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Review of Valentine's day  
Review by Whitney
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
When I read this I could feel the emptiness and longing, the loneliness that permeates the soul. Most people want to love and be loved, and when we are deprived of love the pain can be unbearable. This piece is very descriptive and emotional. It causes the reader to feel what you feel. Great writing.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem gave me quite the chuckle as I read it through. I am sure many of us can relate to the challenges of making better choices and trying to lose weight. This was fun to read and it also contained some helpful information. I think you covered just about everything!
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Review of The rose  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
My favorite flower is the rose, and I think no other flower matches its beauty. With just a few words you have given this lovely flower an elegance that truly captivates the reader. Roses have great presence, and this piece describes that presence with finesse. Nice work.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was a breath of fresh air, literally. I know what cold winters are like. Fresh snow and ice from winter storms are always a sight to behold. I loved the words “imagining trees dressed like baby’s breath”. Your descriptions are very imaginative in this piece. Great work!
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This piece is a lovely tribute to your husband, and a gift I hope you shared with him. The words are loving and passionate, even a bit spiritual. Along with desire, I can feel the warmth and devotion. I can sense the longevity and stability of your relationship. I enjoyed reading this poem very much.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very fitting tribute to a man and his family who serve the Lord. I loved the descriptions of each one’s specialties, especially the musical talent. It’s great to have such a dedicated man in your life, and yes, the world could surely use more men like your pastor. Nice poem.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely poem I enjoyed reading from start to finish. It’s a sweet and emotional piece describing the search for love, the uncertainty, and the gift of permanence. The rhymes are great and the ending is happy and peaceful. I love the heart shaped tree that illustrates this poem. Nice work.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a true romantic poem here, as is your specialty, and it doesn’t disappoint. It’s sweet and adoring, heartfelt and very emotional. I loved reading it through, and the three line style somehow fit just right. It’s beautiful in its devotion and love for the woman you speak of. She’s one lucky lady. It’s a great poem.
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Review of Oh Deborah  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
In this poem I felt a great deal of love and devotion. The wording is very descriptive and far reaching, going into the past years and the anticipation of love to come. It’s a beautiful tribute to your lady love. I enjoyed this piece from start to finish. It is quite an intense and emotional poem. Well done.
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Review of Dawn of Time  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Short and sweet, this poem is mystical and romantic. It opens up the imagination to dream and to reach for magical things. I sensed a longing, a need for connection, and an invitation to get close. It’s lovely and promising, with great meaning in just a few lines. Nice work.
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Review of Rain Dance  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Stuart Anderson released many deep and heartfelt songs. His lyrics are very moving. He seems to tell of the present day and also speculates on the future, which may not be a pleasant time coming. He also refers to his homeland which he loved in many of his songs, either directly or indirectly. A very intense and emotional man, Stuart left us with many songs having lyrics worth further reflection. The words of this piece are very poetic. It has a bit of sadness, a bit of yearning, and a bit of nostalgia. Thank you for sharing it here.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is a sentimental piece, as I feel some tragedy and loss here. There is a sense of solitude in the words, yet an open heart ready to love. I liked the font and spacing, and the double lines seemed very fitting here. There’s great emotion in this poem and I really enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
I felt the intensity of your words in this delightful poem, which gave everything that it promised in the title, an abundance of romance. It is warm and imaginative, with a sense of yearning. It has great depth and was indeed a very romantic poem, one that made me feel cuddled and close to a loving partner.
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Review of Night Thoughts  
Review by Whitney
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I was taken on quite an emotional ride with this poem. I really felt your words. There is great love here, along with devotion, tenderness, and kindness. It’s a beautiful piece that was a pleasure read from start to finish. I got a lump in my throat reading it. It’s just wonderful.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a very emotional piece. It’s simple in format but very powerful because of the words you chose. Pretty much everyone has had their heart broken, so I think you will reach many with the message contained here. It’s sad with a hint of despair, yet there is also a determination and sense of hope at the end. This is a very good read.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here is yet another sweet and romantic poem. It is quite obvious that you love this lady. She must be very special to earn such devotion. Your words are descriptive and there is a nice flow to this poem. Thank you for sharing your feelings here. It is a refreshing read.
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Review of Golden Breeze  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Every time I visit your portfolio for new works I am always pleasantly surprised and delighted. The wonderful thing about this poem is that it felt like a breeze when I read it. It flowed with ease, almost like a butterfly. It’s a lovely tribute to this special lady of yours, a very nice poem indeed.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem about this woman goes deeper than romance or flights of fancy. It’s a testament to your deep love for her, your respect and honor for her integrity and vision. It’s a very moving and heartfelt poem, with just the right amount of mysticism and touch from the divine. It’s lovely how much you care about her, and your protective nature in regards to her is quite admirable. Your poems always touch my heart and this one doesn’t disappoint. Thank you for sharing your work here.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
It’s another fine chapter in a story that has twists and turns you don’t see coming, like the meeting of Gideon and Mary Loo. A sight for sore eyes she must be, because she’s the spitting image of Gideon’s beloved deceased wife. I wonder what will happen next, even as now the two orphans will need tending after the carnage that took their parents’ lives. This story continues to peak my interest and I will read on to discover more.
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Review of Her Delicate Ways  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely tribute to a lady love. I felt the admiration and warmth in your words. The subject’s beauty and humility are very evident. The poem is light and joyful, yet very heartfelt. The flow and rhyme are great in this piece and I very much enjoyed reading it. Mystical and romantic, the expression in this poem is just wonderful.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
These chapters were emotionally charged as two children lost their parents to the viciousness of Kane’s accomplices. How these two children will go on is anyone’s guess, but right now there is more concern for Gideon and the others who are trying desperately to stop the carnage. At this point I don’t know how they will make out, but I look forward to the next chapters of this story.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here is one more great chapter in the story that has had me captivated since the very first line. The stakes are high as Gideon continues to try to bring down Kane and his men. Now the lives of a woman and her children are in danger, and I fear it may be too late. I eagerly look forward to the next chapter.
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Review of Hold On  
Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely poem of love and support for someone who means a lot to you. You remind her here of the good times shared and your devotion to her. Through life’s ups and downs it is apparent that you will be there for her no matter what comes along. She is one lucky lady to have you in her corner. It’s a very nice poem with true heartfelt expression.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
Here is a poem that pulls at the heart. Anyone who has pets or has lost them can relate to the content here. It honors our dear animals who are no longer with us and does so with great feeling and depth. It’s heartbreaking, it’s sweet, and it’s spiritual. This poem is a memorial to one horse in particular, but it’s also a lovely tribute to all of our animal friends who had to leave us before we were ready to say goodbye.
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Review by Whitney
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was an absolute delight to read. The rhymes were perfect and the rhythm was on point. I came away with a great feeling of romance and love. There’s historic flavor, mysticism, and rich description as you set the tone for a wedding day in the hills of Scotland. It’s a wonderful piece that touches the heart.
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