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Rated: E | (5.0)
I hope everything has improved for you. I could see you sitting, pondering, and taking in all the sights, sounds, tastes, smells and feeling all the beauty that nature has to offer. I can believe you did this because people eventually need to find a place where they can rest and consider what they should do about a situation.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your time with nature through your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Charlie & Roy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very, very nice rhythm and colorful introduction to Charlie and his circumstances. Charlie is a very, very lucky cat to have chosen you for his friend and family member. I can believe everything because it is similar to other stories about shelter animals. Visualizing Charlie and the other cats as well as the other elements of the story was easy. Your words drew me into your Charlie story from the beginning to the end.

Thank you for Writing about Charlie and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of When I am down  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo You showed me the details of medical issues, recovering, and dealing with life as it is now through your word art. Your poem helped me to get to know you and understand what you do each day. I can relate because I have medical challenges too.

Thank you for writing and sharing about your challenges and your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow, what an interesting twist to your story. I didn't see the ending coming. I'm not certain why the woodsman had a change of heart about chopping down the tree except possibly he sorely missed using his ax and building things

Thank you for writing and for sharing your woodsman story word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Do I understand correctly she died? Possibly she could be in a coma. Imagining her with you I can see the two of you clearly in my mind's eye sharing your friendship and love.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your poem story with me and WdC members.


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Review of My one regret  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I believe saying something like "See you later," is better because I will be with family, friends, and acquaintances when I leave this earth. I will be with them and God.

The emotions I felt as I pictured you rooted to the spot were sadness, loneliness, dispair, and regret mostly along with a bit of pain or rethinking this a lot of pain. Your poem's story is easy to understand. The words guided me smoothly. Picturing the story gave me a close-up of your heart.

I hope you are feeling better.

Thank you for writing about your relationship and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Welcome  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing is easy to understand. The page presentation is welcoming. I feel drawn to further investigate this group. I'm glad you created a place for people to gather and share their challenging times, help each other, and relax and hang out.

Thank you for creating this page and sharing your word art and group with me and Wdc members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story I felt concern and sadness for the dogs because some were trying to survive and others were pets, but the dogs were friends and part of a social structure. I could also feel the anxiety because of the neighbor trying to hurt the dogs because they were barking. Rage, I suspect was brewing but fortunately, the neighbor didn't do worse. This is a good show of conflict. The husband and wife should try to keep the dogs safe which could be a source of worry and anxiety something that I thought of when considering their situation. Your plot, characters, and scene are believable.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of A Road To Follow  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the definitions, you affirmed my knowledge.

I could see question marks circling your head as you traveled along the path. I thought of the path of life and because I trust God I thought of Hime guiding you. Whether you lead or follow it seems depends on the purpose at the time and what God has in mind which is my best answer to this question. Your words showed me the way along the path which evoked my own questions and helped generate some answers.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I thought of a dog or possibly a cat. A human is possible but unlikely because a human would tell the story. This is a sad story with many unanswered questions on purpose or by accident. I felt bad for the "I kicked it in the back of the room" action against whatever it was. Hopefully, it was a memory or something imagined, but...

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your story showed me an artist working on an art project considering and showing detail and light illuminating the picture. I guess that it is a real-life kind of picture. I am not familiar with Mirific Master, Nermeer.

Posting in a drop note a little about Vermeer would help the reader know more about what you have written. Information about drop notes can be found on the left side list under writing.com tools, then writingML docs and help.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
You presented variations for writers to consider very important questions to keep life flowing in the stories. Thank you for reminding me about these questions. The different presentations are wonderful because people learn differently.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing your information to help writers crafe wonderful stories and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I chuckled at the rating can toughen their hides part of your poem story. Thick skin does need to be adorned whenever writers and reviewers intertwine. Your words carried me nicely through the events and I enjoyed imagining everything. There were no distractions.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art about WdC and writers with me and WdC members.


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Review of A life in games  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Gaming isn't something I am interested in doing fortunately because my limited vision would not allow my participation. I could feel your joy and longing to be actively gaming even when you were asleep. PPerhaps you found gaming in your dreams and these dreams were as exciting as gaming while awake. Your words gave me insight into gaming for you.

Thank you for writing about your gaming experience and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sevenling  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
He lost in more ways than one and although she lost too it was something that turned into a gain and huge gain. Her small loss became a win-win for her because she no longer was shackled to him and his losing ways but she triumphed by winning the lottery. He should have listened to her and followed in her footsteps.

I had to laugh when I read the last line, many thanks.

Thank you for writing and sharing your story about loss turning into triumph word art with me and WdC members.


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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
You gave me a very good chuckle, thank you. I enjoyed reading your words because they carried me along smoothly, showed the hidden truth of the matter, and kept me interested in what you would write next.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your unique word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Impostor  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is a very, very quick read that has me wondering what the answer is and who the detective is that will solve this mystery. Should you decide to create a short story I wonder why and what would cause this dilemma? Who did what to who and why? What ripple effects are there to affect other people and situations?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your short word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Pitch  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I could hear and see them interacting. The dialogue kept me reading. It seemed funny in a dry kinda way. I chuckled at the dirty diaper part, thanks. The need to blame someone seems ominous.

Thank you for writing and for sharing this dialogue word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Sweetheart  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Awesome! I see the structure and it is new to me, but I will keep it in mind so I can try this form. I could imagine each special event. Your words guided me through this poem without any distractions.

Thank you for writing and for sharing this poetry form, your word art, and the wonderful events told.


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Review of A Beautiful Woman  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I see red as blood flows between you connecting your care, love, and genuine friendship for each other. You seem to keep cool heads and arguing is kept captive. It's great you agree to disagree. Your words told a wonderful story of love and affection which is strong and thriving and growing. Your love and friendship will keep you close.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members about your extraordinary relationship.


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Review of Sometimes Sadness  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I understand the challenge of being grateful and yet disappointed. It's hard to explain when something isn't right or doesn't work for me, so I get it. I wonder what your age was when this happened because children do not understand things sometimes until they are adults.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members about your challenging Christmas.


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Review of That Simple Smile  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
An extended evening became a challenging meeting of the parents with words that showed me plenty of details. I had a close encounter with characters, scenes, and a plot that kept me reading. Everything is believable and well-presented.

There is potential for building a stronger and greater story. For example, when Katy rushed up the front stairs, what did it look like? Did she seem to pound up the stairs or something else? Was she pulling herself along grabbing the railing?

Did her heart pound, breaths heave in and out or was she more relaxed yet her insides trembling?

How did he react to this situation?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about parents and teenagers with me and WdC members.


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Review of Collateral Damage  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I could see the teddy bear damaged alone and lifeless because no child was there to take care of it and enjoy it. I could feel the emptiness and despair. It is terribly sad for dreams and freedom to be snatched away from a child or anyone. Your poem shows all this and more.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art about the loss od freedom and dreams and the teddy bear with me and WdC members.


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem's story shows there are no guarantees when adventuring into space travel. The visuals were easy to imagine. I could feel the stress and anxiety because of the missing people and the unsolved mystery. The rhythm of your words guided me safely and comfortably from the beginning to the end of your adventure.

Thank you for writing about the space adventure and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Two-Faced Woman  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I didn't see the ending coming because I kinda got lost in the story. Your words showed me vivid pictures of the characters, events, and actions which kept me reading. It felt eerie and I could tell something was going to happen related to fixing something but the something surprised me. I did get the characters and events mixed up a bit and had to reread the story. It has a good plot which is believable as it is presented. I can not explain what and why I got lost in the story because it is not clear to me. Perhaps it is more me just for today not not the story but I know not for sure.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art eeriness and all with me and WdC members.


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