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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Apparently our character has tried over and over again to win.
Well, we all know there are always winners and losers.
There is discouragement felt in the piece.
Like why try again, it will just be the same.
With a grumble in the heart and a negative attitude present, one might just let this competition go.

Thank you for sharing and keeping it real.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Wouldn't it be great to look back on your life and feel like you did pretty darn good.
We have a lady here who feels like the choices she has made have led her down the right path.

There appears to be no regret in the piece.
A bit of contentment is felt as well.
She might even feel confident enough to help others on their journey of life.
Maybe helping those who doubt their capabilities.
A positive person to teach others to be positive.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of The Zombie Diner  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


An strange ad lured a man to a place of no return.
The people that ran the joint made no 'bones' about the content of the food.
To even investigate must make a person wonder. Why in this world or cosmos would a temptation lead him there.
Needless to say, the ending wasn't good for our Curious Hunter.
He does hold a special ranking on the menu though.

Well, you did it again. Totally good poetry but yucky ucky barfy barfy.

Thank you for sharing YOURSELF COMPLETELY.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What can you say to your mom after all those years of love and caring?

Here we have a tribute and a heartfelt thank you from a daughter to her mom.
The daughter knows it has been hard but her mom did the best she could.
Always standing by her side through the good and bad.
Being a parent isn't easy but it is sure worth it when your child says something to make you feel like you did your best and then some.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A simple review has a reviewer feeling like she has been run over by a freight train.
All you can do is tell what you got from the piece. Some reviewers find errors and structural problems. Giving advice only to help others.

I have been on here for a few years and have had several people tell me my reviews are worthless and mere fluff. You know what, if I feel an emotion, I express that.

Besides think of your average reader. Do they sit down and dissect the book or do they find themselves inside the happenings in the book.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a woman with a problem.
The royal throne isn't serving her well.
While some people might use this as a meditation structure, others might use it to read a newspaper.

Our lady uses it to pray. To seek relief from a situation she doesn't like and certainly needs help with.
Eventually her prayers are answered turning her into one happy camper.

This was funny and lighthearted.
Thank you for sharing.



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Review of The Pit  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.

Our author brings us a piece about depression and despair.

The character finds himself falling into the pit of despair. The darkness surrounds him but far above he sees a small beam of light.
All he has to do is reach for it as if he were reaching for a life line.
Actually, he is doing just that.
He musters up courage he didn't think he had and hope he felt was lost and began pulling himself up rung by rung.

It's a tough climb but the light is getting closer. He feels more like himself now.
He is under no illusion that there might be another time he falls again.
Next time, however, he will know he can make it through.

Struggling with depression and despair can change ones outlook of life itself.
Our character is a fighter though. He fights for his life and wins.

Thank you for sharing this inspirational piece.




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Review of The Empty Box  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is strong even though she has been through a lot of disappointment. Two engagements, both by the same person, fell through.
She realizes how people change and even say things they don't mean. Sometimes people just want to be loved but when commitment comes into the setting they run away.

So an empty box is now a reminder of how change just might have turned out to be the best thing ever for her.
She holds no bad feelings for the lover even though betrayal is hurtful.
It is better she found out before taking vows than after.
Better not to invested a lot of time in a mere illusion with no foundation of truth.

Thank you for sharing.
Thank you also for showing others how they can accept this type of pain in a negative way or a positive way.
Moving on, being free from damaging chains that bind.




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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have our poor bull on an ordinary errand for his human. Off to the post office wearing a fashionable man purse. Plenty of room and lovely colors, any bull would catch anyone's eye.

The post office line is long. Finally at the counter comes the most ridiculous thing our government has done yet.
Who ever the post master general was at the time must have been a bit under the weather or had a bit too much to dr-nk.

We have all heard of the about the rule of SUPPLY AND DEMAND. Well this got thrown out the window while the printing was going on.

Thank you for this delightful piece.
It is funny to think brains like that are in charge.




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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Remember those old Star Trek shows? I remember to never miss one. Watching the TV Guide to stay up to date.
Well, here we have a bull who dreams of being at the helm of the ENTERPRISE.
There seems to be a bit of doubt as to whether the crew would follow a bull into uncharted territory.
What strikes me as really funny is how this brave bull, willing to travel the cosmos, is afraid of a Cling-on or two.

Thank you for the laugh and for sharing.



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Review of Sweaters  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever given a gift to someone you love and have it filled with sentimental value. Then they don't seem to get it.
That hurts inside.
As this piece suggest, a heartfelt gift was given and it ends up thoughtlessly on the closet floor.

One might draw a different conclusion. Does the love they share mean anything or is it being tossed about.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He sat there looking at what he had done. Everyone there felt they couldn't stand to look at him. There minds were on her and her life.
She tried to make him listen but you can't reason with a person when they are drunk.
So now, he feels anger against God and himself.
He will pay for his bad decision. Of all times in his life; why couldn't he listen to her?

Things shouldn't have been this way.
The author reminds us of the horror that drinking can bring. It's not a joke. It just takes ones mistake and lives change and sometimes are taken.

Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for putting this topic in such a real feeling piece.
Hopefully others will think twice before getting behind the wheel.




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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It only takes a minute and life changes forever. Here we find a parent turning away, for just a minute, while the toddle is near the water.
Looking back, the horrible realization hits the parent.
That moment can't be taken back or changed.
Another child lost and it happens so quickly.

Thank you for sharing the sad piece.
I only hope it is merely a story and not real.



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Review of Fear Comes Home  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He is coming and she knows it. Seeing him out the window,she has no alternative except to answer the door. She begins to feel a sense of dread and knows that this day will,more than likely, be like the rest.

It doesn't take much for him to explode into anger. All directed at her. This time it's the unwashed dishes. What will it be next time?
To many times this happens and unfortunately one time might be the last for her.

She can't leave from fear. She can stay from fear. She may loose her life because of his abuse.

Thank you for sharing.
Good job getting inside this emotional roller coaster and helping others know that they aren't the only ones living in the h-ll.




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Review of Sunrise  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Some people like to watch their lover sleep.
It's dawn and as the lover wakes the sun shines in their sleepy eyes. So precious and serene.

There are whispers like 'good morning, I love you'. Maybe the early morning breeze moves the curtains and carries those words around the room.

Then the smile that greets you when there is still a bit of starlight in the darkened room.

Then comes the kiss and the fire of passion awakes in both of you.

This is pretty.
It is the kind of piece that allows the readers mind to wander and maybe be a bit envious.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes when you love someone, you just have to put it in words.
This is a lovely piece and romantic.
A man has given to his love all that he can possibly give. Those things only he can offer. His heart, soul and body.
Then he goes on to say he would, if he could, give her every element of beauty one could imagine.
He would give the earth, sky, ocean and most of all the moon above.
Isn't that pretty?
To love someone that much.
Feeling that what he has isn't quite good enough and would give the moon if it were his to give.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a very interesting piece. We have a creative person who not only writes but attempts another medium. Drawing and expressing inner thoughts.

Using every available space to create these drawings to me shows a realization of conservation.

The fact that so many eyes are the topic of many of the drawings, leads me to believe that being aware of the immediate surroundings is a need.

There are also creative designs, shapes etc.
These to me represent the desire to change things within the environment.

Just my personal thoughts.

Interesting indeed.
Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Always  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author uses the word always to make us ponder a bit this afternoon.

At first our character accepts responsibility for negative feelings and events.

Then the character finds another way to deal by blaming others for the misfortunes. After all, one person couldn't start a war.

Then it becomes easy to accept no responsibility which leaves nothing but loneliness.

So after being negative, without fault and then terribly lonely; there is a sudden change of heart.

Could it just be that our character might have been wrong from the get-go?

Finally recognizing the truth, finding love is the answer and prayer is the path and 'ALWAYS' is the way to go.

Thank you for sharing.
Interesting piece indeed.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes relationships don't work out.
Love is a gamble and there are winners and losers.
Now, as our author shares thoughts on the end, we have some choices to make.
We might cry and not understand.
We might long for things to go back as before.
We might be glad it's over and look to the future.
The main point of the piece is not to give up on love. Don't shut your heart away out of fear of more hurt.
Most of all don't give up on hope. Think to yourself there will be someone out there to love me.

I like the way this was written.
The imagery of the opening and closing of doors.
Don't build yourself an environment without doors where you are closed off.
In that lonely place could you see the scared night or the blessed day with limitless possibilities?

Thank you for sharing.



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Review of Ancient Majesty  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a piece about the Sphinx.
Is it standing guard in all it's majesty?
Does it strike visitors by it's size?
What of those that built this gigantic testament to human accomplishment?

The people would worship it for a good harvest.
It is indeed a majestic structure that commands respect by it's longevity and presence.
What if the fact that it is part man and part lion implies that man and beast must coexist.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our character has spent a pretty average summer until now.
The raspberry jam smell penetrated to the heart.
She would be there but finding a way to see her might be a challenge.
Kids are resourceful.
An old crate strategically placed would bring about a victory.

Countless hours pass and our character is one 'happy camper'.

Thank you for sharing.
Makes me hungry for raspberry jam and peanut butter.




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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author remind us how there are seasons in our life.
We go along at a fast pace; as the piece suggests. Taking on every twist and turn and never tiring.
We have a family and with it, the love to make us go on.

Then comes the winter of our life. No matter how positive we try to be; the winter is cold and reminds us how short our time is.
We keep going because we are still loved. We still take the turns, maybe a bit slower, but we do anyway. We can't fight this season but we can make the best of it.

Thank you for sharing.
Like you imagery.



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Review of Bully  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Unfortunately this world has bullies.
They usually want to pick on someone that isn't perfect and have flaws.
In this case we have a beautiful person still being picked at.
Instead of it being a case of the bully thinking that they are better, they are jealous.

Just be yourself. Forget those flapping jaws.
Their words mean nothing and are only destructive garbage.
Those hurtful words should be put out along the curb on trash day.

Thank you for sharing.

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Review of A Simple Plan  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a creepy piece about fear.
The character is afraid of the unknown noise coming from the other side. Turning off the lights and hiding under the covers; isn't helping.
Finally a plan; get up and go look.
Will he actually do that or will he let fear keep him hostage.

Sometimes when we are in our homes and all alone; we might hear a sound that makes us uneasy.
We might just hope it goes away.
But what if the noise kept going on and on?
Then what?

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Wondering  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author offers us a piece about the complexities of life.
We hear different theories; should we believe in those words simply written from the human mind?
Do we wonder about the validity of such words?

Then we wonder about our choices and whether we make the right ones. Will our choices to stay steadfast result in our down fall or rising above all else?

Each day we wonder and question things we see.
Are they reality or wishful thinking.
Could they be a dream or hope.

If everything was certain; think how boring life would be. Would we be able to create goals for ourselves or would the zest for life be gone?

Interesting piece indeed.
Thank you for sharing.



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