political upheaval when a group of Iranian students attacked and seized the American Embassy in Tehran. This seizure was an outright attack on American soil; it was an attack that held the world's most powerful country hostage and paralyzed a presidency. The attack on this sovereign U. S. embassy set the stage for events to follow for the next 23 years.

America was still reeling from the aftermath of the Vietnam experience and had a serious threat from the Soviet Union when then-President Carter had to do something. He chose to conduct a clandestine raid in the desert. The ill-fated mission ended in ruin, but stood as a symbol of America's inability to deal with terrorism.

America's military had been decimated and downsized/right sized since the end of the Vietnam War. A poorly trained, poorly equipped and poorly organized military was called on to execute a complex mission that was doomed from the start.

Shortly after the Tehran experience, Americans began to be kidnapped and killed throughout the Middle East. America could do little to protect her citizens living and working abroad. The attacks against US soil continued.

In April of 1983 a large vehicle packed with high explosives was driven into the US Embassy compound in Beirut. When it exploded, it killed 63 people.

The alarm went off again and America hit the Snooze Button once more.

Then, just six short months later, a large truck heavily laden down with over 2500 pounds of TNT smashed through the main gate of the US Marine Corps headquarters in Beirut, and 241 US servicemen were killed. America mourned her dead and hit the Snooze Button once more.

Two months later, in December 1983, another truck loaded with explosives was driven into the US Embassy in Kuwait, and America continued her slumber.

The following year, in September 1984, another van was driven into the gate of the US Embassy in Beirut and America slept.

Soon the terrorism spread to Europe. In April 1985 a bomb exploded in a restaurant frequented by US soldiers in Madrid.

Then in August a Volkswagen loaded with explosives was driven into the main gate of the US Air Force Base at Rhein-Main; 22 were killed and the snooze alarm was buzzing louder and louder as US interests were continually attacked.

Fifty-nine days later a cruise ship, the Achille Lauro was hijacked and we watched as an American in a wheelchair was singled out of the passenger list and executed.

The terrorists then shifted their tactics to bombing civilian airliners with the bombing of TWA Flight 840 in April of 1986 that killed 4 and the most tragic bombing, Pan Am Flight 103 over Lockerbie, Scotland in 1988, killing 259.

Clinton treated these terrorist acts as crimes; in fact we are still trying to bring these people to trial. These are acts of war.

The wake up alarm was getting louder and louder.

The terrorists decided to bring the fight to America. In January 1993, two CIA agents were shot and killed as they enter CIA headquarters in Langley, Virginia.

The following month, February 1993, a group of terrorists were arrested after a rented van packed with explosives was driven into the underground parking garage of the World Trade Center in New York City. Six people were killed and over 1000 were injured. Still this was a crime and not an act of war?

The Snooze alarm was depressed again.

Then in November1995 a car bomb exploded at a US military complex in Riyadh, Saudi Arabia killing seven service men and women.

A few months later in June of 1996, another truck bomb exploded only 35 yards from the US military compound in Dhahran, Saudi Arabia. It destroyed the Khobar Towers, a US Air Force barracks, killing 19 and injuring over 500. The terrorists were getting braver and smarter as they saw that America does not respond decisively.

They moved to coordinate their attacks in a simultaneous attack on two US embassies in Kenya and Tanzania. These attacks were planned with precision.

They killed 224. America responded with cruise missile attacks and went back to sleep.

The USS Cole was docked in the port of Aden, Yemen for refueling on 12 October 2000, when a small craft pulled along side the ship and exploded killing 17 US Navy Sailors. Attacking a US War Ship is an act of war, but we sent the FBI to investigate the crime and went back to sleep.

And of course you know the events of 11 September 2001. Most Americans think this was the first attack against US soil or in America. How wrong they are! America has been under a constant attack since 1979 and we chose to hit the snooze alarm and roll over and go back to sleep.

In the news lately we have seen lots of finger pointing from every high official in government over what they knew and what they didn't know. But if you've read the papers and paid a little attention I think you can see exactly what they knew. You don't have to be in the FBI or CIA or on the National Security Council to see the pattern that has been developing since 1979.

The President is right on when he says we are engaged in a war. I think we have been in a war for the past 23 years, and it will continue until we as a people decide enough is enough.

America needs to "Get out of Bed" and act decisively now. America has been changed forever. We have to be ready to pay the price and make the sacrifice to ensure that our way of life continues. We cannot afford to keep hitting the snooze button again and again and roll over and go back to sleep.

After the attack on Pearl Harbor, Admiral Yamamoto said "...it seems all we have done is awakened a sleeping giant." This is the message we need to disseminate to terrorists around the world.

This is not a political thing to be hashed over in an election year this is an AMERICAN thing. This is about Our Freedom and the Freedom of Our Children in years to come.

Time to wake up !!!


Now, does anyone really think any current president would have been behind all of these attacks for the last 23 years?
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Review by Voxxylady
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great! The perfect read for a newbie, and the rest of us. *Smile* It had me chuckling and admiring the imagination of it!
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Review of To Shenandoah  
Review by Voxxylady
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very nice! I really like how you weave social ideals in without making it sound preachy, equating a single human relationship with human relations in general. There are a lot of effective opposites going on: a simple story with complicated issues, different definitions of honor, images versus reality, etc. Very psychological and intelligent, but also fun to read. *Smile*

One minor thing:
Rather than argue with her breach of propriety, the better part of valor, and another instinct long submerged, told him to close the door and so he did, as he turned to face her wrath yet again.

The first part of this sounds like him talking, but "told him" is suggesting she is. It was the only slightly confusing thing I found that didn't clear itself. *Wink*

I'll be back to read more.
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Review by Voxxylady
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is great! Thank you *Smile* It will be so much easier to add items this way instead of copy/paste and then changing formatting!

This site just keeps getting better!
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Review of Artist's Way  
Review by Voxxylady
Rated: E | (5.0)
I almost never give a 5 rating, but I like poetry that makes me think and your words did an excellent job of both describing and allowing room for interpretation.

I love the mixture of words pulled from several different arts and meshed together. Beautiful!

I see nothing to offer in the way of suggestions, and therefore, the 5.
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Review by Voxxylady
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
My first thought is the category of this piece should be "opinion" instead of "non-fiction." It is obviously well-planned and thought out, with plenty of supporting detail. However, there are points that are not quite correct.

<<And he was willing to bring us into the first pre-emptive strike in the history of the United States; and with it, the disdain and anger of nearly all the nations of the world.>>

First, he most definitely was not the first president to order a pre-emptive strike. Under Clinton's regime, our soldiers have been in many countries doing ... what exactly? Nothing that has been at all productive, but it has been much quieter and people haven't made an issue BECAUSE it was kept quieter. Our service people have died all over the world accomplishing exactly nothing. But Clinton was quiet about it. President Bush didn't try to hide what he was doing, and he made sure to give our service people what they needed to accomplish the mission (which, btw, Kerry voted against doing although he voted in support of the war).

Second, most of the countries were with us, not against us. The minority of the world's population were angry at us. Many other countries were in there fighting with us. Some still are. The list of support was posted on the White House website. It far outnumbered the opposers.

<<The attack on Iraq is illegal in the eyes of the world and the United Nations. First and foremost, the United Nations charter states that it is the “the supreme law of the land.”>>

The UN is supposed to protect its members against terrorism. Apparently, it wasn't doing so. Terrorists have been attacking us for over a decade and nothing has been done. Remember the FIRST bombing of the Trade Center? Remember our Navy ship that was attacked with our people killed? There are many other examples. Where has the UN been in helping to protect us against these criminals? We have been attempting peaceful solutions for over a decade. Clinton said the attackers would be sought out and punished. They weren't. So they kept coming back. Bullies don't stop if you tap their hands and ask them nicely not to do it again.

<<Second, the invasion in Iraq was most simply unprovoked. Saddam Hussein was never an imminent threat to the United States or to the freedom thereof. Hussein could never imaginably be, in any case, a physical threat to the United States.>>

And people would have said that about Bin Laden before 9/11, also. Hussein's thugs have been here threatening us. Our intelligence people know that. They know more than the general public does and we should all remember that.

Yes, there is always a threat when madmen go unchecked. Because he was slaughtering another race in his own country and not us, we should ignore it? He was gaining power. He was getting more dangerous as time passed. If we had followed the UN orders, we would simply have given him more time to gain more power; and then more of our people, and more of Iraq's people, would have been lost when the UN finally decided he should be stopped. That is, IF they ever would have decided to stop him instead of ignoring his crimes.

<<War is the most despicable act of mankind.>>

Is it? They were warned. They didn't comply. Their people knew it was coming and left in droves before our attack because they were warned. More despicable than war is Hussein and his sons attempting to decimate a whole race of people, and to completely devalue and destroy the women and children he had rule over. If the war did nothing more than free those women and children from the torture they were living through, was it really not worth it? I wouldn't want my daughter to have to live that way. Hussein and his "government" were a major crime against humanity. Are criminals not supposed to be stopped? He was hurting his people. We are helping them. But the media doesn't choose to announce all of the good we are doing there or to publish all the interviews from now free Iraqis who are extremely grateful. Pick up a veteran's magazine. It will tell you the truth about what is happening, unlike our liberal media.

As an opinion piece, this was well-written, although it would have benefitted from more paragraph breaks. As a non-fiction piece, the support for the "facts" weren't quite there.

Oh, I've been part of a military family for nearly 17 years now. I hurt for every service member we lose. I would hurt more if the terrorists are allowed again to attack our innocent civilians who are unarmed and unprepared, including our children.

Not having proof doesn't make something untrue.
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Review of Uneducated  
Review by Voxxylady
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really enjoyed reading this and will add you to my favorites to watch for the continuation. *Smile* I love the humor and the style is very easy to read, professional and fairly polished. There were just a few things I caught:

<<I went back to browsing the “New Releases”. >>

The period should be inside the quotation -> "New Releases." There were several places you did this.

<<“There you are Joshua. ... such a stern looking man.>>

You need to add a comma -> "There you are, Joshua..."
Also a hyphen in "stern-looking"

<<“Ok Matthias... >>

Use the full spelling of okay instead of ok, and a comma -> "Okay, Matthias"

<<“It was nice meeting you Lisa.>>
should be -> "nice meeting you, Lisa"
and the last line -> "Goddess, please."

There were several other places a comma needed to be inserted.

But, all minor things. *Smile* Oh, you have "yes" instead of "eyes" at one spot.

I generally focus more on style, etc. than just on grammar/punctuation, but I didn't see anything except punctuation to critique! Nice flow and great story line!

Looking forward to the rest.
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Review of Soup  
Review by Voxxylady
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I'm rather picky about poetry, given that I'm not a big poetry buff. My favorite is ee cummings and this has that kind of feel. I like poems that reflect a feeling without throwing it at you and those that allow personal interpretation. This has both qualities. Very nicely done.

Nothing to critique, really, except "cuppa jo" bothers me a bit, though I'm not sure why. Too slangy, maybe? I'm not sure it exactly fits with the rest of the mood, but it could just be me.

I enjoyed reading this!
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Review of Natural Magic  
Review by Voxxylady
Rated: E | (3.5)
Your description is nice and the writing fairly clean. My main thoughts are first, that I'm not drawn in to caring about Annie. Who is she and why should I be concerned about her dreams? Children daydreaming at school is a fairly cliche event so let us know why she is different at the beginning. What is special about her? Or what is her main need other than daydreaming?

Also, the three men making such a difference in her life is too vague. I'm not following who or what they are supposed to represent. Maybe build on that just a bit and it would give you more of the story line you feel you don't have *Wink*
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