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Review of It's Over  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We all know how relationships can be off and on for years. They get mad, then make up again until the next fight.
Well, we find our character taking that difficult step of cutting the ties that bind.
No more playing Ping-Pong with the heart.
Starting fresh is on the agenda.
It takes conviction and determination. Most of all courage to break loose from those things that drag you down.
There must be a better life around the bend.
Keep going toward the sunshine and let it be your guide. Leave the darkness behind.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of One Little Toad  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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This is a cute basis for a children's book.
It helps them learn about numbers and creatures.
I like the part about the little mice, slipping on the ice.

Then counting the sheep and falling to sleep.

I am certain if you found a person to do the drawings; the book would do well.

Thank you for sharing.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Kids you got to love em.
This little kid hears a noise and lays there pondering what it could be.
I get this mental picture of him with the blanket pulled up just below his eyes. Staring from side to side. His eyes as big as half dollars.

Finally, after investigating and imagination going wild he finds out it was nothing harmful after all.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us that we have a part in this world and how it turns.
We, as individuals, can be down right mean and nasty.
We, as individuals, can be kind and loving to others.
Which will you be?
Like the saying goes 'It takes all kinds'.
A man can choose which way he will walk this path of life.
Sometimes there are things that he must do, he rather not do.

BEST PART:

It doesnt' take a thousand men
It only takes just one,
To sit and read with his sweet boy
And say I love you Son.


Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Remember When  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Some of us sit and wonder what happened to love. You know the kind that lasts for years and years. You know like a couple who seem to complete each other's thoughts.

Well, you'll be as relieved as I am to realize there are still some around.
Here we have a couple so in love that each and every day is considered a blessing.

Those first magic feelings still come crashing back even today. How fortunate and blessed they are.
You know the nights they sit on the front porch must put a big smile on that silver moons face.

Thanks for a bit of hope this day.




Yellow
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Review of Make Me Care  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We all know how rough school can be. All the little groups of the best of the best and the rest of the rest.
Well we have a heart broken just because he crossed that line.
She laughed at him for asking.
He felt a bit of a anger as they laughed.
Sometimes in a moment like this a young person might start growing up.
They might realize that being rude and mean isn't the way to go.
That possibly that young person might be missing out on a good good friend.
She'll never know now.
The distance between them will always be vast.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


Yellow
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Review of Unintelligent  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Lets look for a moment at the situation this author is in.
For some reason this author thinks that the work put forth is no good.
How could she have got that idea?
Could it be the author ran up against one of those highly critical reviewers who found absolutely nothing good about the work?
That's all it takes sometimes to make an author feel why bother.
Unfortunately, because the writing isn't "any good" thoughts come to mind that nothing else is.
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Lets look at this same author if there had been someone to help and encourage rather than tare apart.
We, as authors, put so much into our work. To have some show some consideration of that point means a lot. Trashing something doesn't help anyone.
There has to be something good to mention.
Think if it were you?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Scared  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.

A single mother looks in the eyes of her trusting innocent baby.
She sees peace there and no time for hurt yet.
She knows one day, though, the world will start taking it's toll on her child.
We learn, as much as we wish we didn't, that life will harden us through trials.

We all wish we could keep them safe and sheltered from the bad things of life but we can't.

Thank you for sharing and bringing some reality along the way.


Yellow
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Review of Oh Life!  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our character searches and tries to reach that land of peace.
Becoming discouraged because reaching it seems impossible.
To the point of giving up and resigning to the fact that it is merely a mirage.
Ready to lay down from grief.
Feeling life has let our character down.

The secret all the time was true inner peace can only be found in love of life.
Living life as it is a blessed gift and to be appreciated.
For Pete Sake people open your eyes and hearts and you will find life waiting for you.
Thank you for sharing and caring.

Yellow
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Review of Night and Day  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Talk about a happy -pick-me-up on a cold winters night.
This is a happy piece, a feel good piece.
Two people find each other.
Sure they are different but something makes them click.
They share and care and enjoy all life seems to offer and more.
How can reading a piece like this make any one continue to have the blues.
Thank you for the spark of good spirit this evening.



Yellow
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Review of Once  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A dream.
A desire.
A heartfelt silent plea.
To know what it feels like to be with the one you love.
In the back of your mind you think; if just once to be fulfilled would be all needed.
Oh, but that's not true.
Like fine chocolate; one taste is not enough.
One moment in time is not enough; there must be more.

There is tenderness here.
Certainty it will happen.
Love for the magic that is to be had.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Final Verse  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author points out how without poets the words would stop.
To speak freely and openly is our right.
There will never be a final verse as long as our pen moves along.
So take heart those looking for perfection cause that is rarely reached but finding a connection with others is the real sense of victory.
A simple word to one might mean the world to another.

Thank you for sharing.




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Review of A Fake Smile  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author reminds us that there are all sorts of emotions going on inside our bodies. Some not so pleasant.
The object of the piece is to remind us to reign in on those negative and hurtful emotions.
Even putting on a fake smile can serve a good situation.

Live with patience and dignity. Maybe even turn a cheek or two. Most of all be the better person.
The anger inside will go away but harsh words can't be taken back.

Thank you for sharing.




Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


I bet if we all would be honest we'd all feel like days seem to just run into the same old thing.
We find our excitement gone and not much to dream about.
Sure we all get down but some find a way to fight their way back up.
Life isn't easy and isn't measured by what we do but how we do.
Who we do and who we make feel important.
Sharing out faith in God and walking his path.

We become stronger and our character grows the more we found WE CAN KEEP THOSE FEET GOING ON AND ON.

Thank you for sharing and caring.
Yellow
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Review of Captive  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever loved someone and knew you would have to wait for them?

What about a love that isn't really yours but still you wait?

What about a love that brings more pain than anything else?

More than likely the wait would be forever; determined and held captive with invisible chains.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Waves of Static  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It starts out a night with an impending snow storm on it's way.

The TV soon turns to static. The phones won't let you dial out.

As the snow collects it takes down some electrical poles.

Now there is no electricity and house becomes more and more cold.

All they want is the static now.

Some warmth.

Sure makes a person appreciate what they have.

Once it's gone, you are going down stream without a paddle.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Stains of Red  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Growing up in an abusive house is hard on the kids.

They don't forget the pain and yelling they hear.

These children hide in the closet when they hear him come through the door.

The drinking and hitting their mom will stop soon.

Then the man moves on to another bar or where ever.

The children go down to check on their badly hurt mom.

They are young but are becoming more and more afraid. They see blood this time. Just imagine how they feel.

For Pete sake where are the neighbors?

What if you needed help, wouldn't you want someone to step up to the plate!!

Thank you for sharing.

Hopefully this piece will help others.
Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece takes a look at how time passes before you know it.

When young, you have limitless possibilities.

When midlife hits, you have a bit of regret that those dreams where put in a drawer.

Then as a older person, you wonder where the time went.

Sometimes you might even feel you have wasted the time you were given.

But did you leave good memories with your loved ones?

Will they remember you in the soft gentle breeze of a summer evening?

Will they remember the guidance you gave from love?

Most of all, will they hear you say you love them in the quiet of the night?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
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A woman meets a man on the dance floor.

She begins to warn him about falling for her.

She is complex and has been hurt badly.

She leaves broken hearted men in her wake.

She doesn't appear to be regretful either.

She knows he needs a soft hearted woman that will love him back but that's not her.

She is cold, stormy, vast as the ocean, a nor' easter on two legs.

She urges him to back off for his own good.

She holds to much pain to find a place to keep love.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow


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Review of Dead Men's Bones  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
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Our author reminds us that death is a fact of life.

It will come in many forms.

It will take who it chooses.

The bodies all end up underground.

There is no way to fight it or escape it.

When it's your time that's it.

Some loose their life in war; at least they can't be hurt anymore.

Even children go this way, underground to stay.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A woman meets a man on the dance floor.

She begins to warn him about falling for her.

She is complex and has been hurt badly.

She leaves broken hearted men in her wake.

She doesn't appear to be regretful either.

She knows he needs a soft hearted woman that will love him back but that's not her.

She is cold, stormy, vast as the ocean, a nor' easter on two legs.

She urges him to back off for his own good.

She holds to pain to find a place to keep love.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is a young girl and life has dished out a lot of pain and disappointment.

She is beginning to pull away and apparently a friend is noticing.

It shows in her eyes.

As time passes the girl becomes hardened to the world and isolates herself from others because of lack of trust.

She is angry inside and bitter at the things she has seen and heard.

She cries inside and the other person that understands her is her friend.

The friend is trying to reach the girl with comfort and genuine concern.

Caring by showing that there is a hug available and a kiss to warm her cold cold heart, listening ears and a shoulder to cry on.

Thank you for sharing.
Very good piece.
Full of emotions.

Yellow
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Review of Rendezvous  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.



A sweet and tender piece.

They meet for their special time together.

They are in their secret place.

Their love will soon transform it into a magical place where their love will bloom.

It is precious, this time they share, and goes way to soon.

As they part they know that when night falls, their hearts will carry the memory in their dreams.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Come Home...  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What an adorable tribute to WDC.

The balloons says it's party time.

The little bear says peek-a-boo.

As far as feeling this site is a home away from home; so many of us feel the same way.

The font colors just add to the piece.

Finding the most precious thing, friendship.

Thank you for sharing.
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


I LIKE THIS.

Imagine a friend, lets say, who seems lost and alone.
What would you do? You would offer that friend encouragement.

Suppose this friend told you that their heart has given up.
What would you do? Wouldn't you reassure them they are important and loved by many and that there is so much living to do.

During this talk and act of kindness; your friend seemed to feel less confused. Even felt a bit of value and even that the friend could contribute.

Now, how could the friend repay this new found gratitude.
That's what is so special about friendship, repay doesn't come into the equation.

It is done out of love and concern.

Could one always remember when the darkness was all around, there was a voice that lead to the light?

Thank you for sharing and caring.




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