Thank you for requesting a review. Let me start by saying wow, you did a great job hooking me right away, within the first few lines. Not only that, but you kept hooking me and kept prodding me to keep reading. I like the way you lay it out in a journal format and you used bold, underline, and spacing to emphasize parts and make it feel very authentic a real. Like a real journal. The imagery is sharp, I can vividly imagine what is going on and as I read, the realization that it really is not such a far-fetched story brings chills to me as the reader. We already see some of this being played out in our society today and we have seen it as a stark reality during Hitler's rule. Slowly, ever so slowly it is seeping back into our real world. Does anyone notice? Those that do notice, are they bold enough, brave enough to point it out? Would anyone even listen to them if they did? I don't have the answers to those questions. Well done on this, I hope to read more of your writing in the future.