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Review of Look Away  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I felt the shame, horror, fear, and other emotions through your words. The visuals your words evoked made me want to help but also I considered briefly closing my eyes to get past the sight of people in dire straights. Also, I considered the so called governments programs that are supposed to help people get back on their feet. My biggest hope is for the people who are rich beyond the ability to spend it all before they die, reach out and help people improve their situations.

Thank you for clearly writing about the shamefulness of a tough situation and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sometimes people do not turn out to be what we imagine or think they are. Sometimes people do not show who they truly are when it is most important. Sometimes giving up something that seems important or precious is rewarded by something better. These thoughts came to me after reading your poem story. Your poem has a nice rhythm, is easy for me to understand, and shows the emotions of the events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I agree that to love is a choice we decide to embrace. Especially today your poetic story is heavy because my friend found out her mother died in her sleep last night. I could imagine the points of your story. It is clearly written. It brings up emotions and this makes people feel for the situation and for it kept me reading.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Sled  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
While laughing I uttered "oh no" as I read [“Let’s try it again.”] Your plot is something I can believe, the scene is realistic, the actions are easy to imagine, and the characters are likable which makes me hope they do not hurt themselves. I can remember sledding on snow so can easily relate to your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about sledding downhill with me and WdC members.


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Review of Natural D20  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story exudes love and respect for your special person in your life. I felt the mental spirit of your words that showed your dedication. I visualized the two of you together in a huge hug.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art of love with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought "just the facts, just the useless facts" after reading this short story of amusing characters. I could easily picture the scene, the characters, and their actions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your short story with me and WdC members.


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Review of July Heat  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed your poetic story because I was able to imagine the muscular football players dancing through out the football game wearing appropriate costumes while the spectators viewed this very unusual game. The rhythm according to the way I read your poem matched the events.

Thank you for writing and sharing your words art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Mom Guilt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way your poetic story ended because it goes from one rhythm to another; faster then it slows which for me brings attention to about being enough in a good way. I could see mom struggling and then finding peace and contentment.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Strong Woman  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can tell the strength because it is mentioned several times and the sentences enforce this point. I pictured a spiritually and physically healthy and strong woman sharing her abilities.

Thank you for writing and sharing your strong woman story with me and WdC members.


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Review of In turmoil  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem story is a heavy one especially the ending. I could imagine the scene of restless sleep while battles raged within. Your poem is realistic because I felt like you were telling the story just to me as we sat and enjoyed a beverage. I hope things are much better for you now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Taboo  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The blossoms of positivity, happiness, and other beneficial emotions and thoughts bring through your words beautiful blossoms of bright colors and the garden of hope and joy flourishes. I felt my spirit uplifted and this made me thankful for finding your poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art of positivity with me and WdC members.


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Review of socks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
what neighbors think depends on what they are allowed to know and comment on according to the way I see things. I agree mismatched socks are not accepted socially as the normal way to decide what socks to ware. I imagined mismatched socks frantically trying to find their mates.
ThaNK YOU FOR WRITING AND SHARING YOUR WORD ART WITH ME and WdC members.


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Review of Caddying  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Gulf a game of challenges I do mot invite. I can imagine someone playing gulf and the decides to do something else. The same thing over and over again and again. I guess the intriguing thing about this activity is there are different results. These thoughts came to me while I was reading your words.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.5)
While reading your words I thought about the horrors of many administrations who have squandered tax payer money, weakened military effectiveness, brought in more economic horrors in various ways, and done their best to turn the US into a battle ground so people are weakened by devision and lack of communication.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story looks, smells, and reads the aroma, sight, and plot of the Christmas holidays. I felt as if I were part of the celebration through the senses you touched with your words.

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Review of Snow Bound  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
All for the sake of fueling pride instead of having humility and love toward each other. I could imagine the horrific fighting and ill will towards each other. This is very sad. Going outside into the cold and forsaking the safety and warmth of the house just because of a fight is foolishness and shouldn't have happened. Your story illustrates the weaknesses of humanity very well.

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Review of Crumpled flower  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This story has characters who have the potential to get readers attention provided they do something interesting and intriguing. The scene is believable. I could imagine the encounters and see in my minds eye the actions.

The punctuation leaves much to be desired. It was challenging to read this story fore this reason. I was distracted and had to concentrate to keep track of where an idea began and then stopped. I hope you are able to edit this story and fix the punctuation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Contentment is precious. Knowing ones self also is a wondrous and marvelous thing. Being able to write and share as well as explore is great and fabulous. The expense of the sky and galaxies are like the expanse of the mind. These thoughts materialized as I read your poem. Your poem is easy to read but it brings the reader into vastness. It brings forth ideas. It is also a view into the writers world.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Dawn's Miracle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like deer and have viewed several in MD and AR. They are wonderful creatures. I'm glad Big John rescued Dawn and reunited her with her mother and father. Your story has a good plot, characters, scenery, and action which kept me interested in reading.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Union of Two  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
While reading your poetic story of two people uniting, I visualized vines intertwining which became two people hugging each other. I felt the hope for the future, the dedication, and the willingness to work together. Your poem showed a relationship of strength between two people.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Grammar is not one of my strengths. The page has a nice layout. It is easy to read. I was able to picture in my mind the characters and actions you wrote about in the sentences.

Thank you for writing and sharing your grammar word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your poem story I pictured the drought, wilting plants, dirty vehicles, and saw the clouds gripping tightly to the rain drops refusing to let them go. Your poem is clear and brings forth detailed visuals to my mind.

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Review of Reverie  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I definitely could relate to this story because I have hearing and vision challenges. I use hearing aids and can read Braille. Your story shows well the challenges of being blind and deaf, although John has some vision and hearing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic story shows me someone longing to utter words yet they do not usher forth into the physical realm. The spirit longs for relationship and holds to the hope for kindling of a wonderful outcome. I can see hands reaching out to receive goodness. I’m glad hope still lives.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fake kindness  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You ask important questions about human behavior, which caused me to reflect on my behavior. I'm drawn to be helpful whenever possible. Most of the time, I hope for help in return but do not expect it. I can understand why you see things in this way because people are known by their actions or inactions, which often are disappointing. Your article is clearly written and can be understood. It felt like you were writing from your heart.

Thank you for writing and sharing your thoughts, feelings, and word art with me and WdC members.


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