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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I'm glad you had fun while writing this poem. Your words give me reason to ponder the days, which for me are blessings that God gifted to me. Life is a precious gift and how we respond to it is the difference between gladness or sorrow. POV makes a huge difference. You've shown the different POV.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your words about POV word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Love's Embrace  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
For me the love of God is most important. I pondered this love as I read your poem.

I could feel the strength of love in your words for people and especially a special someone. Determination to nurture love is evident in this poem story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem story word art about love with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the dread, sadness, and emptiness because someone left this earth sooner than they should have according to our ideas about life and time. I believe as sad as it is for someone to leave sooner than we expect that it is ultimately best because God knows best. I could feel the grief and have been there meany times for people and animals.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I hope that shame for families isn'r wear ir is exactly because families are precious and evil is working hard to break them. Hopefully Koko will be rehabilitated. I could see Koko with bulging eyes and a lot of hope for a new view but disappointed because of having to enter rehabilitation.

Thank you for writing and sharing Koko's story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I know you tow will always be together in spirit because you showed this to me through your word art. Your love is evident and true and I believe will keep alive your special person in your heart always. Therefore they will live in your heart.

Thank you for writing this poem and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Goat  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can picture several different species of cloven animals approaching the feeding area and having appreciation for the person who feeds, waters, and loves them. I hope to have some livestock species on my homestead soon.

Thank you for writing this poem and for sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Yes, redbuds sing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can see the red but trees that grow on my homestead and other flowering red but species like flowers and shrubs deep in the forest which is mostly my imagination at work. The red but trees are real. I could hear the rustling leaves and feel the warmth of spring. You wrote a nice tribute to spring and the red buds.

Thank ou for writing and for sharing your word art about the red buds with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm very glad this story ended well with a united family of faith. A mean and scary black cat with red eyes is easy to visualize. The fear and the dread as they shook in their or under their beds I could feel. The plot and sevens and the characters are realistic.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your Reindeer Roulette page looks welcoming, well organized, and is nicely decorated for the holiday event. The idea that you keep secrets is intriguing and a good reason to have a spin or two, or three or more. I hope you have great success when your golden opportunity for prizes is reopened.

Thank you for creating this wonderful opportunity and for sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Review of Man's Best Friend  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jessie-woo woo, is a wonderful dog, thank you for introducing me to her. Your love exudes through your kind and caring words. I feel as if there is more to this story. You mentioned she is your dads dog, tis is important or you wouldn't have written the words. Give her a pat from me. I know about the older dog and have been there many times.

Thank you for writing about Jessie-woo woo, and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Rat Race  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhymed carried me from beginning to the end in a jolly manner. It kept me reading. I could see in my minds eye the mouse running and the cat watching with anticipation of a fresh warm meal when the cat caught the mouse.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
[I and you] also to me means love. I can see the two of you caring and sharing friendship and relationship. I can feel emotions of love, respect, loyalty, and more. The warmth of your words kept me reading

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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Review of I AM...  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel peace, love, and endless patience through your words about Jesus. Everything you wrote is wonderful to me. I agree with your words. I appreciate your word art. Safe travels and many blessings.

Thank you for writing about Jesus and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your word art kept me interested and reading. I could feel sadness and dismay because of the political circumstances of these times. Your words showed that greed and hard hearts dives politics and cause troubles if people take things for granted and remain spectators.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about political challenges.


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Review of Halloween Horror  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is like a Stephen King halloween story. I figured Jason would get as bloody and gooey as possible and when the lawn mower was started I wasn't sure if he actually killed himself, but I also considered it was a gag and his wife was in on it too. I could see the characters, scenes, and imagine spectators gawking in horror.

Thank you for writing and the gruesome word art and for sharing this halloween story with me and WdC members.


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Review of RUSTY OLD KEY  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I found this page through Read And Review. It would have been nice for the poem to be available on this page so people can read it and review it to receive the gift points.

Thank you for this information. I hope eventually to find your poem through Read And Review.


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Review of The Sixth  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The mention of [money lust] gives me the idea that whatever she is leading is on the shady side of the law be it thievery or something of that sort, or illicit relationships for payment. Hiding under her hat makes me think she is not happen in her own skin as a leader or that those being lead are powerful and would exploit her weaknesses. Love seems to be the major quest above money, yet because it is perceived as unachievable the money has a stronger hold. I could see the characters and scenes clearly.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Never Forever  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the sadness and emptiness as I read your word art about a relationship that is no longer a live and well. My imagination visualized two people slowly stepping away from each other. I hope you feel better now.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I visualized the scene and characters as they moved to the music, then the kiss, then the magical moment of dancing is over and reality returns. I could feel the calm and romantic event.

Making a few changes so that this story is in the here and now will add life and bring the reader into the action. Some editing for a smoother reading experience will keep the reader interested in your story.

An example: {He approached his beloved.} To add more action what does this approach look like, how does he feel, and what is he thinking? Answering the question can show what is happening so the reader gets to know and care about the character.

Thank you for writing and for sharing the dance through your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time "the customer is always right" used to be a business statement, but, these days not so much. Posing questions made me think about how I would as a customer relate to customer service verses hoop I would relate as a customer service representative. Imagining the scenes was not as easy for me while reading your poem story. Perhaps my imagination is tired.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your customer/customer service word art story with me and WdC members.


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Review of Check of Spells  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I chuckled at the idea of an annoying app because I've had annoying electronic experiences. I could see you doing all these actions and feel your annoyance. Your story kept me interested in learning how everything turned out at the end.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your APP annoyance and word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I hope everything has improved for you. I could see you sitting, pondering, and taking in all the sights, sounds, tastes, smells and feeling all the beauty that nature has to offer. I can believe you did this because people eventually need to find a place where they can rest and consider what they should do about a situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your time with nature through your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Charlie & Roy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very, very nice rhythm and colorful introduction to Charlie and his circumstances. Charlie is a very, very lucky cat to have chosen you for his friend and family member. I can believe everything because it is similar to other stories about shelter animals. Visualizing Charlie and the other cats as well as the other elements of the story was easy. Your words drew me into your Charlie story from the beginning to the end.

Thank you for Writing about Charlie and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of When I am down  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo You showed me the details of medical issues, recovering, and dealing with life as it is now through your word art. Your poem helped me to get to know you and understand what you do each day. I can relate because I have medical challenges too.

Thank you for writing and sharing about your challenges and your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, what an interesting twist to your story. I didn't see the ending coming. I'm not certain why the woodsman had a change of heart about chopping down the tree except possibly he sorely missed using his ax and building things

Thank you for writing and for sharing your woodsman story word art with me and WdC members.


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