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Review of The beard  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I loved this poem. the rhyme and flow kept my attention, and the simple message of thinking such a small decision was truly up lifting. I have so many things going on in my life that a little laugh is more than welcomed.

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Also welcome to the writing.com family.

Ida


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Rated: E | (4.5)
I have saved this as a shortcut on the desk top. This seems to be a great opportunity for writers. This prompt, however, is one that proves difficult for me. I find it hard to combine politics into my writing. I do enjoy the fact that there is different prompts and the challenges change.

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Ida
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Being that I have six children five of them are teenagers, I really got excited when I read this. I know that I love that they like to write stories and draw. I am so happy to see a place where they can get feed back that will encourage them to persue their writing. I am adding this to my favorites.

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Ida (mom)
Charity (19)
Christian (18)
Allison (17)
Victoria (14)
Noah (15)
Kaitlyn (10)


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Review of Allison's Story  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First I would like to welcome you to the writing.com family.

I liked the dialog in this story. I have a probablem trying to get my conversations to carry smoothly with the events in the story. You have done this effortlessly it seems. I really think that, though most of the characters are introduced my the dialog, they are well developed.

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Ida


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Review of There  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this story. I think that when you finish the book that you are working on, I would like to see this in a larger form. The characters were well developed and introduced. I think that one of my favorite parts of the story was the description of the wind. I love the wind in my hair.

Thank you again for a great read.
Ida


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Review of The Storm  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The message and story here is one that brings the reader into the events of the storm. I really found it to be a great read, and the way the storms have hit all over the United States lately, this gives voice to those who don't know how to explain the event.

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Ida


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Review of Gone  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a well written poem. I really like the way that you describe the events. I found myself cought up in the message in those words. I find my own life in the verses, and I can see that they seem to shadow some of my own feelings. I truly enjoyed this poem.

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Ida


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Review of Something Spicy  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is cute. My son had a simular event when he was cutting up hot peppers. Though it was not the burning at that end he rubbed the juices into his eyes. I expect that to happen to him one day due to the fact that he love everything hot.

This was a good laugh.

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Ida


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In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This seems like a fun activity. I have not created but one or two chapters for a couple of these stories. I am happy to see that this is not about shrinking. I like that it is one that can be taken into the dream world.

I will try to come back and try my luck.

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Ida
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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This idea sounds so cute. Tonight I have been reviewing interactive stories so that I can create one, see how to make it sucessful, and enter them. This is one of the best that I have read. I do have a question however, why are most of these about shrinking or growing?

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Ida
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Review of Bbw gets revenge  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Though I do not see me able to take my imagination in this direction easily, but this is something that is so much fun. I am really intreged that this is about slap stick torture in the story. I do think that I will come back and give it a try after watching a few episodes of Family Guy for inspiration.

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Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I like this story. It is one that most of us as girls growing up in a society that treasures the woman's body. I was blessed being the oldest, and the biggest in that department. Boy did it look good on me before I gained weight. Now every thing matches oh too well.

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Ida
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Review of Bloomsday  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I love the idea of this story. I have gotten into reviewing these interactive stories today. I have written a couple of chapters. ONe was about shrinking an ex wife as revenge. Is there a theme or something about shrinking.

I plan to be back and add an entry soon.

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Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is such a funny story. I really can understand the misunderstanding of a dianosis. As you can tell from my spelling skills that this is not a area that I am a stranger to. I think that this is a story that is well written and makes me smile. The characters and the conversations are realistic.

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Ida


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In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is well written. The only suggestion that I would like to offer is to have your font a little larger and place a line between the paragraphs. This weill create an easier read for those of us who have bad sight.

The story line and character is well developed.

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Ida


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Review of Follow Your Nose  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know this feeling. These words could be written by my fifteen year old son. He wants a dog so bad, but we live where we are unable. This is an attractive poem. The lines are fluent, and the message makes me smile. I can feel the emotions that man always has for his best friend even if he is wishing for him.

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Ida


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Review of Winter Blessings  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
I like this piece. The story did indeed follow the prompts, and it was full of emotions. I like the way you seem to have researched the name for the child. The dialog flows well, and the format of the page is easy to read. The only thing that I need for it to be complete in my mind is time erea. I mean it speaks of wells, getting permission to keep the child, in-laws having such power, and phones. I am just wondering.

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Ida


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Review of Uppity  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
THis was so cute. It reminds me of an episode of twilight zone. I really love those shows. This is a very descriptive and vivid story. I think that this can be turned into a longer version. Great read.
I loved the ending, I was surprised that the author was an android.

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Ida


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Review of Lost Poem  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I know exactly how you feel. I had created a typed book of poetry of poems written from seventeen to thirty six. It covered falling in love with my exhusband, our marriage, the births of our three children, my longing for intamacy, and divorce. I lost all of them. I so wished that I had some how had a back up.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a story that strays from the normal.It is match making to the extreeme. I like the conversations with Helen. I loved the scarcasim about the name for the (future) children. This story brought a smile to my face. I really enjoyed this. I will always think about this story and A Seventy when I see a toaster.

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Ida


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the flow and rhyme of this poem. However, I love the message that it carries. I hope that my little family remains close and united with love. I have my two sons living with me, but my daughter lives in another Kentucky. I also love the way that you combine nature as a way to describe the emotion of love.

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Ida


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Review of The giant man  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is deffinatly an interesting way to go with this story. I really thinkt hat this is a wonderful story, but I normally don't have a mind that thinks about those measurments "if you know what I mean", but fifteen inches long and the circumfronce is all most half. That would be interesting.

IN the words of the gossips, "no other man would be able to touch the sides."

Please forgive my candure.

I will be back to see how others take this story.

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Ida
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In affiliation with Blogging Circle of Friends  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
My sons would love to write stories about swords and such. I may even give it a try. This is a wonderfull idea, and I will be back to see how others follow the prompts or paths. I have not really written from this type of story, but I think that after reading here a while I may just enter.

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Ida
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In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is well written. I love the story line. The character and the events were amazing. The only problems that I found were minor such as Texas needs to begin with a cap letter. Also this is a statement that I stumbled with: "I can't do your taxes." It leaves me wondering what about Texas.

I really admire the fact that you were able to tell the story in the first person point of view.

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Ida


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I adore this idea. I loved pregnant. It was the happiest time in my life. NOw I can not have children, but I am planning to come back and get pregnant with the flip of the coin. I am impressed with the imagination that you have in creating this story line.

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Ida
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