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Rated: E | (4.0)
This must have been a very funny situation at least as I visualize it is very funny. I did notice issues with proper punctuation. There are typos that distract me from reading this story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about the rat stuck in the Coke bottle.


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Review of The Ballroom  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Away in a corner alone even with a beautiful smile in sight is something I pictured as I read and wondered what prevented a natural reaction to get to know the girl. There must have been doubt and disbelief that meeting and getting to know someone is possible. It occurred to me that perhaps a spirit may have interfered with the potential relationship. Your story is believable because the characters are believable along with the circumstances.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story with me and WdC members.


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Review of No language  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
In your poem, it seems that there is a language problem or medical issue preventing the little girl from talking. I suspect there is too much input and pressure causing her to want to disappear even though she longs to communicate. I could visualize people surrounding her and talking. I could feel her mentally shrinking away.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art about the girl who has much to say and isn't able to communicate.


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Review of The Mural  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That must have been a fantastic mural according to what I know of this story. I remember a similar story where the children did the painting. It is possibly something in a movie or TV show years ago. Your plot, characters, scene, and dialogue are realistic and believable.

Thank you for writing and sharing your artistic story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Yes the energy, I'm very glad you mentioned the energy because of the importance of realizing how important it is to understand about the energy. Your story, characters, scenes, and events are believable because people behave similarly to strange and unexpected situations.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Daring to Dance  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dare to try I consider an invitation, thank you. I prefer something like "just do it. or go for it!" I enjoyed your enthusiasm for writing poetry and the way you encouraged people to write freely without allowing the critic to enter into the dance of words and imagination. Your poem was easy to read and understand. I was not distracted from reading and taking in your advice, encouragement, and devotion to writing poetry and giving future poets reasons to write.

Thank you for writing and sharing your wisdom about writing poetry with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel the burning pain as you described it in your words. The scenes are illuminated with the emotions you share describing them. Your inside turmoil as you watch a loved one struggle with their pain beings me back to the memories of the beginning of your poem and I know you are reliving your experiences helpless to do anything that would make a positive difference.

Thank you for writing and sharing this emotional poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Positivity  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your uplifting and encouraging poem. I felt lighter as I read your words and appreciate the advice for enjoying life and each day. I do my best to be positive which is why your poem resonated with me so well.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art in a positively positive poem with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem drew me into a world of love and excitement only to have it all fall apart. Sadness of the loss of friendship and more, love, that seemed to be wanted and yet was not given. Your words showed the entire relationship as basically one-sided. It is sad when relationships do not work out as we humans expect.

Thank you for writing your poem and sharing you word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The idea of an unknown friend in the time of need gifting a home to a stranger is an awesome story be it real or a fictional plot of fiction based on fact. The beginning, middle, and ending, especially the ending kept me reading because this story held my interest and focus on the who, what, why part of my curiosity. everything about this story is believable because it is based on what people would do and hoe they would possibly react in such a situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a home gift by a stranger with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I wonder what it looked like as she explored the castle. Did she creep, tremble, move haltingly, or something else? How did she feel, nervous creating shaking hands, a squeamish stomach, nausea and acid mixing about, or something else? Was her mind racing and thinking possible scary thoughts or other ideas?

What else was happening to the characters in this story? Internal and external responses or thoughts?

The characters are believable, the scene is easy to imagine, and the plot has potential.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Family and friends are important. Jesus show this and much more to us when He walked the Earth. In your words I could see the situations. I understand what you are writing about according to my knowledge, experience, and what I can relate to that you have written. Much of what you wrote is in my opinion very true and I hope we can return to nature and a simple way of life with less emphasis on technology and more on caring for each other rather than fighting with each other.

Thank you for writing about humanity and refocusing on what is important and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of " THE LORD ''  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the way you wrote about who God is and showed His glory. It is easy to read your words and find peace within them. I could feel your strong foundation which is steadfast. I'm glad you have a good relationship with God.

Thank you for writing about God and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a nice article which people who know little about this information can understand. Placing resources with your article piques my interest in reading more about Quantum Entanglement. I was not distracted by errors and enjoyed your writing style.

Thank you for introducing me to this subject ajd sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This tail wagging tale has a good spin on puzzles, marriage, and customs, along with dreadful consequences. I agree that TV is ok, but often too much eats up valuable time and can in some cases be deadly if the necessities are not properly taken care of. I could imagine the unbearable high pitch and agonizing pain of the wrath of a spouse who felt neglected.

Thank you for writing this story of TV and a wife who is angry at the neglect cat of Hubby and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
You wrote a nice screenplay-style manuscript. The scene, characters, plot, and verbiage are believable because the characters talk naturally and act naturally, the scene is easy to visualize because it is a typical coffee shop or so it seems, and the ending is a nice twist that pulls everything together and is a surprise.

Thank you for writing this unique story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

There are a few typos.


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Review of The Sounds  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I could see and hear the storm as it moved nature to and fro. The rhythm of your poem for me is a bit bumpy but it may be the way I read your words. Of course, it could be because of the storm in your poem story. The ending I did not see coming. I'm not sure I understand the meaning. Is it the screams of the storm or something else?

Thank you for writing and sharing your storm poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of For Pringles =)  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words caused me to think of drugs, alcohol, or something addictive that often kills. Another thought is the possibility of tasting figuratively some spiritual essence. There were no distractions to interrupt my reading and I could imagine the magnetism of indulging while realizing this activity could be fatal.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Only to Herself  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I saw quite a mess, an angry mom, and two children wondering what happened. As I read your story I suspected a dog at first, then when the mouse was revealed I could imagine a cat hunting and sure enough it was the cat chasing the mouse that caused all of the damage and mess. You wrote an interesting mystery and your words kept me interested in reading your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the cat and mouse with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Your information about the group is clear, inspiring, and inviting. I would like someday to apply but realize I have work to do before giving this opportunity a try. I'm glad to know more about this group because I can share with people who are interested in what I've learned.

Thank you for writing and sharing this information with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Clown  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I can relate because when I was attending public school, I was called all kinds of names such as one-eyed Cyclops for example. Spitballs were thrown at me and also rubber bands, but I was protected by God and His wisdom given to me. I did not respond. The more I ignored them the madder they got and eventually, they stopped, I won.

I could see the scene and feel the emotions as I read your story. I'm glad you wrote this poem because it will help people.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members about not bullying.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
The storms can often have with then tornados, especially in tornado ally. I'm close to Oklahoma. I was thinking about the movie Twister as I read your word art. In my mind, I could see everyone and the events. The lightning and thunder followed by the rainbow were vivid images for me. This also reminded me of the time a tree was hit by lightning very close to my house many years ago.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your family and storm experiences with me and WdC members.


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Review of Trail Blazer  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A faceplant in the snow is better than on other surfaces, but ouch! I could see the scene in living color as the ski adventure unfolded. Once I was able to ski and it was fun. Sit skiing might have been a better option. I was not distracted by errors as I read your story. The presentation kept me involved and interested.

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of She who serves  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could imagine Lisa working and going everywhere keeping things on track and fixing problems. She seems busy and dedicated to her work. A possible issue is that some people are not aware of what she does. I hope she gets the recognition she deserves.

Thank you for honoring Lisa in your poem and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree with your poem's story because of the warmth, light, and feel-good effects of the sun. I could imagine you sitting by a window and writing this poem. Your poem is inviting, and vivid, and shows how healthy and calming the sun is for us.

Thank you for writing about the sun and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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