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Review of Patience  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings a way of looking at time.
There are some times that times seems to drag by. Even beginning to irritate a person.

Then there are times when time moves quickly, not really allowing enough for us to finish our project.

The most important part is use the time wisely and even be thankful for it.
Some have many many minutes on their side and others only a few.

Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review of Walking In A Haze  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


They were friends, good friends.
Then suddenly things changed.
It doesn't give the reader the reason for their
bridge between them.

Our character refuses to give up on the friend.
Still looking and hoping thing will get better.

There is reference to walking in a haze. Could it be the haze is an implication that the friend might be messing with those that might be doing harm?

When we have a friend down and mixed up with bad people; it's not the time to let them go.
A real friend would keep trying or at least keep an eye on the friend to make sure the friend doesn't get hurt.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This might have been written by a younger person.
Catching a moonbeam in her hand was the highlight of the evening.
Watching it move about at will and then disappeared.

To believe in the impossible is part of being a kid.
Feeling as low they can do those impossible things is just what makes them tick.
It really doesn't really matter whether anyone believes or not. All the counts is the feeling in her heart.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Off-White Pearls  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was dealing with the realization that their love was not quite right.

He has stopped spending time with her as before.
He never had much to say as well.

She cries to him about her missing feelings of being loved.

Her husband is beginning to see her pain as he slams the door.

She needs love.
This night she pulled out all the stops.
She met him with nothing but a lovely necklace.
She apparently lost her sparkle as the pearls did.

In his mind he has a COLD thought. All things must end.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a treat, indeed, to come across this piece at the end of the evening.

We know how people like to think that women are softies.

Well, this family, has two spit-fires in it.
Not afraid to take on robbers.

They just don't scream they take after them with something that will make believers of them.

Perhaps they, the robbers,will think twice before making such a stupid move.

The young woman telling us about the incidents probably can handle her own as well.

When those woman get really in a hissy fit.
They will find a way to make you great the sidewalk.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is good. This piece hits hard and to the point.
So many of us are going by with binders on .

Some think someone else will solve the problem.
We are becoming mindless puppets without voices.

Somewhere along the way, we stopped feeling we had a voice or that they would listen to it.

Then what about our children. What kind of parent are we to leave this mess for them.

What happened to our protective side to make sure they survive.

I would say right now a chimp might do a better job being Mary Poppins. At least she would make this

horrible medicine go down and give them the illusion they would be alright.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*



I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This was a dark time in our country when Dr. King was trying to spread the light.
Listening to him would bring hope to those who felt lost.
A simple man with eyes that allowed one to see to his soul.
A good man who loved his country, children and his Lord.
Who better to be sent by the Lord to spread the light??????

Thank you for sharing and helping to keep his memory alive.


Yellow
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Review of Anniversary  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here it is anniversary time and all those doubters have to eat a bit of crow.

They started out a new life together with many telling them they were wrong.

Well, who walking on the wrong side of the street now.

Granted some people do mean well but when the heart knows what it wants, nothing else matter.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of RESIDUE  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece love doesn't run smoothly.
The couple breaks up long ago but there is so much of it still around.

She sits with a white bible for comfort.

She has a faded rose to remember the passion.

A tarnished ring that doesn't glisten with love any longer.

She thinks and tries to remember what tore them apart but all she feels is a broken heart.

Thank you for this lovely piece and for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Today's Weather  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*CakeB* HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews*CakeP*


I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece could, indeed, be about the weather.
It also could be about the world situation.

Suppose the storm is slowly building. The wind is cold and blows against anything trying to withstand it.

Suppose the world is on the brink of war and the warring parties are shaking their fist and breaking agreements long made.

Soon, there is stillness, a frightening stillness.
The wind no longer blows.

The partings no longer talk.
Certain within the silence waits a 'he-l unknown.

Just like a tornado that passes through leaving destruction in it's wake.

So do the dogs of war leave footprints that they have been here again.

When will it stop?
When will the cloud leave?
When will we have a better tomorrow?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of The Scream  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this old house there is a lonely man dwelling.
He hears sounds that frighten him .
This one night he tries to locate it and becomes more unnerved.
Finally he looks in his own room.
There in the mirror is his image screaming at him.
So he picks up the chair and breaks the mirror.
He knows now he has lost his mind completely.
His mind is gone, his soul is trapped in the broken mirror.
Is he a ghost caught in his own repetitive hell?

thank you for sharing


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



We have a man here with problems, big problems.
He is locked up in the place with the wrap around suits.
They have sedated him and off he goes to dreamland.

The only thing about dreamland it isn't pleasant. He finds his mind back to the events of the horrible evening.

There is just one problem; he can't remember why he did such a horrible thing.

Thank you for sharing.
Good twist

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our character turns to the Lord to help him give up a bad habit that is not good for his body.
Some use chemicals but he uses fasting and faith.
After all, who has more strength to share with a person than our Lord.
We come to Him because we know He is the only one strong enough to strengthen us.

As it turned out our character is free from the poison and living a better life.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Whispers of Love  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is tender and romantic.
Two people find this special night to be filled with magic.
Love is certainly in the air and our couple seemed to be wrapped in it.

The celebration that is the beginning of their life together has finally arrived.

Could there be a more amazing and blessed union than this.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is priceless.
Caught me completely by surprise. It snuck up on me.
Catchy and funny and well done.

Keep putting out those funny ones.
Welcome to the site.
Thank you for sharing a laugh or two.

Keep up the good work.


Yellow
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Review of What Love Is This  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Two fall in love and become one.
She is captive to his charms and he is captive as she surrenders her heart to him.

They live together in loving bliss and security in that love.

I like this part:
Their love does travel over hill and dale
Far reaching it does beguile, though not stray.


Thank you for sharing a bit of hope for eternal love to others as in the highlighted part.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


There is sits. The house that holds evil. Just waiting for the next person to come along and not listen to their good judgment.

Tempted by a certain glow. Innocence needs to stay away from them.

Remember there is a constant fight between evil and good. If evil wins you over there is a place below for you.

So listen to legends and keep your life and soul intact; for once you have let down your guard there is no turning back.

Thank you for sharing.
The picture helped with the creepiness.


Yellow
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Review of RAINBOWS  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author used some very expressive and powerful words to describe a rainbow.

I have always been fascinated by them.
They seem to hang there in mid air.
So fragile yet so determined to make a statement about the Higher Power up there who is in charge.

When you see one make a mental image of such beauty.
They are rare but have meaning for us to remember.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of You and Me  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Read through this a couple of times and think how lucky this lady is.
She found someone who accepts her for the way she is.
There hasn't been any attempt to 'fix' her.
Apparently the one that loves her figures she doesn't need to be fixed.

Hold on tight to this diamond gem.
They are few and far between.

Thank the Good Lord above for sending you an person with unconditional love.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A man expresses the thought that Jesus must be getting tired of listening to him all the time.
On the contrary, He wants us to commune with Him for the more we look and seek him the closer we become.

Don't think a mistake will turn Him from us.
Most of all as you pray, keep Jesus in you heart even on those good days.

So the foot of your bed is a church and a perfect place to tell him how much you love, need, thankful, blessed and for not giving up on this simple man.

Thank you for sharing and caring.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Don't punish us teacher because we are young.
You were young once and did silly things.
It's just part of growing up to make mistakes and get in trouble so don't scold us teacher as we run,laugh as we do.
Childhood is a gift and doesn't last too long.
So please remember you were like us.
It is our time now.

Thank you for sharing you piece with us.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author tries to explain how deeply writing can become part of our lives.

We might compare it to a painter. You know the painter will go back and forth to his latest work to perfect it. Sound familiar?

Perhaps we could look at a photographer.
Think how many time they think they have found just he right picture to show the beauty he sees. Does he give up? No way.

So when you wonder if you are really a writer think about this piece.
Think if you could walk away from it, or is it part of you?


Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of First Crush  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Believe it or not, they found each other over the internet.

They had both gone to church camp when young and had a crush.

He was married now and couldn't and wouldn't pursue the relationship.

God moves in mysterious ways as they say.
They found each other when she was in need of a faithful friend to lean on.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of Penniless  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Well, a person can act like they are 'all that' for just so long before the façade begins to form a gooey mess on the ground.

Putting on airs, when you don't have a pot to 'pi--in' or 'a window to through it out' won't bring you relief.

First person you got to be straight with is yourself. Admit you need to work harder and not keep playing make believe.

What about your family, if you have one?
Are they suffering from your lack of 'BEING A MAN'?




Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The country had signs of war everywhere. The ground was red with blood.
Each had a noble cause but they were fighting brother against brother.

Eventually things and feelings healed with good leadership that cared.

You did a really good job with this short time limit for the piece.

Hats off to the author.




Yellow
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