|This story was great, and it made two points that I found interesting.
Firstly, the story stated that people made assumptions that something didn't exist when it did. In the metaphorical sense, that something could be anything from happiness, to a new job, to an A on a test at school, to simply anything that wasn't expected, but positive.
Secondly, it stated that conflicts need rebuilding. In the metaphorical sense, that could be a friendship or something of that nature.
In addition, there were no apparent grammatical mistakes.
All in all, I think that your story was great, and it is worthy of five stars.