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Review of My Fault  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your story in poetic form shows me that you are dealing with someone who either can not or will not understand they are being narcissistic about the situation. I can relate because I've dealt with these issues in my life several times between me and people I've tried to help. I hope things have improved.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about a challenging relationship with me and WdC members.


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Review of Say Trees!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your words are like a huge hug from a tree. Thank you for the smile upon my face. I appreciate trees and have great respect for them so I can easily relate to your poetic story and honoring the trees. Trees are wonderful and do many good things for us which I saw within your word story as I imagined the scene of people enjoying the trees.

Thank you for writing and sharing your tree word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Masks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Reading your poem is easy and enjoyable. I understand your clearly written words. The scene is easy to imagine and I felt like I was in your poetic story. Lies seem to be the main subject of this relationship.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story with me and WdC members.


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Review of See What It Is  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your poem is a smooth and rhythmeticly happy type of experience. It made me glad I am reviewing this item for you. A personal invitation to me to spend time with you as we shared ideas and words on a journey together.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and wdC members.


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Review of My Determination  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your kind words showed me a person full of kindness and who has compassion toward people, nature, and self. I felt encouraged by the intentions and willingness to reach out to help people. It was like receiving a hug from you, thank you.

Thank you for writing and sharing what is in your heart and spirit through your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the uplifting story about your relationship with God. I felt the uplifting happiness and joy through your words. My mind pictured you face to face with God and talking as He shared His wisdom with you.

Thank you for writing about you and God and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of With Great Thanks  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad you found Mark who helped you find your way back to writing. I hope things are going well for you these days and am glad after finding Mark life got better. I felt your despair through your words. Your story is understandable and clearly written and fortunately ended more positive.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Resurrection  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yes indeed this is dark, but my mind seeks light, so, I hope there is light somewhere. I also considered the need for balance and understanding. Humanity has a light and dark side. My guess is that your words are a way of finding balance because to be balanced and have understanding we should get to know our dark side as well as our light side.

Thank you for writing and sharing your darker side word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Fallen Chair  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Chairs falling apart can be dangerous was my first thought. I'm glad the girl is ok.

There are some punctuation issues and editing for spelling would make the presentation visually more easier to read.

Thank you for writing and sharing your chair story with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Master Plan  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your master plan seems to be helpful and the making of community for people in need. I could imagine the activities, actions, and the master supervising the building process. I felt hope and joy as I read your words.

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Review of Rejected  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
After reading your poem, I thought about dying to self, then rebirth, and these lead me to a change of life. I also considered the challenges and lack of successes and wondered if there was a road block to change and becoming a renewed being.

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Review of Whiteout  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You gave me a WOW moment. Your poetic story explains this storm in a vibrant and impactful manner clearly showing the challenges of winter and its stormy ways. I could imagine the scene and feel the impact of the storms icy grip and reactions of people and things as nature moved upon the earth.

Thank you for writing and sharing your winter storm word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Time Relapse  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
For humans living in the is challenging. I hope your rewind decreases as time heals. I felt your struggle to remain in the now while the past wrapped its self around you and drew you into reliving scenes before now. As you exercise the living in the now muscle you will strengthen the now muscle and I hope this strength will give you peace.

Thank you for writing and sharing your challenging situation word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Gethsemane  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt as if I was watching and experiencing these events personally. It was like being with them during this challenging time. Your words are clear and show the events well.

You could add: personal, drama, emotional, experience, history and perhaps a few other genres so that readers can find your item.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought about life and our decisions as we go through each year, learning, deciding, and often having things work out, but realizing there are times when we are challenged by things that we consider not working out well. Your words caused me to consider the game/challenges of life and the winnings/blessings verses the losses/things that don't work out inn relation to our experiences and our decisions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about life/games/gambling with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I read your poem in a happy joyful way which made the rhythm bouncy and happy. The bunnies and unicorns seemed to get along nicely and I enjoyed imagining them frolicking in the fields of green.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetic story of friendship and Easter joy with me and wdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This seems to be a very serious relationship with serious issues resulting in a major breaking of love, respect, and trust. I could imagine and clearly see the breaking of glass, the distance between love and relationship torn, and feel the heartbreak.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word about relationship with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
As your words unfolded the scene and showed me the turmoil, I thought of a bloody battle ground. My mind imagined the battle between good and evil. Nature was beautiful, yet ugly because of tainted and corruptness of human nature run amok, but for the brave ones who share the better way of life for everyone who accepts the gift.

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Review of I am on the Run  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I could picture you ready to run like the wind and then you running. Your short story has room for emotions, actions, and getting to know more about running. For example, how do you feel before a race? Are you nervous, excited, or something else? Do your muscles ache after running? Are you happy with the out comes of races? Why do you run?

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Review of QUE SERA SERA  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You got this song going through my head as I read your story. I was easily able to envision the actions of your story and felt as if I was in the audience. Your story is clear and I could feel the appreciation toward you and your singing.

Thank you for writing and sharing your song word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
The mystery of the message kept me reading because I wanted to know if there was more about the message and sender. The characters acted naturally. Showing their emotions helps the reader see the scenes, characters, and the entire story.

Suggested genres: action/adventure, drama, emotional, experience, friendship, supernatural, thriller/suspense Because by adding genres it is easier for potential readers to find your word art.

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Review of Fariy Flyers  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Visualizing the fairies gathered and ready to fly while reading your story allowed me to join them and be ready for flight. I'm glad to know Flyer 7 escaped the jar. This is a nice lesson about honor and doing the job despite challenging situations.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poetic tribute to our heroes caused me to think about my family members who served in the military. I'm very thankful for all the sacrifices these wonderful people made for our freedom.

Thank you for writing And sharing your word art about your tribute to our military personal and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm glad you won the ticket to the Miss World show. It is nice having someone who you can relate to and grow up with that cares about you. I'm glad you had this experience and wrote about it.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I got a gut punch when I read about "relieved it wasn't them." because to me they did nothing to help improve the situation. When they decided to be silent they agreed with The Who and the what. I'm not happy with many things and can pray and hope truth prevails. My other through is research deep research helps find truth and understanding. I'm glad you wrote this poem because it shows situations that people need to see and understand.

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