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Review of Betrayed  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She had a husband with a tendency for habits.

The smoking habit has been difficult to tackle.
So naturally he had to find something else to take the place of the smoking.

Well, he found one.

She found the evidence right in her own bed.
That's when she snapped.
She stopped that habit right then and there, permanently.

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Snow Day  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here the author catches the excitement of the snowfall.
So pretty during the night. Falling softly.

Then the children wake to find a wonderland.
Their minds going at race track speed.

So many things to do.
Building, fighting, making angels and racing down hill.

A lighthearted, feel good piece.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece as a tribute to WDC on its birthday.

Coming here has help her writing grow.
It has made her skin a bit thicker to take criticism.

A learning experience and a chance to share is what she hoped to find.
Well, she hit the jackpot.

We all have the same mindset here.
Help each other be all we can be.

Even if our help is barely negligible.
It all comes together to make her feel like this choice to join is such a good one.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a split up from a mans point of view.

Apparently she has had this on her mind for a long time.

The distance he felt.
The loneliness that surrounds him.
The lack of understanding as to what is wrong.

Could it be she just gave up?
Could it be there is someone else?

By the time she gets through with him, his confidence is in the tank.
She even packed his bags and had them ready.
No discussion period.

Oh and don't forget the parting look. If looks could write a book there would be a novel here.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Rugged  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is a cute.
Think of hair and how important it is to some men.
They will buy those rugs and wear them hoping no one will guess.

In this piece the man did all that he can to make his rug look good on his head.

He tugged and roughed it up a bit to make it look natural.

To his delight, those around did stare and made him feel quite the looker.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Valet Limerick  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a lighthearted piece about a Valet.

A hard working girl who gets good tips for parking cars.
Chips are her tips and she craves special sips of coffee.

Hopefully she buys some other fun things.
She might even play a game or two.

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Paper Flowers  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a motivational piece this evening.

Although it would be easy to stay locked in a safe walled enclosure to avoid hurt, would that be living?

So our character is dreaming as we all do.
When young the whole world is just waiting outside that door.
So step up to the plate. It's your life so go out and live it.

Fly high, walk in the sun, listen to the melody of the birds and breath the fresh air.

You can do anything with a positive attitude.
Don't let someone do your thinking for you.
If you stumble and fall, get back up and keep on going.

Thank you for sharing your work with others.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a sad piece about age.
In this piece the author references pages in a journal. They are faded and not taken seriously.
They carry the joy and sadness of another time and place. Does anyone really take the time to learn from these pages or are they merely waiting on the shelf.

One might look at this another way, as an elderly person.
Put aside, possibly in a home, alone with thoughts and memories that linger.
Will anyone bother to listen to the wisdom that lies within the person.

As the person slowly fades away with time, as does the journal, will anyone know what they have missed.
There might have been some information that changed their lives.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we see a shadow for what it is worth. Certainly not a companion as some might think.
In this piece it is silent but has evil intentions.

It holds its place throughout our lives and enjoys the site of us slowly growing older.
Growing older means we carry less importance and even, to an extent, become invisible.

The shadow is waiting for the day we surrender to death. We fade away like a shadow at the end of day and become a ghost in a misty haze.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a reminder of how the tiny seeds of nature brings us so much joy.
They wait, as we do, for the first glimpse of spring.

Sure it's been a cold winter but that leads to the warm hug of spring.

Oh and such loveliness.
Flowers and busy little leaves making their magic known.

Soon the valleys will be covered in those wild flowers. The warms breeze will carry the news.
Wake up little ones.
See natures glory and the intricate Masters tapestry.

Thank you for sharing this piece.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She is alone on this walk of life right now. There was a time when there were other loved ones with her but that has changed.

As she walks she reflects and is being watched by a tiny little chipmunk.

One might consider her strong and courageous as she climbs on and on because this journey is hard to face alone. Maybe she picked this journey or it was decided for her.

She must keep in her heart that she is never really alone.
The echoes of her loved ones with be heard in the mountains as she climbs toward the heavens.

Regardless, she keeps going. She finds the beauty of Gods creation. Also finding the beauty inside her.

Thank you for sharing this piece.


Yellow
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Review of Cool Dark Night  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


So many of us must be able to relate to this piece.

Being together with the one you love. It's nighttime and you wake. You just watch them in that peaceful state and take in every inch of that wonderful face.

The loved one is not aware you are watching.
Eventually they wake to find your eyes looking at them deep with love.

Oh, and then the tender reach of love that is just as much of a habit as that of breathing. The warmth, compassion, strength and reassurance that only the loved one can give.

Thank you for sharing this touching and loving piece.

Yellow
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Review of Where Did I Go?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


This is so touching. A elderly woman looks in the mirror and wonders.
She looks though old photos and wonders.
She shows her granddaughter the picture of her in her youth but the granddaughter wonders.
The woman understands that she will be remembered by those that love her the way she is.
The past is gone. The wrinkles are here but hugs are worth all the wrinkles in the world.

Thank you for sharing this sweet piece.
Out of the mouths of babes. Right?


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Review of Lonely  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Here we have a man doing some soul searching. He is so miserable living alone. Apparently they had been together for a long time. He made mistakes and didn't trust her. He restricted her with his constant demands.
Anyway a number of things sent her packing.
Well, he is so sorry and hopes to reach out to her.
Will it work?
Only time will tell.

By the way. Love that beautiful butterfly on your port.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of My Lost Love  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Don't we all remember our first love. A lot of the time it doesn't work out. So those wonderful memories linger surrounded by a blanket of 'what ifs'.

Here the character shares the desire to rekindle that first love if it should ever be possible.
He wants her to come back and give it a second chance. He even asks for God to help with this effort to reunite them.

Those things that reach us down to our core direct us to His power and love.

The font adds well to the piece.
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


He is alone because of mistakes he has made. When he finally remembers her. His first love. Like so much of his life he let her slip through his fingers. In his mind tonight he is really fighting to survive. He thinks of her and pictures the light she still brings to him in his darkest hours. He is struggling to reach her and her safety.
Although she cast a light for him she is hidden in the fog of life and carried away by the wind.
When he finally reaches the shore, looking up, his heart crashes because she is forever gone.

This is really good.
Reminds me of the old song by Against the Wind.



Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Isn't it wonderful to read about a couple that made it work? For fifty years they did all they had to do to make a strong foundation for their future and their loved ones.
The work was hard but so worthwhile.
The chance to share a loving smile with all those hearts brought together as one.
All in a circle of life and love that few have known.
Their example will be an inspiration for generations to come.

Thank you for the lovely and touching piece.



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Review of Im so broken</3  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


In this piece we find a woman writing a letter.
She knows she messed up so bad that it can't be fixed. That doesn't stop the feeling she still holds for her partner.
She understands an 'I'M SORRY' won't be enough to repair.
The mere thought of never holding this person again is more than can be dealt with.
The final entry is that she still feels love no matter what.

Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


We need to escape from our planet. There is another one found. We send some of our people there. A war breaks out and we defeat them.

Now, those of our species that have survived are on this new planet. What will happen now?

Were there others from the other species visiting on another unknown planet? Could they come back to claim there original planet again?

What about the fact that this planet can sustain life? What if it somehow effects our genetics.
What if we began to show signs of the former species and their powers.
Will the mixed people hide? Will the mixed people be a targets?
Or what if the mixture creates death?
What if the planet is now contaminated by mutant deadly beings?

Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review of Monsters  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


She tries to fight her demons yet they find a way in. It has been going on for a while and has her a bit beat down. All the garbage those demons tell her about her chances of seeing the light, is as worthless as an old worn out tire.

She isn't stupid and she knows about faith. She has fallen more than once and gotten right back up again.
So now, she is going pooh-pooh at them and shaking off the fear.
With Jesus as her inspirational guide, can't no one really get her down.

As our author reminds us, have faith in God and yourself. Use those Heavenly Words to help you find a way.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


It's New Years and everyone is celebrating. As our character drives along he sees a hitchhiker.
Gives him a ride. The hitcher claims to be Father time.
The driver goes for that and is excited about meeting him.
Apparently, the driver thinks Mr. Time is a celebrity.

The conversation is funny. Like they are in two different time zones. Neither understands the other. Then comes some Wacky Tabacky and all is lost.

Thanks for the laughs.

Good job clever story.



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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


As I read this funny thing all I could think about was part of our government.
Full of fruitcakes and totally consumed with nothing.

As our character finds one after another in the characters office; some of the insanity sounds really familiar in any office.
Fruitcakes a la mode driving down the white house road. Showing up for meetings and giving all the greetings.

Meaning absolutely nothing, twiddling their thumbs until lunch break. Agenda overflowing but nothing gets to going.

However there is Pork project hocked on to a bill that will take care of fruitcakes from now on. 4 out of 5 will be on permanent paid leave and the rest will take turns baking real fruitcakes.

Thanks for the laughs and for sharing.




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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


What a touching and inspirational piece for this evening.
How can any of us reading this feel any thing but humble and thankful?
When we think of the things God has blessed us with and then see someone so happy with his gifts; it really make you take a second look.
Of all those in the church that sees his wonders it is surely that young boy.
Give this touching piece a read or two. Find out something about yourself between the lines.

Thank you for sharing and caring.


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Review of A Picture Of Age  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a lighthearted piece about aging.

As he walks he sees himself in the mirror and for a short time he studies it. Time sure can change a person without them even being aware. We become so busy doing this and that or running here and there.

This man, however, has a different attitude than most. It's like years do your thing. Wrinkles comes from smiles. Grey hair just might make him more distinguished.

In other words, you can't fight it so why not be the best old person you can.
For sure, don't waist those last few years feeling sorry for yourself.

Find something to make you smile so you can add more lines to that interesting and wise face. Right?

Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Which path?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author brings us a piece to ponder this evening.
We are blessed with the ability to choose. Some follow the crowd and others find their own way.
The piece suggests that some of your friends and your Heavenly Father are guiding you to a path that will be a forever blessing. Others find a path more to their suiting.

Then the end leave us with a profound statement:

Please believe in God . . . eternity is a long time to be wrong!
*Cross1*


Thank you for sharing and caring about others.

Yellow
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