|Only one real mistake in second paragraph ( beforeToyah then) just forgot a space. A lot of people complain about passive voice, you have some examples here: to be stuck, was wedged, etc. Fact is, this is how people talk. I don't mind it. Just bringing it up in case it becomes a problem for you, you will know what they mean. One misspelled word over looked in the last sentence. (Freed) The story its self was cute and entertaining. Enjoying the writing is the purpose, its what counts and you accomplished that for me, just be aware of the other small stuff.