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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad I found this poem about spiders because I like arachnids. I thought about tarantulas as I read your poem, then daddy long legs, and other spiders. The rhythm is nice and your words tell a wonderful story of birth and nature bringing forth life.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about arachnids with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
As I read your words the scene, sipping, coffee, and remembering seemed to be calming. I felt like I was there watching the activities. I could feel the longing for these memories. Your words kept me interested as they carried me through your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about memories and the past with me and WdC members.


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Review of Unhealthy  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could feel the anguish, frustration, fear, despair, and being trapped within your words. The questions and longing for answers to resolve the situation are evident. Living in a world of horror which is the word that came to me can be deadly I understand. I'm glad you survived to write about this experience.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about your challenging relationship with me and WdC members.


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Review of the end that is.  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
You wrote an interesting story about Cloud because clouds usually do not break into places. The story is believable because the characters act as humans act, emotionally and by their actions. The conflict between the partners is something I'd like to know more about as well as the entire story.

There are a few typos which distracted me from the story.

Thank you for writing about Cloud and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine you and your beloved singing together. Your words showed much love for one another. I could feel the loneliness and sadness because you could no longer sing with your special person.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I pondered about a person flipping. My thoughts are the person could flip with amazement at what they finally realize what God can do or they can flip by turning about and coming to God. I prefer the turning to God part. The searching and seeking God as you wrote surely can make a positive difference. I felt light-hearted and uplifted as I read your poem. The words took me through the story smoothly and calmly. I could feel the excitement of the adventure, seeking, and learning. I hope this helps many people.
Thank you for writing and sharing your spiritual poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Responsible  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I was able to follow the events of the wagon train as you described the action. I saw everything clearly in my mind and felt the adrenaline as things went differently than expected. The way you presented being the leader and then posed another situation brought home to me as I have known but more clearly and forcefully, the focus on being responsible and acknowledging that responsibility is extremely important.

Thank you for writing about the wagon train and responsibility and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Teal Eyes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A special person who has teal eyes seems to be magnetic and inviting you to join them, but this may only be a dream until morning awakens reality. Eventually, these memories fade and love is no longer causing agony. I could imagine a dream state and teal eyes floating within a non-distinct human-like image.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can picture the grass swaying to the pulse of the wind as you strum and keep an ey open for bus fare to return to childhood in Pasadena. I can feel the warmth and love of your father as you are taught life lessons of sharing and becoming a mature adult. I can see the picture flying and hanging in the sky and feel the love as you hear the words of your father.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing is packed with words to ponder. I think you are stating we will be able to understand in a short time in heaven what it has taken a lifetime to learn on earth. I wonder if there is more to this that you have yet to write?

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Snowy, My Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad to have met Snowy through your words. She was a wonderful friend and family member and you two spent every day together which I can see in my mind's eye. I could feel the sorrow and heartache because Snowy passed. I know this feeling well because I have enjoyed many years with pets and then they were gone.

Thank you for writing about Snowy and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The first part of your poem seems as if you are seeking love. The second part seems similar but more bold. Now, the third part is a bit different because it seems as if love is being held at a distance and not allowed to come any closer. The fourth part: hurt is avoided by not getting too close and not taking chances. By now it seems that the door is closed to love.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fall  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love permeates this poetry and tells me that there is a very special someone who is adored and more. Fear or a similar emotion is woven into this poem's story which may create a distance or bring the people closer. Your words are vividly showing your feelings and hopes for a future together. It is easy to understand and put myself into this situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Coloring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the love and closeness as everyone created their colorful pictures. Visualizing the three of you was easy. the scene with the crayons and coloring books or coloring pages is vivid and the motions of using the crayons are realistic and add character to the characters. Your words smoothly guided me through your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your horse coloring word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Cat's Meow  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The mirror reveals a lot about the person looking at their reflexion as the story is told which is an interesting prop to use. I wondered if the mirror was possessed but it seems it was a bit more than that. Their lies tells me there are more people, creatures, or something else involved with the idea about not believing the lies. Imagination could play a part in this also.

The story, characters, and message about the lies is believable because of the way the characters interacted and how the story was told.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story is believable because humans often encourage going for the big one or not bothering. Celebrating a birthday by drinking and playing cards is something people do which I could see in my mind. The scenes are realistic and I could visualize them well. The part about the gargoyle looking bring and their departure reminded me of a scriptural situation where The Holy Ghost prompts humans as needed to help them.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good relationship between the croc and plover because each one gets what they need. I could see the bird picking bits and pieces from the teeth of the croc and her belly filling. The characters are realistic and their actions are believable. The conversations is also believable because although animals do not communicate the way humans do, I know animals can interact with each other with understanding of each others needs and intent.

Thank you for writing about the croc and plover and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Reading your word art felt like being bombarded with too much sound, sight, and other things in life. It was as if you were talking at great speed while music played, thunder roared, and foot steps ran sounding like horses hoofs. This also was accompanied by the feelings of desperation, being rushed, and urgency. You chose words that conveyed the situation very well.

I could sense being trapped in a world of chemical highs and lows. It seemed as if the end was hanging over each statement. Yet I felt as of there was hope for a good chemical free future. I hope things are much better.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the challenge of chemicals and the world of hallucinations.


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Review of Thank You, Lord  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Praise and glory to God for being there for you during your trials. I am exceedingly happy you had the strength to hold on through everything with God's help. I have often asked God to never let go of me no matter what I said, thought, or did and He has been faithful even when I hardly talked with Him except as an after thought...thank you for this day...and that was the end of our conversation. I didn't even wait for a reply, but God is always faithful and waited for me to come back to Him. Everything is a process and it is a matter of one step at a time.

I could relate to your words and understand your situation. Reading your story is easy for me and I also felt your struggles ranging from almost giving up yet something, I believe God kept His hand on you to take care of you. I heard this saying: when God seems far away, who moved? I know that when God seems far away I'm the one who moved.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your challenges with your relationship with God with me and WdC members.

Safe travels and many blessings.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The idea of God loving us is something He does no matter what we do as in earthly parents. I also see in your words that God doesn't want anyone to be lost, yet we are given freewill. I could feel the sorrow of our sins and that of god for us. I could also feel the eternal everlasting love for us.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Rapunzle  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This can be an exciting story and a sad story depending on the point of view. The mother sad and the boy and girl elated and entering a new adventure.

The characters, scene, and actions are believable. I can see this story like watching a movie in my head. The emotions are easy to feel as I read the words. I could also imagine them having hope for the future and the mother although sad and disappointed having hope that her daughter would be ok and return home.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about eloping with me and WdC members.


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Review of Telling Time  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The first idea that came to me as I read your poem was by throwing the clock away you were unable to watch the clock. Without the clock you could not watch time moving. Without the clock time stood still. The other thought I had was about things in life that were reversed mentally and spoken that were not welcome. The thoughts that escaped through fast moving lips seemed to be those in particular that were supposed to be kept secret. I felt emotions of regret, dismay, and self dislike because of the run away memories, but I also hoped that in time things would be better.

Thank you for writing your poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Nymph Rhapsody  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm and the sound of the words you used to create this poem. I felt relaxed as your words spoke to me and showed my your vision. I could hear the sounds and song as I listened to your words in my hear. It felt as if I was moving along with your words completely in tune with the environment. The peacefulness became stirred as I read your last words and sadness slipped in amount the suddenly quiet nature as the song and danced stopped.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about nature a human encroachment with me and WdC members.


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Review of Greed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Someone truly loves and is willing to not judge. Someone is greedy, or is it something else. I wonder what is fueling both people to do or not do things. It seems there is something underneath their actions or inactions. I could feel the tug of war with in the word art intros story poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your allian story is believable. I felt as if I was in the story and knew the characters. The scene made sense and I could believe the interaction of everyone. Now that I've read your story I'm parched. May I have a drink and visit with everyone in the next adventure?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your allian story with me and WdC members.


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