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Review of Dentistry  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is beautifully written. I loved the descriptive words that you chase to introduce the characters. You were able to paint the picture so that I could nearly see and smell the dark meeting rooms. I like the way you captured the personalities of the other characters and how they felt about each other.

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Ida


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Review of Stories  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is beautiful. I did stumble over it some, but I think that was caused by emotion. I really felt the words in this story told in poem fashion, cut into my heart. My own father is in a nursing home, and I have moved across country to have a life for my son's. I will miss Dad so much.

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Ida


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Review of The Promise  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am tearing up with chills running down my body. I love this story. The rhyme was good. The flow was great, and in the end the emotions ran over me like a Mac truck. The situation was told so that I felt that I was in the poem watching the events unfold.

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Ida


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Review of Syria, Seriously?  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the flow. The message is one that needs to be spread. The poem is smooth and the meaning is well written. I love that it is a rhyming poem. There isn't a lot of them left. Now days we seem to be the little boy on the playground who gets bullied, but America always gets better.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
Though this is blue and dark at the end, I can relate. The flow was smooth, and the message was one to catch my attention. I think that most of us could receit your words as our own at one time or another. I know that I could about being married "forever".

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Ida


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Review of So Glued!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this. You should send it to the Crazy Glue people. Your poem might be used in an advertisment. I love the "Cat in the Hat" feel. The flow was wonderful. The image made me smile. I have been without glue many times and wished that I had some words like to this remind me to replace.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.0)
I love fishing, and I think that you captured the event well. I loved the emotion and pride that you covered on the fisher man's behalf. The only suggestion that I could make is to make the font larger and seperate the stanz for my tired eyes.

I loved this poem and could vision the events.

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Ida


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Review of Obedience  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the format of this story. The spacing makes it an easy for my eyes. The color changes keeps ,y attention. I love t heat in the story. The way you described the events made the reader think we are there.

I am happy to have read read your story.

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Ida


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Review of Maybe, Baby!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am doing this review on my droid. I am not so good with typing on a phone. So hhere goes.

I love tis poem. Each line flows well. This is ard for me to keep a beat from line to line, and I admire your skill. The rhyme is great. I love the message, and the fun way you tell it.

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Ida


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Review of The Collapse (1)  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this story. The pain seemed real, and the picture was vividly painted with well chosen words. I loved the emotion in this story, and how you described the grief that she was feeling in such detail. This was a great read even though it almost brought the tears.

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Ida


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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I like the story, but I really want to give props for the format. It created a easy read. The seperation of ideas and the bold print was easy on my eyes. The flow was smooth, and you were finished with the read before you knew you had started. This is an enjoyable read, but the format made it easy.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great poem. The flow created a smooth read. To me, i felt that this itemwas written for everyone of us who call United States of! M.erica home. I am trying to review on a droid phone. I am so happy ro have found your poem on the random read.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This was one of the cutest stories I have read. I allowed my step-daughter to read it an hour ago, and she is still smiling. I had to read it because it was featured in the comedy newsletter here at writing.com. I did not know my grandfather, and this was a story that created a smile to more than one generation today.

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Ida


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Review of Becoming Zombie  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I love this story, and I had to laugh as I began to read the poor teacher's observations. One of my children read this story with me. We had a laugh on this hectic day.

It wasn’t as if being a Zombie hard. I think that you missed a word. It wasn’t as if being a Zombie was hard.

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Ida

P.S. I can not wait to join the class.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this poem. Though I am only a fan of one sport because of the team. I am a Kentucky Wildcat Basketball Team. I lived in Kentucky all my life before I moved to Florida. I wish that I could buy the blue and white attire, but with six children that is never going to happen. If I didn't have a family this poem could be about me.

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Ida


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Review of Calming Desire  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THe poem has a great flow. The words keep my attention, and I found the rhyme smooth. I most of all love the message. There are too many people old and young that are taken advantage of, but it is hard to judge a whole world by the actions of a few. There is a need to learn to judge those little red flags that we ignore so that we can help others.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. I like the story line, and find a little information on the decade that I nearly missed. The details are well stated. I like the way you introduced the characters. And the flow of the story kept my attention. The dialog and vocabulary is believable making this a great story.

The only suggestion is maybe making the font a little larger for poor vision.

Welcome to the writing.com family.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a well written story. The descriptions that you used are such that I can see the events unfold. I am happy that you have joined the writing.com family. I only have a couple suggestions about the format of this item. Being that some of us have poor vision, a larger font and separation between paragraphs would make it easier to read.

You have a great grasp on dialog. I struggle with this skill often.

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Ida


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Review of Crystal Lake  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like the emotion in this item. The relationship of family was touching. The flow of the story was smooth, and the descriptions were excellent. I did not ever think of having snow in my mouth and using it to disquise the heat from my breath. I really enjoyed the read.

Welcome to the Writing.com family.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (3.5)
First welcome to the writing.com family. I am sure that you find it the support that I have here. I truly enjoyed this poem. It was smooth, and I have to read anything about dragons.I really thing that this could be longer.

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Ida


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Review of Eternal War  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love this poem. The flow is smooth and the message is one that could not be more true. I have to read and review at the library because of my computer, but this one was a pleasure to read. This describes the conflict that we have due to descions that we make.

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Ida


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Review of Zee Blog  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting item. I really think that I will be back to read more. We have the King of Hearts 2 for the Xbox 360. I really don't know much about any games except Harvest Moon and Bejeweled. My children love the game. Three girls love the war games as much as my two sons.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a wonderfully written story. The flow is smooth and carries the reader effortlessly through the story line. The descriptive way that you bring the reader into the events as though we are in the words themselves. The only thing that would make it a better read for me is a larger font and seperations between paragraphs.

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Ida


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Review of Yeah I'm free  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a well written poem that allows others to see where we all need to be in one form or another. I like the flow. It carries the reader through the piece with ease.

The only thing that I really would have liked that would have created a more comfrontable read is more seperation and larger font. My eyes give me problems at time.

By the way, welcome to the writing.com camily. I hope that you find everyone as helpful as I always have.

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Ida


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Review of The beard  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem. the rhyme and flow kept my attention, and the simple message of thinking such a small decision was truly up lifting. I have so many things going on in my life that a little laugh is more than welcomed.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

Also welcome to the writing.com family.

Ida


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