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Review of Beginnigs  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your message is one that all writers wish, just to write and be read, it is a heavy burden we put upon ourselves. Each time we write it is a shot in the dark, just write, write for yourself, write for the joy of writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Arlene  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, I like both versions of the Roundel poem, very well written, rhyming is great, the theme is wonderful, I like a poem with repeating line, I think I have written this form before , but will have to try one again ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
lol, I love your play with words and admire your use of words, a fun read for sure ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Burst  
Rated: E | (5.0)
wow, your flash story is wonderful, I was holding my breath, knowing the crash would come, amazing 53 words ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Crow, I sense such a sadness in your write, dreaming of a love that never comes is so painful. It is a beautiful poem. ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Prayer to God  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Tarasankar,

I love your prayer poem, I believe in prayers. My Mom (RIP) always told me that a person does not have to be in church to pray and I never forgot that ~peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Dear Dad  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Elska, oh what a sad emotional poem for your Dad. I know this pain also as I have lost both my parents as I sat there helpless to do anything as they slipped away. Your poem shows the deep love you had for your dad and I am sure he is looking down from heaven with a smile ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

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Review of Raised for Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Mike, I love your haiku, so beautifully penned and so spiritual, well done. Perhaps you could read some of my poetry ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Properous, you have penned a beautiful spiritual Diamante poem. I have written some in the past and they can be quite tricky but yours is perfect, perhaps you can read some of my poetry ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of I Dare Not  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Elfin, our grandfathers saw so much horror in the war that it changed them forever. My grandfather would not even speak of what he experienced but I saw the sadness in his eyes. They come home and try their best to resume a normal life but it is always there in their minds eating away at their happiness and I sense that in this poem, no matter the years, it is still there ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your poem reads wonderful, your fears are dripping from each word, and from your beautifully penned lines. I like your poem and read it several times and each time I liked it more ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Confession  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sabujava, oh your letter to God broke my heart, each word is dripping with pain. I hope this is just fantasy and not reality especially the part of leaving this material world ?II love this concept of using poetry to write a letter to God. And ending it your son was beautiful ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Tall Trees  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Amy, I find your poem quite beautiful, I love trees. I have a lot of very tall trees where I live and the tops in the wind remind me of waves on the ocean rolling. Yes, the leaves whisper, if you are listening. Great writing.

~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Tristful Transit  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ken, I found your poem emotional, oh life is full of memory and regret for each of us, your poem touched me deeply. I love the Etheree form you selected, it is so flexible to so many themes, the possibilities are endless, I have used this form also with great success in the past, you have inspired me to write another ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of Aloneness  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Zeke, I read your bio and I am so sorry to hear you had a serious stroke and can no longer write. That is a hard for a poet to accept. I have read your poem Aloneness and find it very emotional and it touched my heart deeply. It is skillfully written and you should be very proud of it ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Review of A remote  
Rated: E | (3.0)
Bluebird, I can relate to your poem, I hold a lot of sorrow in my heart too, and no matter how much I write about it, the pain never goes away. I suppose we must carry it till we take our last breath, I know that sounds terrible to say, but I think you know what I mean_Constance
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Review of Kevin Locke  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a beautiful poem, I felt the movement of the dancer and the music was imagined in my mind, well done !
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well, that was quite amazing. I am hooked on the story, and for some odd reason I am really feeling sad for Joan, I think she is in way over her head, these men are all dangerous and jealous of each other, I think something terrible is in her future.. she is too sensitive for be a whore... and the two brothers .. not sure about them yet... keep writing you are doing great !
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You have penned an excellent Villanelle poem, no wonder it won a Quill Award. You made the fighting scene so real and horrible. It must have been so awful for the soldiers in that battle, I cannot image the death and suffering it created, the bravery of those men were brought to life with your words, very well written, be proud of your poem. Well done.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, I really enjoyed your poem, to me it spoke of courage, you have finally arrived in a good place, where you answer to no one, can be yourself, no matter what anyone says, I feel I am in that place too, it was a long journey, with lots of deep valleys and mazes and twists and turns, I have had to let a lot of negative people go, but wow, I am where, you describe, and it is awesome, well done !
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Well, that sure had me in its grip from the first word, although I did not follow completely the story line in the beginning, I was able to grasp it after reading more. I think Joan is playing with fire with what she is doing with men, seems she thinks she is in control but I don't think so, these men are dangerous. Looking forward to more of your story, well done so far.
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