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Review of Ever-so  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine the boy and dog having a conversation. This story is believable because if people learn a dog's body language they can better understand their dogs. I'm glad Spot finally found his boy.

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Review of Vegan Boy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate to your story because I have known people who are on the spectrum, but I don't like the labeling and even when this is changed it is still a label. One thing I learned about this situation is to focus more on the strengths/interests/talents rather than the obstacles/challenges. Your story is a good insight into a wonderful person who I got to meet because you introduced him to me through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
What a friend we have in a scarf when it comes to being decent and being arrested. I chuckled at the ending and pictured the son headed out the door with a scarf around his neck which reminded me of a dog collar. I had no trouble imagining the scene, characters, and dialogue for this story.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the wolves in the den, hunting, and eventually, the entire pack gathered together to explore and hunt with the newest members of the wolf pack. I imagined howling as I finished reading your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about the wolves with me and WdC members.


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Review of Clowning Around  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Horror of an old prank can be a mystery and horror depending on what lies under the clown wig. My imagination can run free and wild with this one. The story, characters, scene, and viewpoint are believable. I could see and hear everything as I read your words.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The bossy one breaks up a friendship because the get-along wanted to go home, well! when I read about her husband being bossy I thought maybe this girl somehow was changed and was her husband stalking her, my imagination had fun with that. I could see the scene, hear the conversation, and watch the characters while reading with no distractions in your story.

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Review of Welcome Home  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw this poem as a welcome back to you from you. I could see the mind chatter as I read your poem. It looked to me like bits and pieces of something out of focus moving around. I can only experience being lost as a child in a store and looking for my mother, but I guess this kinda applies as something to help me understand.

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Review of Snowed In  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! I enjoyed the conversation. In the beginning, was not the bark so I wasn't certain who was talking to whom, but it didn't take me long to figure it out. Considering this as comedy I figured Baily for a person or possibly a dog. Now that I've read the story it's funny, scary, and a neat person and dog adventure.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember the years seemed to be endless while I was in school. After school was completed the years became faster moving. Time waits for no one and now that I'm an adult I see this as fact. You wrote an easy-to-read and understand poem. I could feel and imagine the scenes as you showed them to me.

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Review of Sure Shot  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
As I read your poem I pictured the steel gun and the trembling hand. I could hear the loud reverberation as the trigger was squeezed and the projectile catapulted from the barrel. The sadness as you describe the scene of blood and brain and a soul lifeless. I can relate to the empty loneliness because of an experience many years ago. I can still hear my sister's wails and remember those precious times with my nephew which stopped on that fateful day.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Colorado Moon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw you riding a horse and traveling while dreaming and thinking of your love. I felt the weather as you described it and felt like I was riding with you. Congratulations on being published.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Love for poetry  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Writing poetry and sharing emotions is exactly what you accomplished in this word art because I could feel the longing to be a poem, the intense urging to become the words arranged and showing a story, and the love exuding from the words because these are loved and cherished. In my imagination, I saw you writing beauty as I read your poem. I could feel the struggle to get it exactly as it should be and then the joy when it all worked out.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Tingling Thoughts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems you retain a lot of information and your thoughts roam about but do not leave, correct? I visualized them bouncing about while you made peace with the situation. It was like ping-pong balls gently moving around.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The rhythm of your words is like singing. The story is very realistic and shows how we do not know when we will leave this place and give up our spirits. The time of death is not known and you explain how we should be grateful for each day and not to waste our time. Life is precious as shown in your words. I pictured enjoying life as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art about how precious life is with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
The last sentence about peering beyond the veil created two thoughts. The first was the veil between heaven and earth. The second was the veil of story that writers venture through as they bravely create stories not knowing every detail. Inviting me to learn of this great adventure is most appreciated because you showed a wonderful character(s) picture of the one under the tree and the other asking questions introducing each of us to each other. The scene leaped out from the screen and wrapped itself about me so that I knew it and felt the essence of the changes. The emotions made it all very real and believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Gone Wrong  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The picture you showed me is vivid and I could feel the pain of love and heartbreak even when you used opposite statements. Your poem cried to me yearning to be freed from the pain and yet longed for love. I could imagine the situation and hope things are better now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of A New Rule-r  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Thank you for writing an uplifting and joyful poem because it is in my opinion exactly what people need to focus on someone's best side and realize they are valuable. It also explains to people that they have value and that outside appearances are the most important aspect of who they are.

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Review of Surprise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The ending of your story made me chuckle, thank you. I followed your characters and listened to them talk as they proceeded toward the surprise. Your plot is believable and kept me interested in your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the trip to the surprise with me and WdC members.


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Review of REVIEWING SECTION  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Blog City has a nice collection of resources listed that I want to read after getting a huge list of other things completed. The design and layout of the items are orderly and easy to read.

Thank you for writing and sharing this resource word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Great Unknown  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt like your words were giving me a hug because of your respect for respect. I agree that this powerful emotion is something we need to be mindful of every day. You wrote clearly your thoughts and showed me a vivid picture. Reading your word art for me is easy and I understood your point.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art of thoughts with me and WdC members.


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Review of Life, huh  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You created intriguing characters that are believable because they acted as many humans do under such circumstances. The scene and plot are realistic and the story is delivered in a way that shows the reader what is happening keeping the reader in the story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about life with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote an interesting and informative article about water and the effects of not having clean water available that I can relate to and understand.

Thank you for writing and sharing your informative word art about having clean water with me and WdC members.


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Review of Charon  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seemed correct for me to read this poem very slowly and take in the sounds of the words listening to their dreary and doleful song. Images of desperation and despair floated into my vision. I could feel the coolness of the environment. The taste of death danced in my mouth as the words flowed along. It smelled like dankness and swirled about the fallen then into my nostrils.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fortunately for me, I have no hammock. I guess I'm in good company, right?

Lead on my friend and let's get this movement into gear.

I enjoyed your story because my imagination pictured someone stuck in the hammock. They were very, very thin. I guess you could admit their bones were visible without needing an X-ray machine. Another image was of someone quite old and frail needing a crane to lift them from the hammock. I had a lot of fun reading your story. Now where's the lounge?

Thank you tracker for writing, lounging, and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt as if emptiness grabbed me and dragged me into a dark hole because the story about a nice weekend turned into the grip of Alzheimer's. You showed how this disease can rob a person's mind and also take others with it on a journey nobody wants to experience. In the end, I felt like it was the end because as this disease continues people often are the living dead.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Alzheimners with me and WdC members.


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