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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I loved the story line. It was vivid and believable. The Grammar was flawless. The flow was easy. I found myself wanting more. I hope that you decide to make this into a story or even a larger work.

I am happy to have found this work, and please give me a head's up when you have developed this into a larger item that can fill in the answers to all the questions that this work has left me with.

Thank you
Ida Matilda


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Review of With Love  
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a beautiful love story. It is one that gives a magical hope that death does not necessarily separate those who truly love each other. I long for that. I know that there are couples that pray that this type of idea is not true. These people pray for death to separate them so that they don't have to continue together.

This story is written so lovingly. I can picture the situation so clearly and the read is so smooth.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida Matilda Wright


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I enjoyed this read. The story line was unusual and imaginative. It was a fun read. You painted a vivid picture for the reader. The emotions were raw, and the conversations were playful. I also like how you gave the vamp woman power to communicate through mental telepathy.

This was a fun read. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida Matilda Wright


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Review of Writing.Com 101  
for entry "Gift Points
Rated: E | (5.0)
How can I use my gift points to renew my membership.
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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the style of your poem. It was a pleasant read. The flow was easy to read. The only suggestion is only because I have such bad vision, I would enjoy the poem more if the font was larger. I am happy to say that I will re-visit your port when time permits. I go to school, work, and have a family member who just had a stroke. However, please email me to remind me to read more of your work. It was truly an enjoyable read with a good story line.

Thank you
Ida Matilda Wright


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is an excellent idea. I was a shy child and was bullied, to tell you the truth, I am still bullied by many. That being said, my children are bullied. My daughters are over weight and called names. My son is a special needs and he is bullied about being different. I commend you for what you are doing thank you so very much.

Ida Matilda Wright
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Review of Touch of Magic  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a smooth and fluent story. The characters were well developed. You were able to paint the events in the story with well chosen vocabulary. This was captivating from beginning to the end. IF this is what the story is like when you feel it is unfinished, what wonderful story this would like if finished.

Thank you for sharing this with me.
Ida


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Review of Chief Jimbob  
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was a well written story. The characters seemed to have been developed with a very easy flare. This is a wonder and amusing story line. I really think that this was worth being highlighted in comedy newsletter. I found a smile coming across my face. Jimmy has nothing on me. If there is rain to come, I always get caught in it.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Thank you for sharing this with us. I found that it has a nice flow, and the message was very clear. It was cute and brought a smile to my face. I really would like to read of more of your work. I found this highlighted on the Comedy newsletter.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a wonderful little story. I really enjoyed it. It really did deserve being highlighted in the newsletter. The flow was smooth. THe picture was painted in a believable manner. I would love to read more of this kind of humor.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a fun poll, and I enjoyed to see the votes that you have so far. I really wish that I could write at doctor's offices and such. It would make time come so much faster, and it would also keep my reviews up so that I could pay for my own prem membership. I am unable to take my computer around with me because of being afraid to break it.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Out of This World  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is well written, and I wonder if you won this challenge? I found it amusing, and the descriptive writing kept my attention. I felt the emotions, and the cunning at the end. The words were well chosen, and the flow kept me reading. This is one story that I am glad that I didn't miss.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of The Neighbour  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I think that this is smooth, and the storyline kept my interest. I am glad that you used the spacing that you chose because it kept my interested. I admire your dialog skills. I sometimes find it hard to create conversations while carrying on with the storyline the way it should.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a well written story. The vision was smooth. The description kept my attention and the story line created an amusing read. I like the twist at the end, but I know that I missed something because I could not understand the KY WAS HERE. I know that I missed something. Please fill me in.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Seagulls  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a very interesting story, and I really liked how easily it flowed throughout the item. The story is so catchy, and it was told with such vision that it kept my attention. I have problems getting a full idea in few words, but this is well written and covered the whole story.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem paints a picture of somewhere that I have never been, however, it also creates a place in time that I wish I could revisit. I felt the emotion created from the night before, the sights from the balcony, and the desire of the moment in these well chosen words.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love the characters. I love stories that have names that are easy to pronounce. The events were fluent thought out the story, and the story moved from beginning to end without loosing my attention. I found that the words were well chosen. I would like to know if you plan on making this a full novel, and if you had ever heard of the NANOWRIMO,COM. It is fun.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of With One Bullet  
In affiliation with October NaNo Prep Winners Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The story was well written. The twists that you placed was really an attention grabber. However, the only problem that I found for my own stand point was that the font needed to be a little larger. It would have made it easier for us that have tired eyes or poor vision if the spacing was so that there is a blank line between paragraphs.

I truly enjoyed my read, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I like the flow of this story, and I think that I will come back to work on a chapter of my own. The choices and instructions are clear, and they catch my interest. I wonder if a person can write an entry for both inside the house and looking for clues outside the house.

I enjoyed the read and will be thinking about what I can do as an entry once I review enough material to pay for my prem membership.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I am sponsored by Michelle. I hope that I do her proud. I have to re-read this so that I can get a better understanding because I am very distracted. I am having a very hard time keeping on track, but I am so proud to get the C-note. I am happy to have found this place

Thank you for sharing this with us and doing so much for the writing.com family.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I am interested in this group. Could you tell me more about it? I am writing my Nanowrimo novel, and I am so happy to say that the October prep was wonderful. It helped me so much. I am having a rough time connecting with my writing today.

Thank you for you help here
Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderfully inspiring piece. I can tell that you seem to have it all together for the month a head. I guess that is why you are one of the cheerleaders. I love the information that you provided, and find it very helpful for my own novel.

Thank you for being involved in the October Challenge and for sharing with us.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I have been there many times. I hope that times get better, and we have to watch ourselves because sometimes somehow we attract this type of dysfunctional relationships. I am 46 with three children, and those I have fallen in love has all left me behind. Why? Because I give too much. Now I can use these experiences to help my sixteen year old son with his relationship. This is written with such emotion that I feel all of mine all over again.

Great writing.
Ida


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Review of A new path  
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I took some time taken out from doing the prompts to read some of the group members work. I have found that the members of the October NaNo Prep Challenge Group to be encouraging. I also think that we share the trails of divorce. I find that you are an inspiration to be both.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I love the story line. You have a talent for dialog, and I really enjoyed the unusual characters. I only have two suggestions. One is that I would have enjoyed this item if it were in a larger font. My eyes are tired and I have poor vision.I also would have liked it to have been in book form with the chapters as entries. There is two reasons for this. It helps you earn more gps, and breaks the reading up so that when you proof read you can do it in smaller bits.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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