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Review of Kevin Locke  
Review by Wiishkobi Ode
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a beautiful poem, I felt the movement of the dancer and the music was imagined in my mind, well done !
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Review by Wiishkobi Ode
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, that was quite amazing. I am hooked on the story, and for some odd reason I am really feeling sad for Joan, I think she is in way over her head, these men are all dangerous and jealous of each other, I think something terrible is in her future.. she is too sensitive for be a whore... and the two brothers .. not sure about them yet... keep writing you are doing great !
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Review by Wiishkobi Ode
Rated: E | (5.0)
You have penned an excellent Villanelle poem, no wonder it won a Quill Award. You made the fighting scene so real and horrible. It must have been so awful for the soldiers in that battle, I cannot image the death and suffering it created, the bravery of those men were brought to life with your words, very well written, be proud of your poem. Well done.
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Review by Wiishkobi Ode
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I really enjoyed your poem, to me it spoke of courage, you have finally arrived in a good place, where you answer to no one, can be yourself, no matter what anyone says, I feel I am in that place too, it was a long journey, with lots of deep valleys and mazes and twists and turns, I have had to let a lot of negative people go, but wow, I am where, you describe, and it is awesome, well done !
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Review by Wiishkobi Ode
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well, that sure had me in its grip from the first word, although I did not follow completely the story line in the beginning, I was able to grasp it after reading more. I think Joan is playing with fire with what she is doing with men, seems she thinks she is in control but I don't think so, these men are dangerous. Looking forward to more of your story, well done so far.
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