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Review of Yancy Please  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is a writer and having a bit of writers block. She is having a heart to heart with her main character. Placing 90 percent of the blame on the character and putting a guilt trip on him as well.
Apparently there are many chapters to be written and the character, himself, needs some more work. Just a good example of how we create and develop.

Not bad for such a short word limit.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of In My Dreams  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we find a dream segment that illustrates changes. The various colors indicate that vast amount of changes are coming soon.

The couple start out wearing white and soon create a magical world of their own. Colors as they want them, where they want them, and so very happy.

They don't care about anyone else in the whole world. This is their world they are creating and that's all that matters.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of I Dare  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Love is funny sometimes. It will sneak up on you and completely invade your every thought.

Here we have a poem of love that simply had to be written by it's author.

The feelings needed to be shared. Taking such a gamble takes courage but most of all the deep desire to capture the persons heart.

What words would do it? Which desires should be expressed? Will the longing come jumping off the page? Then, more than anything, will the serenity be felt? Love isn't a boastful pledge but a gentle reach into her heart.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a young woman being held. She isn't sure why. She meets with what she thinks is a lawyer but she falls.

She can't continue her talk with him to find out anything because the guard comes in assuming the worst of her.

I don't know much about this kind of stuff but nothing was mentioned of a phone call.

She hasn't seen her charges she is being held for.
She is being treated like she is a threat to others.

Frankly, the whole scene seems unjust.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


While on stage, entertaining sick children, our character began to feel things he never felt before.

There she was a bright sight for sore eyes. How could he tell her how he felt?

She felt the same way. Young love is intense and new and hard to talk about.
She goes to a friend, the friend of all friends for our character.

Secrets are exchanged and she takes on the roll willingly and with love.

From then on, our character brought hope and joy to others and his partner of love was right by his side.

This is about love, devotion, compassion and friendship from two hearts the size of a mountains.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review of Wild Fire  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What and inspirational and motivational piece.

Full of spit and vinegar, as my grandma would say.

Talk about a piece full of positives.

Each line seems to encourage us and let us know there are benefits to writing those words we might struggle for.

Once we begin and the words begin to turn into magic, if you will, it will be picked up by the reader.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece about the economy and how it is manipulated to serve the big guy.
I believe a long time ago they would called it the old switch-a-roo.

You start out with one in charge with your debt and they soon sell it to someone else.

You better believe they make a boat load of money under the table.

We can't say no cause our debt is too big and they think we are too stupid to see.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This piece gives us the dogs point of view.
This is a female dog about 10 years old and eager for her daily walk.

There are two people in to the home to do the walk. The man hurries to get the dog walk over. The lady,on the other hand,takes her time.

It seems the dog gets frustrated with all the waiting but when the front door opens, she dances on her old legs from joy.

Next they end up at the park and can spend as much time as she wants. The dog likes that most of all.
It takes a while getting there but staying is the real joy.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Red Cadillac  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She was on a mission of sorts on this particular day.

She parked her red caddy and walked down a path. The trees were blowing and it was time for her and her lover to part.

She had kept him with her for so many years but time has taken it's toll.

She had to make sure he would be happy once she left. Finding the right spot was her desire.

It's funny how love can last for so long that separation is hard to think of.

She was getting too old and she new it. Before her final days she must look after his needs.

This is a sad piece but a touching one as well.
They will be together again one day in a better place.

Thank you for sharing this piece with others.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


The author brings us a bit of motivation this day. Don't let things get you down. Get right back up and keep going.

Everybody has problems and sometimes we feel they might just get the best of us.
Turn that negative attitude into some positive thinking.

If everyone looked at things a little different, this world would be a better happier place.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review of A Psalm  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a person who tried to do the right thing. Before long it all got turned around with temptation of the flesh confusing her thoughts.

Our character feels damaged and in a fight for survival. Those that lead her the wrong way are still at the door.

With faith our character knows that God is watching. She knows God will help her back on the right path.

God loves His children and only ask that they turn to Him.
With prayer, God is right beside again. Leading the way Home. Healing the heart and soul.

Thank you for sharing and caring.



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Review of Clouds  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Remember those days when young laying on the grass and watching the clouds roll by.

As long as you had a buddy there to exchange ideas of what shapes they were everything was perfect.

Spending time playing a game about who could guess the fastest. Maybe count how long they will stay within view.

Grown ups can still do that you know.

Pleasant piece. Brings out good memories.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


All she wanted was to eat in peace.
Her puppy, however, wanted to help her eat.

She tried to enjoy her meal once she put it outside but the puppy made a mess digging just to distract her.

He might have been young but he was working her good.
He managed to get part of that sandwich and must have felt victorious.

She just wanted him to lick up any left over mess.

Thank you for sharing this cute piece.

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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Kids you got to love them.

This is cute and when the little one passed the gas his response was priceless.
In fact, I bet there are some older guys that use that same excuse. Ha!

We know during diaper changing time it's battle conditions.
Shots fired here there and everywhere.
Usually it's mom or dad who suffers the blow.
This time, it backfired. (LOVE IT)

Thanks for sharing and the laughs.

Yellow
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Review of Reject  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He fell in love and all seemed magic for a while.
Then there was a distance.

Soon his friend was taking his place with her.
How could she through everything away so easily?
Did she mean what she said or was she just playing with his heart?

He gave her all he had including his soul.
The vision full of tomorrows was cherished by him.

Now, alone again. He learned from this experience.
You got to be open for love to reach the heights and the trip is worth it.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of HALLOWEEN  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a piece about Halloween.

They are every where. Faces under masks to share the bageeeberss out of people.

Trick or treat is the name of the game. Candy found at every door.

By the time the evening is over the kids will be ready for bed and the parents will be dragging their feet. Walking and more walking.

Thank goodness, it's only once a year.

Thank you for sharing.
I WON'T SOME CANDY!!!


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a thought to ponder this lovely day.
Just what does poetry bring to the table.

So many emotions can be displayed in the piece.
All the way from love to hate and everything in between.

The purpose is to reach the reader and make them feel as well.
To tap into their very nerves and find a reaction spill out.

We want them to come back and read again while looking for the meaning.

We want them to remember the piece and perhaps relate to the image brought by the author.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Why Smile?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us an important piece this beautiful Sunday.
The fact that a smile can make a difference.
Turning a frown upside down is the best thing that can happen to a person who can't seem to find a reason to smile.
Let them know they are loved. Let them know they matter.
Start with that one smile and watch as that one seed of happiness begins to grow.

Thank you for sharing and caring.

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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


First of all the title is perfect.

The piece shows how a writers mind will drift from idea to idea.

The idea will come and our minds will run with it and before you know it another gets in the way.

Our author is doubting whether that great idea will surface.

The last thought is mice in charge of the world.
(IN MY OPINION, THEY MIGHT DO A BETTER JOB THAN POLITICIANS) Ha!

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Not Even One  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Granny is getting old but still active.
She put the cookies on and then fell asleep.

Well, that didn't turn out to good.
The firemen tried to save the house but no luck there.
Granny was ok to cook another day.

To the sorrow of our character the firemen couldn't save one burnt cookie.

Funny thing is I like those chocolate cookies a bit burnt as well.

Thank you for sharing and a laugh.


Yellow
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Review of CANT SHED A TEAR!  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Have you ever been really hurt and know that what was is over? Naturally your going to cry.

After all crying helps the healing process.

In this piece we have a woman who has cried until she feels she can't cry any longer.

Perhaps many of us have been there too.

We feel depressed and a bit empty. We miss what was and know it is not coming back. Perhaps the relationship was toxic.

She feels the tears are a bay now and it is a sign to get on with her life.

She is smart and has courage and will make it just fine.

A broken heart just might leave the door open for a loving heart to come.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of The Scientist  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is weak and he couldn't care less.
He needs to keep messing with her to do his research.
She says things to him and wishes him to go to h--ll. He doesn't care. He feels the end justifies the means.
Then, a knock at the door.
Another specimen.

This is creepy only because it could very well be happening.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Moments  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here the author brings us moments at the beginning of the day. Watching her lover sleep but knowing soon enough the day will begin.

Each will go about the daily duties but right now she captures those precious moments. The serenity is hers. The smile is hers.

Will this moment be forgotten? No. There is the deep desire for the same moment again tomorrow.

Thank you for this touching piece.
A moment shared is a moment cherished.



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Review of Old Forge  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Lets suppose for a moment that we have an old forge. There is still a fire inside but it is missing the sledge and bellows. Those important things that allow it to create.

Now, lets look at a writer, stuck in writers block. Suppose the writer thinks he is too old to create any longer. Perhaps it has been a while but yet he has ideas inside but can't seem to get motivated enough to put them to pen.

He, like the forge, must use his skills. He must remember what he has inside. A burning that most writers have. A desire to create something to present. So he might be a bit rusty.
The forge is working but the sledge might be rusty as well.

Would a blacksmith give up on his craft? No.
A writer shouldn't either.

You got the right stuff, it's just hiding behind a wall. Eventually it will break free and flow like a waterfall.

Thank you for sharing.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She kept the child a secret and was ashamed to claim. Until one day beyond her control the baby went away.

To a Lord that would love her and make her a place.
She felt guilty and realized how wrong she had been. A complex issue to be sure but some thought needed to be given to the child.

She never will know the joy or that sweet little angels smile. The touch of the baby's hand holding her finger.
The bond that comes so easily between a newborn and a new mothers heart.

This is indeed sad.
Sometimes life hands some situations that a young person doesn't know how to deal with.
Sometimes society can be cruel and refuse to understand.
Think not to hard of the mother for she is being hard on herself already.




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