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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I visualized the scenes through your inviting words as I read your wonderful ideas. I agree with your concepts and hope for the future of families and Christmas. In scripture and, this is not a quote, "it is more blessed to give than to receive". I could feel your enthusiasm about the importance of celebrating Christmas for the right reasons rather than because of someone in a red suit or getting something, good going. I hope readers feel this also.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your wonderful concepts about celebrating Christmas word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Lost Kitten  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the big strong hands taking care of the kitten. In my imagination the collar was a soft beautiful collar that the kitten enjoyed wearing. I believe you wrote this story to comfort your child and share a peaceful idea about being in great and wonderful hands when the time came to leave the earth. I could feel loss at first that changed into hope and a bright future for the kitten.

Thank you for writing this story about the kitten and sharing it with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand the longing to do whatever it is that is calling. I can see you through your words waiting for this and that to be finished so you can write. I also can see you moving writing to the top of the list.

I have a dilemma slowing down my writing efforts. for this reason, I get it and hope you can find a path to writing as much as you desire.

I can feel the pull as the magnetism of writing draws you close but not close enough at the moment.

Have you considered dictating what you want to write using software that is already on the computer or something else available?

I can see and feel writing competing with other activities that might not be as important as originally thought. I don't watch TV but I do watch a movie occasionally. I know I could spend that movie time writing. I also know sometimes it is beneficial to watch a movie for example.

I hope you can resolve the tug-of-war challenge between writing and other activities.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about writing challenges with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
An invincible skull that invades the enemy's fragile skulls and takes away their abilities to live or function is something scary to contemplate because if humans go far enough this if not soon will be in the distant future. It reminds me of robots that are capable of withstanding attacks and that try to overtake humans and make them slaves. I could imagine these events. They are believable.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your futuristic word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words rhymed nicely and smoothly took me on an interesting journey from beginning to end. It seems a matter of a persons point of view doesn't it? I enjoyed the humor and fun in this tale and could see in my imagination someone sitting comfortable on their substantial padding. My view of the events are clear and colorful.

Thank you for writing and sharing your rhythmic story in poetry form with me and WdC members.


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Review of Space dream  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the part about Omar working hard to achieve his dream and successfully having his dream come true. Through your words I got to know Omar, His ambitions, and what he did in life. I could visualize him with a huge smily as he blasted into space.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about Omar with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for writing this emotional piece and for sharing with me the love you two had for each other. I know both of you now. I'm glad you had each other. God has taken care of me all of my life. I trust Him. I know what it to lose a loved one because I lost many family members. Know that even when times are tough and you feel abandoned and lonely God is with you in your time of need. I hope you are ok and things are better for you.

Thank you for writing about your special relationship and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Empty Nest  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your ending made me laugh. I appreciate the humor and laughter, thank you very much. The beginning of your story seemed sad as if a child died, but it brightened in the end which was a relief. I could imagine the scene with the mother struggling to think of her sons room as just a room or keep it as a tribute to him. When I read the ending I could see him in his room packed full of dirty laundry, "Mom, I'm home."

Thank you for writing this story and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pests  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you very much for the laughter when you wrote about blowing up the house because of a mouse. I definitely dislike the chemicals humans use for the many reasons we have. What some people consider pests others see as beneficial. You pose good questions. The word flow is smooth and carries the reader vividly from beginning to the ending.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about the chemicals and other stuff humans use for pest control with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could envision two people deeply in love and also an artist deeply in love with their chosen art form. Smoothly I was taken from beginning to ending of your poem. You kept me interested in reading as my imagination showed the details of your poem story.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about an artist with me and WdC members.


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Review of Pretender  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the shuddering as morals slip slide downward. You ask questions that provoke deep thinking and soul searching which I too ponder. You all offer hope for better decisions and positive changes. Most of all your words evoked the thought about {when good men do nothing evil flourishes]--not a quote.

Thank you for writing and for sharing you thought provoking poem with me and WdC members.


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Review of Free as a bird  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I watched as you flew to the heavens and met with Jesus. I could feel the happiness as you went home to be in heaven. I know of the hope through your words.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about being home in heaven with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your worlds remind me of a poetic story of victory sweet yet with some sourness because although there was victory for Calus, it seems there is potential for defeat. I was able to follow the events and see in my mind the characters actions. The plot kept me interested in the story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Our Rose  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an emotional writing that brings the reader close to the events. It captures details of a family who has loss of health and family members. I felt sadness and wished I could have helped.

Thank you for writing this amazing story about a family struggling with illness and loss and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Strange Guest  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The rhythm of your words carried me gently from the beginning to ending of your wonderful story. I could see her clearly as if she were here with me. In my imagination I watched her come and go, and do what she could to get you to follow her. I'm very glad you followed her and found her puppies. It's wonderful to know everyone thrived and found forever wonderful homes.

Thank you for writing this wonderful poetic story about the mother dog who fou nd you and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of What Now  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
My friend gets overwhelmed so I have an outside looking in idea about this situation. I have had to stop a project and consider options. I could see the scene, the character, and feel the emotions through your words. I thought about death and moving toward the light as I read your poem. Reading the additional imformation showed me your poem was about being overwhelmed.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your overwhelm poem word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
While reading your story about the painting and how you became a part of it embracing the details, I could see you walking into the picture touching, breathing in, and admiring it thoroughly. I could feel the peacefulness and wonder of it all. It was as if I also walked into the picture and experienced it completely with you.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the weeping willow picture with me and WdC members.


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Review of For Her  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Reading your words shows me someone respected and loved, the yearning to be with this person, and hope to be with them in the future or even in a different universe.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about a loved one with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ok, you made me hungry for Pi(e) hand it over!

Actually, I didn't think about adding cheese, I'm not sure if I would do this, but having a sense of adventure, I might try a taste. I thought about this all mixed up but maybe not. You have me considering leaving out coffee because the other items may not know how to swim.

Now you have my imagination running wild.

Ok, I admit your breakfast is reasonable and probably quite tasty. My mouth is watering.

Your story poem is easy to read and understand, visualize, and smell. I like cinnamon and took a wif and it smells wonderful.

Thank you for writing about pi(e) and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt foreboding as I read your words. The past is history we can learn from should we choose to do this. Tomorrow can paralie or move us into action. Watching and doing nothing can result in a future we do not want. These thoughts came to me as I read what you wrote.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Holding  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I believe that victory is yours. As with the things we experience it is but one step at a time. Taking a step then another in a positive way brings us closer to victory. I can only imagine what you felt in the past, feel, and might feel in the future, but I hope you will feel much better.

You wrote showing many emotions, a close-up of actions, and also of hope that is hanging on. Hope I hope is doing more than hanging on these days.

I was distracted for a second by the missing apostrophe in "dont".

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

Door, gotta go.


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Review of A Visual Echo  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words show vivid details of the picture and the picture mirrors the details of your words. I enjoyed the smooth rhythm of your poem, the ease of reading your words, and the relaxation felt as each word drew me into your poetry story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I too appreciate these things. The scenes are easy to see in my mind's eye. I could feel peace and relaxation along with trust and joy. I trust God for my life. He is as you show in your words strength and glorious joy. Your words work well together to convey the meaning of your story.

Thank you for writing this poem and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Manatee  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I feel for these placid, kind, and easygoing creatures of the sea as well as for all animals who endure the trials and tribulations that humanity has thrust into their horrible circumstances because of greed and heartless actions. Humans should be mindful of their lives. We should be kind to them. They only want to survive. I could see these magnificent creatures through your words.

Thank you for writing about humanity and the wonderful creatures who need our help and understanding and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Moclips  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I glided seemlesssly through your story on well-chosen and placed words. The pictures of the scenes and actions of the people are easy to see in the imagination guided by a rhythmic and bouncy joyful poem. I could smell the aroma of the bay bouquet and the tantalizing wafts of food. I could feel the tiredness at the end of the day.

Thank you for writing about a day at the bay and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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