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Review of Giveaway  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the push and pull of both sides of a reaction as I read about embracing something verses eschewing something. Visualizing a spotlight on black and white came to my mind. I saw in my imagination the revealing of a persons reactions to events which showed people who and what they liked and disliked.

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Review of Small Comforts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your poem about the kingdom and the king because I imagined funny pictures of each event. The rhythm jauntily took me through the story. The coughing dust in my mind had all kinds of funny movements.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your amazing and funny story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Stake Your Claim  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm, word order, story, and scene wove a love story that I could visualize. Two lovers enjoying each other through the night completely invested in each other moved toward a maddening extract or was it ending. I think this is a possible two ending depending on how the reader views this story.

To help potential readers find your poetic story you can use genres such as romance.love, experience, personal, or others.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It sounds like a mix of Frankenstein, Outer Limits, and Twilight Zone with a bit of comedy thrown in because of the brightly colored flowers, pink eyes, and wobbliness. The matter of fact dialogue fit the story well. Characters, scenes, dialogue, and story plot work well together and are realistic.

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This poetic story touched me and uplifted my spirit. It felt like Jesus was sitting across from me telling His story. I am in agreement, yes Jesus is my savior.

Thank you for writing and sharing this spiritually uplifting word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pay Attention  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can enjoy nonsense because there are times when we need to relax and enjoy life to the fullest. Something that might be meaningless on the surface might have treasures underneath. Living fully in the moment is a powerful and often a very good thing to do. There are times when letting go and being honest with ones self is freeing and enjoyable. Letting go of troubles is like leaving slavery behind. These thoughts came to me as I read your nonsense word art.

Thank you for writing and sharing your nonsense word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the blossom as your choice of an example because blossoms have beauty and when we thrive this is a beautiful sight. Your poem is very encouraging and for this I thank you.

Some genres to help potential readers find your poem are: nature, environment, inspirational, or self help.

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Review of About Dad  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
You created some down to earth characters who I hope are allowed to do more on the page or screen in the future. The scene is a typical get to know you scene bringing realism to your story. Dialogue helped me get to know the characters and tone of the situation.

Genres that would help potential readers find your story are: drama, experience, or relationship.

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Review of Little Children  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The message of hope for humanity to take care of and properly guide the children is clear. Your words smoothly guided me through your song story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your song story of hope for the future word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of after the bees  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know when it is water it seems the pollinators are dead, but many are slumbering/hibernating. I could see in my minds eye the drab and emptiness of winter as the longing for colorful spring nagged and waited to have release again.

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Review of Time Bandit  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh the lure of French Fries. I was able too know the characters in brief, see the scene in my imagination, and chuckled when I reached the end of your story. Thinking about those French Fries made may mouth water and I could smell them too. I should find that time machine so I can go along and have French Fries.

Thank you for writing this interesting story about a time machine, French Fries, and Hero in the making and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Shame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In my imagination I saw Rosy pointing to the spot. I felt like that spot was going to become alive, jump up and wrap its self around me. I am agreement with you that these and other horrible acts are not just a one person shame, but a shame and blot on society because so many people turn blind eyes to these horrors.

Thank you for writing about this personal and emotional subject and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story tis sad, challenging, and even a warning. I thought about communication or the lack of it while reading your love story.

Genres that would help potential readers and The Quills find this love story are: drama, emotional, experience, personal, relationship, romance/love.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poetic words I envisioned a relationship between people, people and words, and people and things. All these seem to fit your poems story in different ways. The heart of a friend, lover, married couple, artist, writer and words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about relationships, emotions, and i remember dreams now, with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sea Story  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The eyes haunt and I wonder if this was worse than the monster who stole the maiden from the lad. Your story has many elements of interest that kept me reading. I got to know the characters, see the scenes, and be involved in the adventure. There was nothing to distract me from reading. I hope to acquire a copy of the anthology.

Thank you for writing and sharing your steam punk adventure word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
ABC's are a place to start getting something on to paper or screen, but you want to create something fantastic and new, I get it. Please consider this: You are unique, therefore whatever word art you create is unique and fresh. Only you can write like you. These thoughts flooded me as I read your words about writing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the challenges of writing with demand WdC members.


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Review of Slugger  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The best part of hour story is when Jared's mother supported his efforts. One person gave their support to another person and the entire team won. You illustrated how now person can make a positive difference. I got to meet and know the characters, the scene is clear, and the actions are realistic.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with demand WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I get it and thinking is the key. Research is very important, but also being able to reason and consider the elements of a subject require learning how to understand the basics of language, word meanings, and history. Your poem encouraged me to think about the young people who sadly do not have the basic skills to do critical thinking. Your words spoke directly to me.

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Review of Saved by a Child  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the way you presented this story about Valentines Day because the characters were interesting and acted normally, the scene with Alex playing his dad as a valentines gift to his mom was something a child would in a unique way, and because your story has a happy ending. Just writing about Alex saving the marriage would have been dull if it was simply statement rather than a story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Alex and saving the marriage with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I imagined a clueless turkey enjoying life and totally unaware of its fate because Thanksgiving was drawing near. I also saw in my minds eye a feast with the turkey the center of attraction, people happily anticipating the delicious meal, and the barnyard quiet a subdued because the turkey was no longer strutting its stuff.

Thank you for writing and sharing your turkey poem story with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Rattlesnake  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like non venomous snakes and respect those with venom. They are beneficial creatures. Venomous sales can be dangerous but given the chance they would flee from humans or other critters unless as you wrote were cornered, surprised, or hunting for food. Your words of warning ring true. I visualized a rattler slithering and through about its bite.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about the rattler.


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Review of Stampede  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I cheer for this wonderful victory because this is the way things should be considered; not by a few but by the many. You made this clear with your word choices and arrangement. I thought about the door mat. People should not be treated like a door mat and run over by a few who have greed driving their actions. I'm glad the carousel still stands.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your historical poetic story about you and writing.com because it touched my heart and uplifted my spirit, I got to know about your history with WdC, and I recalled my experience when I found this website. The rhythm as I read it was bouncy and happy, full of enthusiasm, and showing the community spirit of WdC through the words.

Thank you for writing this poetic story and sharing your word about WdC with me and WdC members.


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Review of After the Rain  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
You wrote a nice story about a beloved dog and her family which I enjoyed reading. I got to know the dog and family through your scene description. The characters are realistic and acted according to their circumstances. It would have been nice to give the dog a pat.

One thing distracted me from focusing on your story. When you use had it is PresenTense and not pasTense. Showing the story in the now keeps the reader in the action. Doe example when you write S/he had whatever, it is not as compelling as he did whatever or had whatever. He went to the story is better than had went to the store. Please ask any questions you might have.

Your story has a lot of potential. Editing will bring it into a livelier state for readers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Love Authenticity  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your words I felt the sincerity of them, the purest intentions, and the unfettered need to share your feelings with readers. I imagined love as an entity or spirit, or energy that is light, true to its self, and unblemished. It is to me like pure unblemished and honest affection for humanity, nature, and life. Your words evoked these ideas.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story about pure love with me and WdC members.


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