I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.
While on stage, entertaining sick children, our character began to feel things he never felt before.
There she was a bright sight for sore eyes. How could he tell her how he felt?
She felt the same way. Young love is intense and new and hard to talk about.
She goes to a friend, the friend of all friends for our character.
Secrets are exchanged and she takes on the roll willingly and with love.
From then on, our character brought hope and joy to others and his partner of love was right by his side.
This is about love, devotion, compassion and friendship from two hearts the size of a mountains.
Thank you for sharing and caring.