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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your review of this book has piqued my curiosity. Perhaps I will read this book after reading several books that are awaiting my attention. You explained thoroughly enough about how this book effects you and why it is worth reading.

Thank you for writing about this book and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You created an amazing plot that I really enjoyed reading about. I could believe the characters because they acted realistically. The scenes were positively believable. In my mind I could see the details. You showed me an situation that came to life like watching a movie.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your believable word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Yuba  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand the empty feeling and loss of a beloved pet. Bella my service dog was more than a family member to me. I'm glad Yuba had a full wonderful life being loved by her family. Yuba seems to be a rare name, I like it.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about Yuba with me and WdC members.


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Review of RACCY  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I remember the raccoon in our family. My sisters hubby had it as an adult. S/he seemed friendly enough but you had to be careful. Your story showed great characters and their actions. I like that you shared about a raccoon not being a cuddly pet because many people do not have the knowledge or skills to handle this animal safely for them and the animal. Thank you for the memories.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about Raccy with me and WdC members.


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Review of Morgana's Colors  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a dark and sad story about people with harden hearts who see not what they are doing. When I read about her seeing white I hoped it was something beneficial, but alas, it was the beginning of the end. You wrote about this persons life but you also showed how everyone has a ripple effect upon one another. What we do or do not effects others. I believe we should be aware of how we conduct ourselves because it effects everyone eventually, you know, the ripple effect. I could see the actions and events clearly. Your characters are believable as is the situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about this sad situation with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (3.0)
Her, the detective already knew who? My question is answered in the Danny studied paragraph. So far I am able to follow the story but it is jumping around and I believe this is what the reviewers are having issues with so far.

{the cleats things} sentence isn't necessary and for me it detracts from the story and is a distraction. The second sentence if started differently and with the word is inserted, this sentence would tell as much if not more about the cleats.

Now that I'm getting the feel for the rhythm of your writing style, the jumping back and forth is less distracting and it feels better. I would recommend finding a smoothness or more gentle way to make these changes because a smooth journey keeps the reader reading.

Crossing the street carefully? What does that look like? Why, she has cleats? Is she being careful because of tipping off her mark?

Danny would know what? This question is keeping me engaged and invested in reading more of your story. So far I know a little about the characters, but I'm not invested in them yet. The story and characters are starting to come alive and I'm gradually warning up to them.

The paragraph about Hunter easily/quickle spotting the rest of her other marks is confusing. Her marks are needy and apparently Hunter is helping them in other ways while stealing from them or so it seems. Or, are her marks and the people she is helping different people different marks? She reminds me of a female RobinHood.

This was all about giving not about taking has finally made this story more clear. I like the challenge of your writing but for some readers it might require more thinking and figuring things out than they want to do or are accustomed to doing. clarifying events better in each paragraph could be helpful to readers by adding a little more information. Asking questions about the story and characters cN HELP YOU GET TO KNOW THE STORY AND CHARACTERS BETTER. BY KNOWING THE STORY AND CHARACTERS BETTER YOU CAN CREATE SENTENCES SHOWING CLEARLY WHO THESE PEOPLE ARE ALLOWING THE READER TO HAVE MORE INTEREST IN INVESTING TIME READING AND KNOWING THE STORY WILL ADD TO THIS INTEREST. Oops caps lock, my bad.

The story is flowing better for me and I'm curious about what happens next.

His was brimming with not tears, but probably his eyes were glistening as tears were emerging and his voice wavered, how about something like that? It's your story, I just couldn't resist because my imagination demanded freedom, thanks.

Don't give up Santa has his ways and Danny bounding down the stairs...is this history? It seems a scene in the past explaining why she plays Sants pickpocketing in re verse. Then suddenly the reader is propelled into the now. Tears down their cheeks is hunter and the man tearing? This jolt can drive readers away because it can be confusing or it can be too much all of a sudden. Are you finished showing why Hunter is giving? If not jumping from this and then back to it again deletes her and her motives. What and why does she do this?

This is a possibility:
Can...I'd like to ask you some questions.

Ok, now it's coming together in a heart felt manner. Things are mellow but seem to be joyful. The guys tears are blurring his vision what is her feeling inside? What is his body language. I ask the same about the detective?

The inter action worked well. The conversation drew me further into the story and it made sense. It even hinted of romance which for many readers would wet their appetites for more to this story. Iike the ending when she tossed his wallet to him, good going. I could see the wallet flying and him catching it.

Your story is five stars based on plot. But the creativity of the structure is a bit weak and needs more information to strengthen the structure. I believe it is well worth taking time time to make it better, so when you are able please edit it and let me know when a new version is available, thanks.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Old Route 33  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You made my nerves tingle with this tail of haunting of rout 33. I could see the characters in action especially vivid was Billy and his reactions to the haunting dreams and his experience as traveled through the wooded area of rout 33. It seemed real and was spooky.

Thank you for writing this story which reminded me of the twilight Zone and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your characters are believable and realistic but you know, I know them so I might be a bit oh, what's the word...we;; anyway I could imagine the action, the emotions, and feel you wrote a story of humdrum to happy excitement and joy. I certainly relate to the positive attitude about WdC and living a happy life.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you joy and happiness with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You introduced me to some unique and interesting characters. I could follow their exploits through your words. Your story idea has great potential and kept me reading. I suggest as you let your imagination free to craft this story that you ask questions such as who did what, when, where, why and how. Asking questions helps you get ro know your characters so you can bring them to vivid life for the readers.It also helps you know more about your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
A safe house inviting and wonderful a picture of perhaps a church image in my mind as I read your word art. Another image in my mind a house warm or cool depending on the season safe and inviting. Hands reaching with wide stretched arms ready to hug and protect. Feeling at peace and enjoying my journey as the words guided me on my journey.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Shackled  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow this is a very dark yet compelling piece. Your words compelled me to keep reading. It was as if I were in this situation and could not escape. The rhythm kept me moving from word to word as I discovered the evil and sinister menace driving the character to hateful and horrible deeds.

Thank you for writing and sharing you word art with me and WdC members about the dark deeds and entrapment of living a horrible existence.


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Review of The Locked  
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The plot idea could become a good story because you can add emotions, actions, and other elements. Punctuation also would make reading your word art easier and more enjoyable.

How do these people feel about being locked in? Are they angry, afraid, or have other reactions. Do they work well together? What body language are they using? Do they grit their teeth for example or make fists? What is the town, place where they are locked up like? Is it cold, hot, or other temperature and does this affect the out come of the story?

When writing and capturing the essence of stories it is a good idea to ask questions. Getting to know your characters through asking questions is helpful because the more you know your characters, the better you can show their lives and interactions in your story.

Please let me know about any questions you may have. I hope you craft a fantastic story with scenes, characters, and other elements that read like watching a movie. You have a wonderful beginning. Keep going and let the story and characters do what they want; go with the flow. Do can do this!

Thank you for writing and for sharing your plot idea with me and WdC members.
Write On! *ThumbsUpGreen*


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Review of Good Again  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see in my imagination Frankie in bed destrozar and afraid. I also could see his parents concerned about his welfare doing their best to help him through this challenging time for all of them. Your words smoothly led me through the story with no distractions. I enjoyed reading and and especially liked the ending because the day turned from bleak to sun sining and the pancakes a wonderful meal.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about Frankie with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You dove deep when you wrote this poem. I believe there is a reason for everything that we might or might not know. Understanding may or may not reveal its self. My belief in God is upon a string foundation. These are the thoughts which came to me as I read your word art.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about looking for balance with me and WdC members.


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Review of Falling  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well written with emotions and adrenalin rush taking me from event to event in this falling story. I fell for each vividly descriptive word and followed the descent line by line as I floated toward the earth with no hope of salvation until almost the last second of breath. The emotions flooded every second. I could see the falling character and also see the earth becoming bigger and bigger until I could almost touch it. The relief of the parachute opening was over whelming which I felt as the story ended.

Thank you for writing and for one exciting adventure through your word and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
A surprise gift can be nice, but when the sender is not known sometimes it can be something ominous. The interactions between the characters are realistic and are star trek authentic. In a way rgwt night have proceeded with a little more caution, but it's a TV show or imagination of the writer so it is ok and works well.


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Review of Nearer everyday  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I get from this writing that mankind often is complacent. We can do nothing as individuals but as a group we can make positive changes. I believe mankind has no business messing around with what God made and tying to take credit because ultimately mankind ruins a good thing. Words are powerful.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Feathers  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could feel the desire to offer hope and uplift the spirit. even through you stayed strong I could sense the tears and sadness of watching this process of dying. at the loss must have been crushing. I hope you are doing well and have joy in the blessings of each day.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your journey with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You showed me your struggles, you let me in, I'm glad I read this poem, it showed your win. I could imagine the scenes and see you struggling with life. I felt your despair and your dismay as you worked your way through each day. I'm glad you're here and shared something special so we can get to know each other. I can relate from a physical pain point of view.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your challenges and triumphs with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the rage as it rippled through out the land and caught to destroy those who killed his daughter. The sadness also was evident along with the ravarge heart now empty and forlorned. In my minds eye I could see the events. You showed the emotions and actions of this story well.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art which was like watching a movie with me and WdC members.


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Review of Tome at Last  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could imagine you writing, reading rejection slips, and working in the printing shop. Your words have a nice rhythm to them which guided me along each stanza through your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I can relate because of the medical issues I've experienced. Your words showed me how you had ups and downs as you recovered. These words worked well together and I was able to read your poem with no distractions.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You lied...Shame, shame on the liar. So sad that someone would do this. I have to admit the part about boiling water and using a book was funny. I could imagine the scenes well. Reading and understanding the story was enjoyably easy.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about lies with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, you gave me food for thought. Being cautious about situations and not rejecting nor jumping into them without knowing as much as possible is my understanding of what your word is about.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Red  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words exuded loneliness. I could feel the emptiness, despair, and being alone as if in solitary confinement. The tug of war in conversation between being alone and having mental words with yourself or imaginary someone ahows me a prson hunched in a corned fighting with their imagination like a boxing match.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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