I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.
What a treat, indeed, to come across this piece at the end of the evening.
We know how people like to think that women are softies.
Well, this family, has two spit-fires in it.
Not afraid to take on robbers.
They just don't scream they take after them with something that will make believers of them.
Perhaps they, the robbers,will think twice before making such a stupid move.
The young woman telling us about the incidents probably can handle her own as well.
When those woman get really in a hissy fit.
They will find a way to make you great the sidewalk.
Thank you for sharing.