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Review of The Stranger  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
In your poetic story, you ask, a very, very important question worthy of much contemplation and soul searching. You got my attention. My spirit stirred and my heart paused a moment. It also reminded me of how human we are and how limited our understanding. Another reminder is of my exploration of the light and dark side of myself that because of mediacl/weather issues I postponed and now it might be time to continue exploring this and other things.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Resonance  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your poem caused me to feel like this poetic story was a huge struggle. I felt the loneliness, questioning of reality, and the tug of war about what to do for the future. There was a slight humerous ness because of the mentioning of "living alone outside this show". The rhythm worked well and was a smooth reading experience.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Mountain We Never Mention  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt, saw, and heard in my mind the wonderful change from officially stiff to a more relaxed people are here business change. The beginning of your story is a bit heavy and it should be so readers feel the heaviness switch to a lighter office experience.

Thank you for writing and sharing your office story word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Never Enough Cows  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I appreciate the chuckle when I read the last line of your story. The placebo effect does at times make a positive change for people. Your story is realistic, the characters are believable, and the situation reminds me of stories and times when people sold all kinds of elixirs and stuff.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Blitzed And Sleepy #1 (i guess!?)  

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Odd oddball here to let you know you are not alone. Your imaginary friend shows me you have a vivid writers mind. It also lets me know you think differently then many people expect; that's OK,. I get it. My friend says was hatched and crawled out from under a rock. Basically your writing is clear. I did need to think through the part about your Imaginary friend disappearing from view when you became a teenager. For me because I have limited vision the font you used is a bit difficult to read, but it does look like you used a typewriter.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Wrong Key  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story is an interesting adventure for thought and consideration. I have experienced winding up in the wrong place or meeting someone unknown and having an adventure because of such encounters. I can relate to the experience your character had in your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Boy Who Collected Silence  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, wow, wow! I can kinda relate to this story because my world is different also. I've had vision limitations all of my life and therefore see things in a limited way, but also see them differently. My friend says I was hatched and crawled out from under a rock, maybe she is right. The quiet waiting is something I've experienced because I have waited for many things people who have so called normal vision take for granted. Waiting to go here and there for example helps me relate to your character. I feel as if I know Elias.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about Elias and your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Ignored tears  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sadness, despair, depression, and man y similar emotions came to my mind as I read your poetic story. I felt sadness especially through your words. I hope things have changed for the better.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of She Protests Too Much  

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh My! Life has strange ways when it comes to relationships and you wrote a great story illustrating how love tends to hang in the background waiting to be kindled again when least expected. I could feel the longing through your words and was snapped out of focusing on this when "honey I'm home" ended your story, good going.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Long Goodbye Has Concluded  

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)

I felt as if I met your mother. She seemed to be a wonderful person. I know the emptiness because I also no longer have my mother.
I understand how dementia robs a person because I had a friend who diagnosed with this medical problem.

...alk on as it nothing was amiss...I think you mean (if)

...d fun it humiliating her. S... (in)?

...y how many supply teaching days I've had this year. I suspect it is un...(supply?; what do you mean?)


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Review of The Perfect Vacation  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story is sad and yet quite funny. I appreciated the laugh, thank you. I was able to feel the stress and disappointment when you discovered what you thought you were going to get was taken away and replaced by what you did not order/want for your vacation. I am very glad you were able to make the best of the situation and fund joy while vacationing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your vacation challenges word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Dishonesty Is A Curse On Our Society  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your words I felt a heaviness and foreboding because of the choices some people make and the results that they have in their lives. Dishonesty or deception can devastate relationships and ruin a persons life, but worse is the person to whom the dishonest person betrayed their friendship or family relationship.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of In My Way 2026  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The prefect is exactly how I saw your vies of the Father. It made me feel content, peaceful, and uplifted in spirit. I felt your joy and gladness through your words. For me this is a very good way to introduce people to The Father and all He has in-store for them.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about The Father with me and WdC members.


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Review of Poems and fiction  

Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh! The horror of it all. Devising a murder so that in theory nobody could figure out who the murder is because of the helpers and decision to complete this murder elsewhere. I shudder to think of someone devious planning to kill someone. Chills ran up my spine as I read your story.

I'm not certain; did he accidentally get poisoned because unknowingly he eat some of the chicken?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art murder story with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Stranger to Myself.  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the heavy darkness and saw a figure struggling to find light. Falling into the depths of despair and similar emotions can be challenging to get out of and away from, but it is possible especially when family and friends help. I hold onto the hope that you have support and are able to make positive changes.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Selling the House  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I felt the stress and saw two people struggling with what was important to them. It seemed teamwork was slowly falling apart, but hope for a future together was still alive and struggling to remain in the relationship.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about moving word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of DASHING THROUGH THE SNOW  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm with you about finding contentment, peace, and joy. Your positivity makes this poetic story come alive and invite readers to see a different positive perspective.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic and positive word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Deferring Gratification in Self. P1.  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poetic words I felt the internal struggle to make changes, make a positive change or several, and find peace of mind while taking steps toward the goal. Hope loomed in front of the view as you pursued it and managed to cling to this intent. I believe hope is a good motivator and will keep a person working toward goals.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Better Starting Point  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
The spookiest part of your story is the evolving and learning aspect. There is information around about AI learning, evolving, and becoming self aware leading to defending its self. Your story is believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about AI and possibilities with me and WdC members.


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Review of Moments like this.  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems to me that the heat is sapping the life out of this garden and the longing for shade is intense. The colorful beauty is wilted away and the few struggling flowers are in jeopardy of being cut by the lawnmower and tossed into the compost heap. The beauty of this garden might be restored after the maintenance is completed.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Second Chances  

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Names according to your story are very important. It's good we have second chances and can make better decisions. I hope your relationship with Sarah went well for you. Perhaps there is more to this story in another chapter. Relationships can have surprises.

Thank you for writing and sharing your challenging second chances story with me and WdC members.


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Review of My Moods  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem reminded me about my focus to be positive and enjoy the journey of life. I see challenges rather than defeat and realize that sometimes it is about the timing rather than not being able to have or do something. Your poem brought these ideas to my mind. I feel like it is encouraging rather than defeating, probably because I prefer the positive point of view.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Transportation Analyst  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the sadness, bewilderment, and unease because although you are considered "best worker" I wonder if or why someone else was not picked for a pink slip. You have marketable knowledge that you can potentially shift to different analizing projects. I hope you found another better job.

Thank you for writing and sharing your pink slip story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Too late  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh My! I imagined the action of getting ready for the trip, saw everything packed, and then visualized the virus arriving with a huge grin before Tricia got on the plane. My first thought is "Why is it humanity manages to procrastinate so well?"

Thank you for writing and sharing this story about procrastinating with me and WdC members.


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Review of Moments Together: A Happy Gift for Them  

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the stormy devastation, the dismay, and hope for the future in your poetic story. relating to storms because of my lifelong experiences with them brought your story to life for me.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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