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15 Total Reviews Given
I'm good at...
Pointing out things that you could tweek to make it flow more, or sound better. I point out the little things that we often don't catch.
Favorite Genres
Dystopian, SciFi, realistic fiction, poetry, nature, gay/lesbian, fantasy, erotica
Favorite Item Types
Static items, images, audio, forums
Public Reviews
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Review of Night sounds  Open in new Window.
Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is GREAT!!! Everything goes together like a puzzle. When you close your eyes, it's like you're actually outdoors, maybe camping with a friend, just looking up at the stars...

Excellent job!

~LD
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Review of Planet Earth  Open in new Window.
Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Item Number: 1851958
Item Name: Planet Earth
User: jpmurphy
Handle: jpmurphy

First Thoughts:
I love the rhyming! This is a great poem about your view of what the world has become. Such a creative idea!

Descriptions:
There is no real descriptions, but the word choice some what acts like it. The words add depth to the poem.

Errors/Suggestions:
There were no errors that I came across.

Favourite Part:
The rhyming and the message.*Smile*

Conclusion:
YOU are a great poet! I see that most of the items in your portfolio are poetry and can't wait to read more! You have a way with words. Please, update your bio! It would be a great help to get to know you.

~ LoveDystopian


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Review of Hog N' Dogs  Open in new Window.
Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your blog is great! I love dogs and have one of my own. I like hearing about other people's dogs. Your dogs sound like little darlings. Thank you for making this! It is truly amazing!
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Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Item Number: 2045005
Item Name: Breathing Your Love Away
User: bee353897
Handle: Barnaby

First Thoughts:
You have a way with words. This made me cry! That's how emotional it is. And I have never experienced love (except my puppy) or a breakup.

Description:
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved your word choice and every bit of it was spectacular. (I can't wait to read more of your work!)

Errors/Suggestions:
I could find no errors, but if you haven't entered this into a contest, you really should!

Favourite Part:
Everything!

Conclusion:
YOU are very talented! This piece shows that poetry doesn't have to rhyme.

~LoveDystopian
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Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Item Number: 2046369
Item Name: I've Been Looking For You
User: purplesunday
Handle: Choconut

First Thoughts:
Um... an alien? Sure, why not? I would have never thought of it and never even suspected that that was what was the problem.

Story Line:
Dr. Keith Rose is a doctor. It was hard to find the problem from his third "patient". But he wouldn't give up. SPOILER: As it turns out, the problem is an alien, who he then kills.

Description:
Not much of it, so maybe you could add some more? Your word choice is great, though. *Smile*

Errors/Suggestions:
In the first paragraph, "Dr" should have a period after it. That's all.

Conclusion:
This piece has lots of suspense. I can tell it's a contest entry, but maybe you should have added a bit more to it. Or maybe create a new item and write a 2nd draft.

~LoveDystopian
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Review of Sleepless Nights  Open in new Window.
Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am here to give YOU
a review!


Item Number: 2045991
Item Name: Sleepless Nights
User: logannariannaa
Handle:Belle Air

First Thoughts:
Whoa. I totally agree with this piece. I would have NEVER thought of this! Such a creative idea!

Story Line/Plot:
It's on those sleepless nights when your mind explores farther than you please.

Character(s):
Whoever you want it to be: you, a friend, an enemy, anyone.

Descriptions:
LOVE THEM!!! "Letting my mind wander to those dark, dreary dreadful places of my mind that I somewhat despise." WOW!!! Now that's what I call talent!

Errors/Suggestions:
None that I could find : )

Favourite Part:
It's too hard to pick!

Conclusion:
You are an AMAZING author! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!! Keep up the awesome work!

~ LoveDystopian
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Review by LoveDystopian Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
i love the puns! I would never thought of it! The cat is very cute in that picture. And that's saying something since I'm not very fond of them.
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