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I try to find the WOW-factor in your writing. No in-depth analysis, just my thoughts. #19 on the Public Reviewers list June 2016. #29 Public Reviewer July 2016. #10 Public Reviewer August 2016. Newbies Academy Reviewing Classroom, Winner in June 2016. First Place The Newbie Academy Review Contest June 2016. Second Place in "The Newbie Academy Review Contest " July and Aug 2016. #9 Public Reviewer Sept 2016.#20 Public Reviewer Oct 2016. First place in "The Newbie Academy Review Contest" November 2016.#22 Public Reviewer Nov 2016.#36 Public Reviewer Feb 2017.#67 Public Reviewer March 2017.#56 Public Reviewer July 2017.#41 Public Reviewer Aug 2017. #77 Public Reviewer Oct 2017. #53 Public Reviewer Nov 2017. #53 Public Reviewer Dec 2017.#96 Public Reviewer Sept 2018. #38 Public Reviewer Aug 2020.#26 Public Reviewer Sept 2020. #56 Public Reviewer Oct 2020. #80 Public Reviewer Nov 2020
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for entry "Puns of the Year
Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi, sindbad
I am reviewing these puns as part of "Quarantine corner. Closed. [E].

I already gave you an MB for this item because I loved it so much.

I thought at the time, and still think today that your puns are great. They cover the pandemic and everything related to COVID-19 with such taste, I find it therefore easy to laugh out loud despite the gravity of the subject.

That balance of being funny but not tasteless or cruel is very difficult to find, but you managed to do so. I thank you for it. It makes the days in this pandemic a tiny winy lighter. That in itself is admirable.

I hope you are able to make more jokes, you are so good at it.

Keep writing and stay safe out there!

WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: E | (5.0)
Watch where you are going

Hi, Richard ~ The final review of your package deal winning in an auction.

Wow, what a great and mysterious tale this is. Truely enjoyable from first to last line, although I had to reread the ending several times before I could grasp a meaning to it.

Perhaps that's because the main character turned into some kind of enlightened druid-type of person, exalted about what had happened to him, exalted about the witch who turned into the cat he held on his lap. Exalted about finding his family's destination through the trinkets that found their legitimate place? Or something...

Your writing style is great, pace and rhythm are very pleasant. Plot and characterization very well developed. I loved this short story.

Thanks for the trinkets in your portfolio,

Thanks for sharing this story.

WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Watch where you are going

Hi, 🌓 HuntersMoon , I found this poem in the R&R section.

Wow, how beautiful romantic love is felt through the heart of an aging poet. I adore your capability to create such a simple but profoundly deep ode to the one you love. It must be one of the best things ever in life, to have lived and loved this way.

I wished I had the opportunity to create such a poem, but alas I am not in the position to do so. No envy here, but deep respect that you are able to enjoy a loving life the way you obviously did.

A sonnet is a great way of expressing those feelings. You are a master at it.

Thank you so much for sharing. I enjoyed reading it.


WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Words Whirling 'Round

I found this beautiful, beautiful poem in the R&R section.

There is not much I can say other than this poem grabbed me and didn't let go. It is so soft yet outspoken, philosophical yet mundane and it has a real good feel about it.

I was puzzled if there was a system behind this poem, with aaaaa,bbcda,eeeea,ffgfa. I could say it looked a bit like a Whyquain, a new poetry form that answers some questions by monorhyme iambic, tetrameter lines, but again that was not it. So, I am at a loss here. You probably just invented this poem all by yourself. Good for you, because the result is lovely. Especially with that repeating last line.

It is very well crafted and has a good rhyme and rhythm. All in all a great poem. Thanks for sharing.


WakeUpAndLive


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Review of Images of Hope  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Crow ,

I rummaged through your port to review a piece of your writing as a reaction to your latest Note on the Newsfeed "Note: As The Crow Flies Robotic Reviews ...". You were a little disappointed about the uniformed and robot-like manner of some reviews. Although I recognized this happening to me sometimes I wasn't aware of the impact this could have on writers, especially on you as you made clear.

So, I review your editorial of the most horrific day in my life as a fervent news watcher not situated in the States, September 11, 2001. I was an eyewitness from 09.05 hrs that dreadful morning. I watched CNN 24/7 for endless weeks and have seen, probably not everything, but most footage and movies of 9/11.

Your piece is a beautiful and profound reminder of that historic event.

A few thing come to mind.

You write about New York in a unfavorable way. The city has no friendly personality and is described as a cold and callus metroplolis. Why is that? I haven't been to New York yet, although I visited your country twice but my impression as an outsider with a few friends who have been there is the oposite. New York is viewed as friendly, but ideosyncratic. Perhaps you could add a line or two with an exemple of why you think New York, before 9/11 was such a drag.

The second thing is that I tried to find on Youtube that bystander's footage interviewing people on the streets, but I could not find it right away. If you happen to know wich footage, you could add a link in reference. That would clarify your write a little bit.

Last remark is one typo: [...] see(n) by the entire world. You lost the "n".

All in all, it was very good to read your piece after so many years to the tragedy. There is a whole generation who didn't watch the terrible footage of that day. For them your piece is an important reminder of the rescilience of a city, of a nation, of a people.

Thank you for sharing.

(And no, I am not a robot *Bigsmile*)

WakeUpAndLive


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Review of Time to Wake Up!  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Pernell Rogers ,

*Bats* *Bats* *Bats*

Here is your judge from the dungeons of SCREAMS!!! with a short review of "Time to Wake Up! [13+]. Congratulations on your win, well deserved!

This is a really good entertaining and chilling story of a dream of a burial, or a burial, or a dream of a dream of a burial. Very spooky indeed. You managed to make it extra creepy with all the eerie sounds used. It had me captivated from beginning to end. And such brevity, very well done in only 433 words.

Thanks for sharing this short story, take care, and stay safe!




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Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Elby Wordsmith ,

I found your verse at your request.

So, you are the last romantic idealist left at the edges of the realm of writing.com? I don't think so, there must be more poets like you craving for those times when Romanticism with horror, passion, and awe, especially when experienced in the face of nature’s sublime landscape, offered an artistic antidote to the perceived disconnect from spirituality.

These are trying times indeed! But your poem is there to the rescue from an idealistic point of view where the aim of education is to discover and develop each individual's abilities and full moral excellence in order to better serve society.

You will never accept the situation as is, but will always look beyond its borders.

That is admirable and not the work of a mad romantic, you are selling yourself short. Pathetic as it may be: you seek solutions for the world we're living in today with higher standards than practiced in the here and now of realism. And you can know given your age.

An old poet seeking others to join him in his quest for more romanticism and idealism. How hopeful is that?

One thing to add: When romanticism and idealism are overwhelmed/ When people take it as fact /Then humanity will end. I would change the "when" in the second line into "and" to make your point stronger and easier to understand.

When romanticism and idealism are overwhelmed/ And people take it as fact /Then humanity will end

Thanks for sharing. Keep safe, and enjoy writing!


WakeUpAndLive


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Review of The Right Path  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Jacky

I found this flash fiction from 2018 in the R&R section.

What a sympathetic story this is. I had to chuckle several times. First I saw it coming that your pillow should hit the fan and all the feathers came out: what a great view of your bedroom; like a whirling wind of tiny little feathers. As in a fairytale. Nice description.

Then your mother... hilarious as she stormed into your bedroom, all willing to help out like mothers want to... seeing the mess in your bedroom and fainting.

The fainting ties it up with your first lines about the way your parents acted in your childhood on the subject of bedmaking.

But, good for you; you are an adult now and can make your own decisions on what to do in life. That sure feels like the right path to me!

A grabbing little tale and I noticed that brevity is your strong point. Chapeau! you are economical with words but you chose them carefully. The result is very funny indeed. *Bigsmile*

Thanks for sharing, stay safe!



WakeUpAndLive


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Review of Paper Bags  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi, Jacky
I found your short story on the R&R page. it was sweet and short so I decided to read and review.

A very good read as well, I enjoyed reading the whereabouts of Mrs. Bell and Henry, the police officer, conversing about a paper bag doing groceries at say, Wallmart. I hope indeed they have paper bags there for the sake of this analogy?

I loved it how you turned a completely innocent and under normal circumstances dull subject as using the paper bag instigated by law, into a gem where I had to chuckle. You draw a vivid picture at the very end with Gertie and Henry having a good time making lots of noise riding the police car and putting on the siren. I just saw them mucking about in the streets. Very good description.

I love your writing style and the lovely vibe that's coming from this story. And the topic is an important one: take care of our environment by refusing to use more plastic! Thanks for sharing,

WakeUpAndLive


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Review of A Pirate's Life  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi,Jeff , I found your 99 words on the R&R page.

It reminded me of The Rime of the Ancient Mariner by Samuel Taylor Coleridge. Very beautiful indeed. The pirates face difficulties at sea and ultimately death?

“Alone, alone, all, all alone,
Alone on a wide wide sea!
And never a saint took pity on
My soul in agony.” (Coleridge)

You captured the agony of the pirate very well. And it only took you 99 words. It could easily pass as a story-poem. Very admirable! Thanks for sharing.


WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, drboris I read your story on the R&R section of the site. Since I watched Bram Stoker's Dracula a long time ago I wanted to get reacquainted with the story. And boy, you didn't disappoint. What a great movie review this is.

You managed to get in all the relevant information, hustle it into a story and come out on top.

I loved reading all the details and it brought back the memory of the movie in a flush. Right in!

I can't remember if Dracula looked like Glenn Close, but I indeed suggest no touring down Montana. That's apparently where she lives. You could easily be driven from the road down there by a spook. Lol.

Anyway, thanks for sharing. Keep on writing (movie reviews) and take care and stay safe!

WakeUpAndLive


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Review of Helpless  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi, Hilesha Shaziane ,

I found this beautiful outcry ad random.

It is a free verse poem on helplessness, but I thought that not be the case. This poet is not helpless! The writer/poet has found words to express this feeling and reflect on it aka put it into words and put it out there into the world for everybody to read and review.

Wow, that's strength, that's very powerful. So, I salute you on this effort to make sense of experiences and feelings. You did an excellent job.

Sometimes Life is cruel, and it's our job to make sense of it the best we can. Thank you for sharing, keep on writing!!

WakeUpAndLive
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Review of Worm's Eye View  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hi Words Whirling 'Round , I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits. *Delight*

On Title/Subject
Great title for a personification. Good by-line, I am drawn into the story.

General impressions
Wow, what a really funny short flash this is. From the POV of a little green worm. You described its journey from the seed till near death? A lovely tale with beautiful yet simple wording.

Favorite Parts
"Really?" Asked the worm. "You wouldn't s*** a guy now, would you?"

Great pun, I had to laugh out loud!

Suggestions
I would suggest that you put the genre into Children's instead of Other. That way people can see this story also as a great kid's tale.

Final thoughts
This is a great tale with vivid and warm colorful words. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive


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for entry "Insomnia
Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Fantasy and Science Fiction So...  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hey, hullabaloo22

*Bats* *Bats* *Bats*

This is Your Judge WakeUpAndLive from the dungeons of "SCREAMS!!! [XGC] with a short review of "Insomnia.

Eerie as can be! What a thrilling story full of suspense. Loved it! You so are able to grasp this subject of aliens from Outerspace visiting us humans in a tasteful way, without really freaking out the reader. Thank you for this gem!

One fluke: it was genuine, my insomnia, but since Just the omission of one comma that is distracting this reader to stay in the trans to fully enjoy this wonderful short story. Just a little pause before continuing the story?

I would suggest putting this story in the genre SF instead of Gothic. People interested in SF would love it!

I hope 'you' got some sleep after all *Wink*

Thanks for sharing and entering the contest, and winning! Congratulations.

As Edgar Allen Poe said: “Let my heart be still a moment and this mystery explore…”

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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi percy goodfellow , I found your writing ad random in the Read & Review Section. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits. *Delight*

A nice little poem of one of the tales where it all began. In the garden of Eden. There was no snake in your version, I liked that. Too bad she took a bite, disastrous consequences, so I'm told.

Lovely cadence, very subdued. Your poem had a good vibe to it. Thanks for sharing this beautiful quatrain poem. I liked it very much.

Write on!
WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi S.z.kamoonpuri , I found your writing at your request. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits. *Delight*


On Title/Subject
I liked the title where you expressed the incomparability of the big G. He was an artist, so that puts him closer to us mortals.

General impressions
A very nice poem with some beautiful wording. I can understand what you are expressing. Am I right in that you are an ESL writer and perhaps this poem is translated from your language into English? I did that myself sometimes but found my better poems are the ones that I put directly into English.

Favorite Parts
I loved the use of alliteration in the second stanza. It really added to the significance and clarity of this poem.

Suggestions
You used the word 'bedecked' twice in one stanza, close to each other. Maybe you can find another word for one of them?

Final thoughts
Loved reading your beautiful creation. It had strong content with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing.

Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive


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Review of Gone Guy  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Hi Wordwhirl
I found your writing at random. First of all: Welcome to Writing.com. I hope you learn to love this site as much as I do. *Smile*

Great first short story. I loved reading it. All start out "normal" although boyfriend left. But I suspected something fishy when there was that ache on the main character's arm. But I never suspected this ending. Good suspense, well done.
The write has a good flow, and pace and the main character is well developed and most importantly, she is believable. It all has a really good vibe to it. The grammar is impeccable, with no flaws I can find.

All in all, thank you for sharing, and Write on!
WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi HollyMerry
I found your short story on the Read & Review Page. I take it this is for a contest? As a dog owner myself, I was keen to read on.

What a lovely story and what a birthday for this dash hound. I liked it very much. I was very surprised to hear that Merry has a wheelchair attached to her back legs. I've seen that once on television and I was amazed by the fact that dogs can still play, walk, run and enjoy themselves despite their handicap.

She has a good owner, that's for sure, celebrating her birthday the way she did.

The write has a nice flow, grammar is impeccable and the vibe is good.

Nothing more to add than Welcome to Writing.Com. I hope you learn to love this site as much as I do. Thanks for sharing, Write on!

WakeUpAndLive



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Review of Funnies  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hi Robert Waltz
I was visiting your portfolio and I am so glad I did. Those Funnies are really funny! Chapeau. I had to chuckle a lot, so, I am enjoying myself on a Saturday night. Thanks for that.
I read The Wish (2004), The Worst Hangover (2009), and First Date (2006). They were all hilarious in a really good way. Writing stuff that's really funny is very hard to do, you being able to pull it off is great.

I am going to read further but not before letting you know you made my day. *Bigsmile*

Thanks for sharing.
Write on!
WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hi, ReadingReindeerProximaCentauri

I found this story in your portfolio and thought to give it a look.

A nice short story with a gruesome ending. It started out innocently enough with thoughts of a husband that acted distant in the morning. Soon the mayhem started with the delivery boy with the shotgun approaching. Terrible scene, nicely written. Sadly, these things seem to happen in real life as well. Go figure to be that bystander and victim!

I really liked the way you described her trivial thoughts just as she died: about her clothing. In light of what happened next, these are so unimportant. But hey, you never know what Life has in store for you.

Thanks for sharing,
Write On!
WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Good morning Fangus ,

I found this little gem from some years ago in the Read & Review Section and since I didn't review your work in a while I decided to have a good look.

What a splendid little tale this is. No horror this time, but Sfi, but with great suspense in it. You managed to describe a town with people in it in such few words, admirable. I loved it! Good descriptions, great flow, and pace, and although they are mentioned very briefly, your characters have a real feel to them. Great job.

The only thing I have to mention is that I didn't grasp your ending. The deja-vu of Terry looking at the sky at the vanishing UFO? What had that to do with the story? Who was he/she and what else had he/she been seeing?

Other than that... a lovely start to my Saturday morning. Thank you for sharing.

Write on!
WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, Artful Flower ,
First of all, welcome to Writing.com. I hope you learn to enjoy this site as much as I do. *Bigsmile*

This is a great opening to a larger story. It is well written, has good descriptions and an attractive underlying theme. Your grammar is impeccable, good flow, and pace.

I hope you find the time to make this a larger story with characters in it, and dialogs. This Sfi is really worth expanding.

Thank you for sharing,
Write on!
WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with Positive Hearts Reviews Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi lezismore-with 2021 vision , I found your writing at the newsfeed. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits. *Delight*

On Title/Subject
Good title and nice picture, so I knew Loretta was a dog.

General impressions
Nice little tale about an alien dog abduction. As a dog owner and lover of the canine species I was tempted to read and review this short story. I loved reading about the main character's suspicion that his golden retriever was no longer his good old Loretta but replaced by an alien. I sometimes wonder about dogs myself, what species are they...? Thought it real funny you came up with this abduction.


Favorite Parts
Concerned for Loretta’s safety I tried to get up but found that I had become paralyzed. My attempts to verbally warn her were also in vane. They continued chanting and dancing for sometime then joined hands and formed a circle around the couch. A blinding light filled the livingroom then slowly dimmed then vanished. Loretta and the creatures were gone!


Good description of what happened with the dog. I could see it happening in front of my eyes.

Suggestions
In the first line it is not clear that Loretta is a dog. Perhaps you could add that to the name: my dog Loretta?

Final thoughts
Nice little story. Believable and the way it is told, very serious. I thought it was funny at times. The paranoia is real. Or is the dog-owner suffering from delusions? Because this is told in a blog-like manner I also take that into consideration.



Keep up the good work, enjoy writing!

WakeUpAndLive


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Review of Stormy Weather  
Review by WakeUpAndLive
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi, Blimprider .
What a tale with a twist this is. I surely felt sorry for that lost opportunity of Jim, losing out on a record deal. I loved the story, great descriptions, and very good dialogs. Impressive.

The start of this story is hilarious, in a way. The manner in which he explained and sold that new toilet to that lady. I laughed out loud.

I had to look up the word 'cantankerous' (love new words!) but to use it twice in such a short while is maybe too much? Can you change one of them? cantankerous toilet or cantankerous car?

And one glitch: He tuned to see Bill Sanders doesn't need a quotation mark at the beginning.

I love your writing style, your grammar is impeccable and the pace is very good. Thanks for sharing.

Enjoy writing,

WakeUpAndLive


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Review by WakeUpAndLive
In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi Maya , I found your writing ad random. Hopefully, this review will find you in good spirits. *Delight*

First of all, Welcome to Writing.com. Hopefully, you will enjoy and explore all the possibilities of this site.

Bravo! I salute you for writing this important essay on plastic waste and the importance of better action concerning plastic usage during this pandemic. Although I was somewhat familiar with the statistics you mentioned, I never thought about the increase of plastic and waste like gloves, and the high dosage of plastics because they are disposables which are of importance during Corona time. You are so right: perhaps we will control this virus within the year (wishful thinking maybe?) but the ramifications of this plastic pollution will last a lifetime. You made me conscious of those facts.

One thing: if you change the text size a little bit to 3 or 3,5 it will read much better. Now the letter size is too small. It will benefit your writing. And its content is too important to lose readers because of it?

Thanks for sharing, enjoy writing.

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