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Rated: E | (4.0)
You have some interesting characters and a plot that reminds me of a story about an invisible man written many years ago. I don't remember the name of the author. I was able to visualize the scenes easily and follow the events without any problems.

I was distracted and taken out of the story by the way the story is formatted. Some of the s sentences are divided exceedingly far apart which at first caused me to misreading parts of the story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your invisible man story word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine you sitting in your writing space writing a line each day. I do not always write. It's great that you write a line each day. Your poetic story kept me interested in reading.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm with you about the good ole days and can relate. You reminded me of many bands and songs I remember well. These days music is for me a change in genre, but I still like the songs of years ago. Thank you for the musical reminder and journey down memory lane.

Thank you for writing and sharing your musical word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
In your poetic story about the life changes before and after the pandemic you showed the contrasts that I was able to see in my minds eye. The pandemic is a character readers get to know through your carefully chosen words that being the events to life. I hope we have learned from this experience and that our future will be bright and happy.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
These nice characters are easy to get to know. Their adventure kept me interested in reading the story from beginning to end. I was able to imagine the events and the crash was haring, but fortunately it turned out ok.

Thank you for writing this story word art and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
The rhythm of your poem smoothly guided me through this story. I got to know the character and visualize the scenes.

There are extra spaces between the commas that could possible distract readers. word , word for example.


Thank you for writing and sharing your love poem story with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems this person forced a way in for what reason(s) i know not, but perhaps there is something special here. Your poem story is easy to read. I visualized the events and although am not familiar with the sone, I guess there is hope for a friendship.

Thank you for writing and sharing your song word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Within me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Yes, this is sad, but also I believe there is hope because embracing feelings no matter what they are can be beneficial. Getting to know those feelings and making peace with them helps peace abound in all areas and through all of life. Life is a precious gift and when we have peace within and without we have a full life. These thoughts manifested while I was reading your poetic story.

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Review of Keep Reading!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Imlike the way you show hope and the desire for life under different circumstances because life is a precious gift. Another point you showed me is that no matter the circumstNCES AS LONG AS THERE IS LIFE AND TURNING THE PAGE BRINGS FORTH ANOTHER TIME, DAY, OR MOMENT WHEN THINGS CAN CHANGE FOR THE BETTER AS LONG AS WE DHAVE THE STRENGTH AND PATIENCE TO ENDOUR.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND SHARING YOUR WORD ART WITH ME AND WDC MEMBERS.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! This story is drama, thriller, and a bit of mystery thrown together to make something that would keep readers interested. Unfortunately the answer to the question is hanging over the readers head. I hope this is a chapter and more of the story will be revealed. The characters, scene, plot are believable and have room for emotions to be shown. Emotions help the reader to know the character, enjoy the plot, and keep interest in reading fueled.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for showing me the wonderful adventure you and your family enjoyed. I felt like I was with you. The event with the mother bear although a bit frightening seems to be a blessing because you were able to enjoy momma bear and her cubs in a natural environment. I'm glad you and everyone was safe during your family adventure. Glory to God for blessing you and your family with safety and a wildlife experience few get to know.

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Review of Whispers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I completely agree with this poetic story about being kind and not hurtful because this is what we should do according to the scripture teachings. You explained clearly the choices humans have to consider when we interact with each other. I felt this poem was hopeful for us to be kind to each other.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a concise, persuasive, conversation to show what copy writing is, how it can be learned and the potential for a good income. This is a good add article or whatever it is called to encourage the right people to venture into the world of copy writing. Now I'm curious to learn more about this writing potential that could generate income. I intend researching this topic in the near future.

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Review of A Seasonal Thing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I expected George to succumb to the cold of winter, but the way you showed how this happened was unexpected. The early arrival of spring seemed to be unreal. It was like a dream or hallucination that drew Goerge outside in his sinner outfit.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about George and the gypsy with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
On the surface it seems the person may be someone popular in movies, TV, sports, or similar places where they are seen but not personally known. It is like the energy between two people who have never met is rippling between them. Or perhaps it is an imagination creating the best friend or special someone.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh how interesting because I feel you as writer and character all in one. You have a vivid and unique imagination. I suppose your story is a haunting journey through a characters nightmares of sanity and insanity or an imagination taking an adventure in the deep sleep of nightmares.

Thank you for writing and sharing your impactful emery and character with me and WdC members through your word art.


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Review of Mask  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the information about this poetry form.

We have choices which is what you showed best with your poetic story. The scenes are easy to imagine. The rhythm carried me smoothly from word to word.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of All  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your love story and sharing your life through your words. It is fantastic knowing how two people can accept each others ups and downs, the challenges of life, and the quirks. I'm very glad you and your special person have a very strong relationship. I wish you two the very best.

Thank you for writing and sharing your lovely and loveably love story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sleepy Cow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A starry eyed cow is the image that popped into my head because of your enjoyable story. The characters are easy to get to know, The scenes vivid, and the stars numerous blinking and winking me through the clearly explained events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your nice word art story with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
One approach I use is to interweave character information with scenes, actions and emotions. Another option would be to create short stories about each character and eventually connect these short stories together as the plot moves forward. After making a connection you could have the characters in two different groups that eventually need and help each other do whatever your story requires. Perhaps thin king of stars and co-stars might help or stars who like in Ironside for example work together as one group and the rest as stars in another group doing something together. Having many character in a story is a challenge for the writer and the reader.

You are on a creative adventure. I hope you enjoy he journey. Also, being a mad scientist is ok, mix and match, experiment with possible options and see what works. Showing emotions will keep readers interested.

Please keep in touch and let me know how things are going, thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your ideas and word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
You ask very important questions for consideration. What if? IS A GOOD START FOR STORIES AND ALSO FOR LIFE DECISIONS. Oops not yelling, sorry accidentally hit the caps lock. I hope you discovered many answers to the questions. Did you capitalize only some of the [I] or was this accidental?

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Review of Saltimbocca  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Seeing a banquet lated out on a very long table or a special relationship, either way this can fit into a story especially one with a unique twist. Your words, plot, characters, scenes, and style are dear and kept me reading.

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Review of In a Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe this is the first poem I have read of this type. Paying attention to the story as well as the foundation that holds your story together, the poem type, I was engaged found no distractions and enjoyed my reading experience. The first part hope for love followed by the slow realization of love being late or perhaps not arriving, and then the finaLITY OF LOVE NOT ENTERING INTO THE LIFE OF THE PERSON COVERED THE CHANGES IN THE STORY WELL AND I FOLLOWED THE STORY WITH HOPE, THEN SLIGHT DOUBT, THEN THE FINAL BLOW OF SADNESS TO REALIZE THAT THE CHARACTER WOULD NOT EXPERIENCE COMPANIONSHIP AND LOVE THAT DAY.

THANK YOU FOR WRITING AND SHARING YOU WORD ART WITH ME AND WDC MEMBERS. Oops, caps lock.


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Review of Say What?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for the laughter, I needed that in a huge waY. OREO IS FINALLY COMING HOME AFTER BEING AT THE VETS FOR SEVERAL DAYS. You showed a nice scene between mother and child, helped me to know the characters, and gave me laughter at the end of your interesting story.

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Review of Imperfection  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Being real to self and also showing who a person is to others is important especially in a relationship. You gave me somethings to consider. Showing what will eventually crack and give way to the truth is like displaying or showing a lie. When people trust each other by telling the truth and showing the truth any relationship is better in the long run. These things came to my mind as I read your story about showing the real person, being patient, and giving space and time for each other.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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