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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a treat, indeed, to come across this piece at the end of the evening.

We know how people like to think that women are softies.

Well, this family, has two spit-fires in it.
Not afraid to take on robbers.

They just don't scream they take after them with something that will make believers of them.

Perhaps they, the robbers,will think twice before making such a stupid move.

The young woman telling us about the incidents probably can handle her own as well.

When those woman get really in a hissy fit.
They will find a way to make you great the sidewalk.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is good. This piece hits hard and to the point.
So many of us are going by with binders on .

Some think someone else will solve the problem.
We are becoming mindless puppets without voices.

Somewhere along the way, we stopped feeling we had a voice or that they would listen to it.

Then what about our children. What kind of parent are we to leave this mess for them.

What happened to our protective side to make sure they survive.

I would say right now a chimp might do a better job being Mary Poppins. At least she would make this

horrible medicine go down and give them the illusion they would be alright.

Thank you for sharing and caring.
Yellow
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Review of Anniversary  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here it is anniversary time and all those doubters have to eat a bit of crow.

They started out a new life together with many telling them they were wrong.

Well, who walking on the wrong side of the street now.

Granted some people do mean well but when the heart knows what it wants, nothing else matter.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of RESIDUE  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece love doesn't run smoothly.
The couple breaks up long ago but there is so much of it still around.

She sits with a white bible for comfort.

She has a faded rose to remember the passion.

A tarnished ring that doesn't glisten with love any longer.

She thinks and tries to remember what tore them apart but all she feels is a broken heart.

Thank you for this lovely piece and for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Scream  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this old house there is a lonely man dwelling.
He hears sounds that frighten him .
This one night he tries to locate it and becomes more unnerved.
Finally he looks in his own room.
There in the mirror is his image screaming at him.
So he picks up the chair and breaks the mirror.
He knows now he has lost his mind completely.
His mind is gone, his soul is trapped in the broken mirror.
Is he a ghost caught in his own repetitive hell?

thank you for sharing


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



We have a man here with problems, big problems.
He is locked up in the place with the wrap around suits.
They have sedated him and off he goes to dreamland.

The only thing about dreamland it isn't pleasant. He finds his mind back to the events of the horrible evening.

There is just one problem; he can't remember why he did such a horrible thing.

Thank you for sharing.
Good twist

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our character turns to the Lord to help him give up a bad habit that is not good for his body.
Some use chemicals but he uses fasting and faith.
After all, who has more strength to share with a person than our Lord.
We come to Him because we know He is the only one strong enough to strengthen us.

As it turned out our character is free from the poison and living a better life.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Whispers of Love  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is tender and romantic.
Two people find this special night to be filled with magic.
Love is certainly in the air and our couple seemed to be wrapped in it.

The celebration that is the beginning of their life together has finally arrived.

Could there be a more amazing and blessed union than this.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is priceless.
Caught me completely by surprise. It snuck up on me.
Catchy and funny and well done.

Keep putting out those funny ones.
Welcome to the site.
Thank you for sharing a laugh or two.

Keep up the good work.


Yellow
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Review of What Love Is This  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two fall in love and become one.
She is captive to his charms and he is captive as she surrenders her heart to him.

They live together in loving bliss and security in that love.

I like this part:
Their love does travel over hill and dale
Far reaching it does beguile, though not stray.

Thank you for sharing a bit of hope for eternal love to others as in the highlighted part.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


There is sits. The house that holds evil. Just waiting for the next person to come along and not listen to their good judgment.

Tempted by a certain glow. Innocence needs to stay away from them.

Remember there is a constant fight between evil and good. If evil wins you over there is a place below for you.

So listen to legends and keep your life and soul intact; for once you have let down your guard there is no turning back.

Thank you for sharing.
The picture helped with the creepiness.


Yellow
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Review of You and Me  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Read through this a couple of times and think how lucky this lady is.
She found someone who accepts her for the way she is.
There hasn't been any attempt to 'fix' her.
Apparently the one that loves her figures she doesn't need to be fixed.

Hold on tight to this diamond gem.
They are few and far between.

Thank the Good Lord above for sending you an person with unconditional love.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Don't punish us teacher because we are young.
You were young once and did silly things.
It's just part of growing up to make mistakes and get in trouble so don't scold us teacher as we run,laugh as we do.
Childhood is a gift and doesn't last too long.
So please remember you were like us.
It is our time now.

Thank you for sharing you piece with us.


Yellow
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Review of Hard to Handle  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She loved him even when is was an a--.
He hurt her and didn't care because she was his money making property.

Sweet talking, he was, filthy minded he was.
He knew she would put up with anything given by him or she would live to regret it.

She catches the cheater in their own home. Once a cheater always a cheater. Right?

Well this time he is a big looser.
He bought her Tiffany jewelry; like that would make everything right.ha

Well, she did her part in this story to create a good and much needed ending.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of As it Ends  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A uplifting piece full of optimism comes our way today.
From the first breath to your last make all the days of your life matter and count for something.
Touch lives, show love, spread positivity as far as it can go. Think of it as the yellow horizon just waiting to take you farther and farther than ever before.

Nothing to stop you.

Dr. Seuss : ‘Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened.’,

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a wonderful uplifting piece to help others understand Him and how He loves us.

You said in the beginning you hoped this would reach other people with a message and obviously it has.

We must sew those seeds of faith to those that are drawn in a different direction as you have done here.

Pointing out how much He loves us and the sacrifices He made for us will linger in their hearts forever.

Thank you for this piece and thank you for your unselfish love for mankind.


Yellow
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Review of If...Only  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a subtle yet very important message this evening.

The world/nature does go by a rule book.
Things happen that are beautiful and even unexpected.

For instance flowers only grow in the daylight.
We know that's not true. There are night blooming beauties for our eyes to see.

So don't put nature and life into a category with tight standards.

Who is in charge?
Any time you begin to think you have it all figured out; there will be a surprise just around the bend.
Embrace this blessing called life.
Make the most of it.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Against Cheating  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The title is cheating.
This is a different kind of cheating.
Cheating at the game of life.
Cheating at the game of achieving honorable goals.
Cheating by knocking others out of the way as you climb that ladder of success.
Society is shallow as they praise the winner.
When you die will they remember or will they be glad you are out of the way and making room for the next dishonest scuzzball standing in line to make the climb?

Be honest.
Like what you see in the mirror.
Thank your luck stars that the Good Lord Saw fit to give you a shot. Be thankful and grateful.




Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Sometimes love is hard to understand. A person will think to themselves, it shouldn't be this hard or painful.

So much time invested and yet the pieces keep falling apart. The love is getting less and less and the hurt is becoming more and more.

Our character is finally doing some positive self talk.
Understanding that making some decisions must be made for the better of all concerned.
She decided to let things go and move on. She now realizes that was the best thing she could have done.

Thank you for sharing. Hoping this will help others in the complex WHICH-WAY-DO-I-GO? situation.




Yellow
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Review of STORM WARNING  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us that there will be storms of life and we must accept that fact.
We can watch them come and go but we must remember God is in charge.

Do not fear for God is there.
He is in control of our lives and those around us.

No matter the wind, the dark water, the hard rain, the absence of birds; his arms will comfort us.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of I Hope You Knew  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


When we love someone we have to tell them sometimes. Actions do speak louder than words. What if you are separated for a short term and words must step up to the plate.

So many days pass.
So many long nights but yet the reassuring words keep you two together.

All I can say is love is the most important thing in a person life so ----SAY IT, SING IT, DREAM IT, WRITE IT, KEEP IT FRESH AND ALIVE IN THEIR HEARTS.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of Miss Henrietta  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



She was lonely and had been for a long time. She did things to help others as was told in the bible.
Her church visits were regular and always in the same seat.
To offer help to others came as second nature to her.
Finally one day she decided to help a complete stranger from the street.
She prepared him dinner in her pretty home.
She had lovely flowers along the way to her door.
This man was not a nice man and would wait for the opportunity to hurt her.

The tables suddenly became turned.
She had the desire to have him live in an upright stature.
Using a trestle with a circle clamp to hold her latest acquisition in place made things work out just fine.

She secured his presence and he was never ever late for dinner.
Good job with the creepy thing.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man with so much love to give has lost his love. He knows he needs to find the right words to bring her back.

He writes and uses poems to tell of his love for her. He even mails them but gets no response.
Time is passing but yet he continues to pursue his writing and method of trying to melt her cold heart.

It's funny though. Love doesn't just turn of like a light switch.
Some pine for another the rest of their lives.
As in this piece. This man won't give up on love or her.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of On the Sidelines  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever been waiting for your turn to shine.
In this piece we find our character doing just that.
Thoughts have ruled the day for so long.
Anxiety pushing to the limit.
Knowing it will come as it did in your dream.

Then they call you to the stage of life where you can shine.
Boy did you show them what you were made off and more.
Might even give them something to talk about for months after.
Just one-shot.
Good job.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Success comes in all different boxes. Which box will you choose to represent your life?

A box of money will give you power but little else.

Choosing the box of ethics that you know aren't really ethical, will help you weasel around what is right.

So you are famous with recognition for all you have done, will they remember your good points when you are gone.

Now, the final box. The box that separates a moral man from a selfish, big headed jerk.

It matters what you do, how you do it, how you help others as to whether the tears will be real at the funeral and your memory will be rich in their hearts.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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