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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The first suggestion that I would like to make is to create the story in a larger font. The line spacing was a God send to my eyes are I read the small print.

The story flow was great, the vocabulary was just right, and the characters were well introduced. I also love the details.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Scooby-Doo Sequel  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I love this idea. This cartoon is still a wholesome television entertainment program for kids today. I did not know how much think that this program had in it as I grew up. It was when my own children were watching it that I realized the rational thinking skills that a child has to come up with to solve the crime before those meddling kids and their dog did.

I love this idea.

Thank you for sharing this opportunity with us.
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the format. This spacing between the paragraphs creates an easier read for my eyes. I only wish that you would use a larger font. That being said, this story has a great flow and the descriptions brings the reader into the story. The characters and events were well developed.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
The title caught my attention. The story needs more formatting in this page. I would like to see it in about a 3 font, skipped lines between the paragraphs, and separation between the scene changes.

The storyline and flow were great. It was written in a manner that I felt that I was watching a television program like the "Twilight Zone".

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the art work on this page, and I respect the introduction on blogging. I have not read much of these entries. By scanning this page, I can see that the Writing.com family is an important part of your heart. I am so happy to see that love is shared throughout the site. I enjoyed what I have read of this journal. It was written without a lot of pity or over drama.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Poetry  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the few words that you have chosen to introduce your poetry work. It caught my eyes, and the quote caused me to smile. The color of the font helped it be easy to read on my tired eyes. I am planning on coming back and giving your poetry a read.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First of all, I love the color of your font. The spacing helps it to be easy on my eyes. This is a nice flowing poem, and the emotion is well written. The rhyming pattern that you chose is beautiful for the message that you are conveying. I am so glad that I found you in the newsletter.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of Alone with Lana  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I liked this story. You show real talent for the skill of dialog. I find that this is a smooth flowing storyline. The characters were well introduced, and I loved the emotions. I found no mistakes or spelling errors. I found this story in a newsletter in my email.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
First welcome to the writing.com family. I hope that you find it a great home here as I have. You are one step ahead of me in the gam. I still have problems with writing Query letters. I have never done one. I think that your item is well written, and it creates a need in me as a reader to know more.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like this this story. My son is taking a world history class. The descriptive words that you chose to use is excellent. Though this is written as fiction, it matches with the facts that he has found in his studies. The castles are interesting to learn about. He learned that they were not just a place to live.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of First Lesson  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
The title and introduction grabbed my attention. I had to know more. This is a great piece with wonderful dialog. The conversation has the story flowing smoothly. I like the way you show the newness of learning magic. This is a story that I enjoyed reading this.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
First of all I am amazed at your recognition compared to mine. You became a member of the writing.com family a year and a few days later than I did, and you are so far ahead with the numbers. Congratulations! When I read your work, I could tell that you have a true talent for writing. It was nice to see your work highlighted in the drama newsletter that I receive in my email.com.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Dedication  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I could use a little bigger font. I have such a time reviewing small type. That being said, the flow is great, and I was taken into the storyline by your well chosen and descriptive words. I found this in the Drama newsletter that I receive in the email.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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Review of The Voice  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The introduction really got my attention. I lived in Kentucky and everyone in my life has an Indian story and Indian ghost story. I just had to read this item because of the introduction.

The descriptive language that you use to tell your story brings the reader to be witness to the events of the story. I really loved the dialog skill that you have. I wish that I was gifted with dialog skills.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great piece. The item has been totally researched, and it is creatively written. I like that you entered graphics into your work. I have a very hard time adding things to my work. I see that you provided foot notes, and this is another skill that I find lacking in my bag of writing tools.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love the friendship this story show. That is my favorite part of the story. I am always telling new writers that this is a family here at writng.com. I know that this is well written, the event well told (to the point that you bring the reader into the story), and the flow is one that carries the reader effortless to the end. All this being said, I still think that the inspiration between two friends was what touched this reader's heart.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
If a person writes about business, I know that this would be a hard task. I do not know how to find inspiration in writing about business or work unless I write about some kind of physical or emotional drama. I do admire those who can write like this, but I am afraid that I am not one of them.

Thank you
Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I would like to learn more about your group. I found it in a drama newsletter that I get. I am interested in knowing more. I have always been interested in writing in this area, but I am not sure that my dialog skills are good enough to be good at this writing.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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Review of Little pleasures  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a shorty but cutie. I loved the dialog, and the signs of pure youthful friendship. The words are few, but the atmosphere is calm and fun. I could imagine the friends in the story hanging out together. This would be a fun beginning to a bigger story.

Thank you for entering and winning the Newbies only poetry contest.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am reviewing this because you are a winner of Newbies only poetry contest. This is a well written poem that brought me back to a couple times in my life. I loved the sentiment and the emotions that are so familiar to me. The poem is vivid, has a great rhyme and flow, and the writing brings the reader into the story.

That being said, I want to tell you that these people could have been me as a child. We lived across the Big Sandy River, and our transportation to the bus stop was a row boat. We crossed the waters and caught the bus to school. We lived without water, electric, and washed clothes in the river.

Then as a divorced mother of three. I lived in a condemned tailor with them. We had water, but the pluming was so that we were unable to flush the toilet.

Thank you for feeling and speaking for the less fortunate.
Ida


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Review of Angel  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great combination of story, description, and dialog. I really think that the characters are well introduced. I find that the story is one that captured my attention brought me into the story with Sarika.

This is a review because you won Newbies only poetry contest.
Ida


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Review of Telephone Lover  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Another review for a winner of the Newbies only poetry contest.

I need to make one suggestion for those of us who wear our eyes down, could you make the font a little larger?

This poem is very relatable in this day and age of technology? Either the phone or internet is where a lot of love begins.

This is a great poem with a nice rhyme and flow that captures the days ways of falling in love.

Thank you for a sweet read.
Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am reviewing this because you have won the Newbies only poetry contest.

I have a total of four teenagers, and got to say the introduction caught my attention as a mother. This is such a sweet story. The emotion was captured and the characters were well introduced. I was taken back to a memory of a Valentine Day's sun set many years ago.

Thank you for sharing this story with us.
Ida


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Review of Mom's Pancakes  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Welcome to the Writing.com family. First, I know that you cannot edit this after you have posted it, but for future poems, I would like for them to have a little bigger font. The form is excellent, and I am going to enlarge my computer screen to read and review.

I love the poem. The flow was great, and the message was clear. I love that this is such a special memory.

Thank you for sharing this with us, and I hope to find more of your work.
Ida


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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This seems like a great beginning. I might be coming back to enter soon. where did you get the idea for this story? I think that this would be something that would be able to be written into so many different directions.

Thank you for sharing this with us.
Ida
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