I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.
Our author brings us a sad piece about age.
In this piece the author references pages in a journal. They are faded and not taken seriously.
They carry the joy and sadness of another time and place. Does anyone really take the time to learn from these pages or are they merely waiting on the shelf.
One might look at this another way, as an elderly person.
Put aside, possibly in a home, alone with thoughts and memories that linger.
Will anyone bother to listen to the wisdom that lies within the person.
As the person slowly fades away with time, as does the journal, will anyone know what they have missed.
There might have been some information that changed their lives.
Thank you for sharing.