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Rated: E | (5.0)
The first part of your poem seems as if you are seeking love. The second part seems similar but more bold. Now, the third part is a bit different because it seems as if love is being held at a distance and not allowed to come any closer. The fourth part: hurt is avoided by not getting too close and not taking chances. By now it seems that the door is closed to love.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about love with me and WdC members.


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Review of Fall  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love permeates this poetry and tells me that there is a very special someone who is adored and more. Fear or a similar emotion is woven into this poem's story which may create a distance or bring the people closer. Your words are vividly showing your feelings and hopes for a future together. It is easy to understand and put myself into this situation.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Coloring  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the love and closeness as everyone created their colorful pictures. Visualizing the three of you was easy. the scene with the crayons and coloring books or coloring pages is vivid and the motions of using the crayons are realistic and add character to the characters. Your words smoothly guided me through your story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your horse coloring word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Cat's Meow  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The mirror reveals a lot about the person looking at their reflexion as the story is told which is an interesting prop to use. I wondered if the mirror was possessed but it seems it was a bit more than that. Their lies tells me there are more people, creatures, or something else involved with the idea about not believing the lies. Imagination could play a part in this also.

The story, characters, and message about the lies is believable because of the way the characters interacted and how the story was told.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story is believable because humans often encourage going for the big one or not bothering. Celebrating a birthday by drinking and playing cards is something people do which I could see in my mind. The scenes are realistic and I could visualize them well. The part about the gargoyle looking bring and their departure reminded me of a scriptural situation where The Holy Ghost prompts humans as needed to help them.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a good relationship between the croc and plover because each one gets what they need. I could see the bird picking bits and pieces from the teeth of the croc and her belly filling. The characters are realistic and their actions are believable. The conversations is also believable because although animals do not communicate the way humans do, I know animals can interact with each other with understanding of each others needs and intent.

Thank you for writing about the croc and plover and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Reading your word art felt like being bombarded with too much sound, sight, and other things in life. It was as if you were talking at great speed while music played, thunder roared, and foot steps ran sounding like horses hoofs. This also was accompanied by the feelings of desperation, being rushed, and urgency. You chose words that conveyed the situation very well.

I could sense being trapped in a world of chemical highs and lows. It seemed as if the end was hanging over each statement. Yet I felt as of there was hope for a good chemical free future. I hope things are much better.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the challenge of chemicals and the world of hallucinations.


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Review of Thank You, Lord  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Praise and glory to God for being there for you during your trials. I am exceedingly happy you had the strength to hold on through everything with God's help. I have often asked God to never let go of me no matter what I said, thought, or did and He has been faithful even when I hardly talked with Him except as an after thought...thank you for this day...and that was the end of our conversation. I didn't even wait for a reply, but God is always faithful and waited for me to come back to Him. Everything is a process and it is a matter of one step at a time.

I could relate to your words and understand your situation. Reading your story is easy for me and I also felt your struggles ranging from almost giving up yet something, I believe God kept His hand on you to take care of you. I heard this saying: when God seems far away, who moved? I know that when God seems far away I'm the one who moved.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your challenges with your relationship with God with me and WdC members.

Safe travels and many blessings.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The idea of God loving us is something He does no matter what we do as in earthly parents. I also see in your words that God doesn't want anyone to be lost, yet we are given freewill. I could feel the sorrow of our sins and that of god for us. I could also feel the eternal everlasting love for us.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Rapunzle  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This can be an exciting story and a sad story depending on the point of view. The mother sad and the boy and girl elated and entering a new adventure.

The characters, scene, and actions are believable. I can see this story like watching a movie in my head. The emotions are easy to feel as I read the words. I could also imagine them having hope for the future and the mother although sad and disappointed having hope that her daughter would be ok and return home.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about eloping with me and WdC members.


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Review of Telling Time  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The first idea that came to me as I read your poem was by throwing the clock away you were unable to watch the clock. Without the clock you could not watch time moving. Without the clock time stood still. The other thought I had was about things in life that were reversed mentally and spoken that were not welcome. The thoughts that escaped through fast moving lips seemed to be those in particular that were supposed to be kept secret. I felt emotions of regret, dismay, and self dislike because of the run away memories, but I also hoped that in time things would be better.

Thank you for writing your poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Nymph Rhapsody  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I enjoyed the rhythm and the sound of the words you used to create this poem. I felt relaxed as your words spoke to me and showed my your vision. I could hear the sounds and song as I listened to your words in my hear. It felt as if I was moving along with your words completely in tune with the environment. The peacefulness became stirred as I read your last words and sadness slipped in amount the suddenly quiet nature as the song and danced stopped.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem about nature a human encroachment with me and WdC members.


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Review of Greed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Someone truly loves and is willing to not judge. Someone is greedy, or is it something else. I wonder what is fueling both people to do or not do things. It seems there is something underneath their actions or inactions. I could feel the tug of war with in the word art intros story poem.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poem story word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your allian story is believable. I felt as if I was in the story and knew the characters. The scene made sense and I could believe the interaction of everyone. Now that I've read your story I'm parched. May I have a drink and visit with everyone in the next adventure?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your allian story with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You put hopeful in a highlighted and important perspective through your word art. Your words show that no matter what comes you focus on being hopeful for good rather than bad or light rather than darkness. I imagined the light pushing the dark away or covering the dark with light. Your message is easy to understand.

Thank you for writing about being hopeful and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem, several thoughts came to my mind. I thought about having freewill and making choices. My mind visualized someone barely hanging on to life. My hope for them is that they realize life is precious. In god I could see through your words hope and spiritual upliftings. The battle of despair and victory over it and other negative feelings.

Thank you for writing and sharing your poetry word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I visualized each scene. The emotions were evident and I could imagine and feel them as you described each character and how they reacted to the events. I was in your story completely and could interact with the scene and characters as I stood by and watched them show their emotions and body language. I felt as if I had been introduced to them and experienced their lifestyles with them.

Your story is easy to read and understand. It seemed as if I were watching a movie that I soon became a part of. I enjoyed the adventure and began routing for the dragons safety along with the safety of the people.

When I came to the end of your story I was completely satisfied with the events, characters, and scenes. I'm glad no one was hurt or killed. I believe the moral of this story is there are times when misunderstanding or fear can be the enemy of reason and taking the time to understand. Fighting or destroying what is not understood can sometimes be avoided.

Thank you for writing this very nice and action and emotional packed story.


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Review of Just out of reach  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your description of the man and scene because you used sight, sound, emotions, and touch to tell the reader your story. The end affirms that this creature will not allow anyone to view it which is reassuring as the story goes and yet sad. The struggle of this person to accomplish the task is realistically revealed so the reader can experience the story.

Thank you for writing about the man and elusive creature and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Vernal Equinox  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your poem the bridge collapse entered my mind. It felt as if your situation was collapsing and you decided to make a sudden and serious change from falling to rising up and entering the world of the living again. Your words carried me smoothly from the beginning to the end of your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm not certain about how your poem makes me feel because of learning about the FSK bridge collapse. The best I can do is write that the sadness of this event is wrapped and twisted into the sadness of your word art. Sadness therefore has been amplified. I struggle to separate this review from the bridge collapse and yet they seem to want to be together. I can relate this to words in your poem and the words those people would have spoken had this not happened. In your poem, your words are silenced and those of the bridge collapse were silenced.

I could see as I read your poem the ropes and chains thrown around your words silencing them. Misunderstanding choaking your words. We have choices. Depending on our decisions I/you could be quiet or shout/roar. Writing this poem I believe is a shout and roar for people to be kind to each other and work to understand each other.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sanctuary  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You certainly have found a very peaceful place according to your words. I could feel peacefulness as I read your comforting words. The mind is vast and it seems you have much peace and comfort within.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about your sanctuary.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I visualized the scenes through your inviting words as I read your wonderful ideas. I agree with your concepts and hope for the future of families and Christmas. In scripture and, this is not a quote, "it is more blessed to give than to receive". I could feel your enthusiasm about the importance of celebrating Christmas for the right reasons rather than because of someone in a red suit or getting something, good going. I hope readers feel this also.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your wonderful concepts about celebrating Christmas word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Lost Kitten  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the big strong hands taking care of the kitten. In my imagination the collar was a soft beautiful collar that the kitten enjoyed wearing. I believe you wrote this story to comfort your child and share a peaceful idea about being in great and wonderful hands when the time came to leave the earth. I could feel loss at first that changed into hope and a bright future for the kitten.

Thank you for writing this story about the kitten and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand the longing to do whatever it is that is calling. I can see you through your words waiting for this and that to be finished so you can write. I also can see you moving writing to the top of the list.

I have a dilemma slowing down my writing efforts. for this reason, I get it and hope you can find a path to writing as much as you desire.

I can feel the pull as the magnetism of writing draws you close but not close enough at the moment.

Have you considered dictating what you want to write using software that is already on the computer or something else available?

I can see and feel writing competing with other activities that might not be as important as originally thought. I don't watch TV but I do watch a movie occasionally. I know I could spend that movie time writing. I also know sometimes it is beneficial to watch a movie for example.

I hope you can resolve the tug-of-war challenge between writing and other activities.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about writing challenges with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
An invincible skull that invades the enemy's fragile skulls and takes away their abilities to live or function is something scary to contemplate because if humans go far enough this if not soon will be in the distant future. It reminds me of robots that are capable of withstanding attacks and that try to overtake humans and make them slaves. I could imagine these events. They are believable.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your futuristic word art with me and WdC members.


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